Anatra

As for the other stuff, I really appreciated the themes you worked with. That we can’t love ourselves as we should through our own eyes. We have to see us (and others) through God’s love, light, hope. That isn’t easy, but it’s worth it.

I liked the order, how you spliced poem and story together. It made it easy to read and follow.

@savannah_grace2009

Wow. That sixth story was dark, but I know it’s needed.

It’s sad how many people indulge in self harm just “trying to feel”, but since it looks “normal”, like tattoos, piercings, or extreme diets, other people don’t see it for what it is.

My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

This is a great idea! I often am in need of a little troubleshooting, but am not sure how to proceed.

@whalekeeper

*sees clean gesture drawing*

*is in bliss*

I have no experience in digital art, so I’m no help there. Love the proportion guide though. I need to do more of those…

I guess for design stuff, try to view…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ah! Hi, Lois! Your sister is intense. XD Alyona and Nadian are roughly her age, but the girls are homeschooled currently. They weren’t ready to attend another school. And they’re definitely behind her in grades. They do need developing, though.

Having the boys in the same first class sounds like a plan to me. @whalekeeper what do you think?

@savannah_grace2009

*Cracks knuckles*

First off, that sounds awesome.

Second, Thursday? That’s a pretty tight crunch, but you can do this. Right? Right.

I’ll read through and give what thoughts I have ect. and (if you’d like) typos/errors I catch. What type of accountability do you want? I can email you daily, you can email me, whatever you…[Read more]

@stephie

Basically what everyone has said. XD

But since I must have my own take documented..

I believe everyone it on a path either towards for away from God. Everyone is seeking the One that can fill the hole in their lives. If you have that, then you have a duty to share it. Similarly, if you believe others will actually face eternal doom,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It looks like we’ll be at a church training thing this Saturday, so I probably won’t be able to join. That said, you’re welcome to send an email link, and if I happen to be free I’ll bounce on.

@hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator

It is being attempted. *cracks knuckles*

@liberty

Ah, your moodbard is beautiful! You did a fantastic job! I’m curious about this fellow. Is he a protagonist?

Whatever tips I have may be irrelevant since I can see them in your work already. Basically, look for coordinating colors and moods between pictures, and play with a style until you feel like it fits the character. Also, choose…[Read more]

@raxforge @loopylin

*Splutter of laughter*

Fish person? How is Syph like a fish person, pray tell?

Syph

So he didn’t have to “get a girl”, whatever that meant. He turned to give Ellie a grateful smile before shifting narrowed eyes to the Rax Boy.

What was that supposed to mean? A good natured challenge, or a patronizing ‘let the Little…[Read more]

@raxforge

Oh gracious. XD

What kind of trouble?

@loopylin @raxforge

Syph

He had to what? He blinked at Eddie. A dark blue flush crept up his neck. Water droplets appeared and disappeared in the air around him.

“Oh. Guppies. For a dance? But I don’t know of any other spritelings to pair with. It could take an indefinite amount of time to even find someone who wouldn’t be—oh tadpoles—…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I sympathize with the soundtrack issue. I imagine scenes and plot points behind almost any instrumental song. But when it’s from Apollo 13, which I have never watched… I’m not perfectly comfortable just connecting the two. And of course it fells awkward to explain to people. XD

Like, no. My book has nothing to do with Lord of the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

LOl! It is kinds my profile here too, so I might have to apologize for being confusing. XD

CWW has some good memories though…

I can totally see that in your writing. For some reason that sentence just sounded a lot like some of the shorter snippets I’ve read from you.

Really? Now I’m curious. XD I’m always interested in how my w…[Read more]

@loopylin

Aw, I forgot Marcel was taking Ellie. I don’t know how. I love a good friend dynamic. Those two are so cute.

@esther-c

The P.S. is beautiful. It closes out the letter (and story) in a satisfying, simple end. In my opinion, very good.

@loopylin @raxforge

Syph

Ball room? He’s seen something, a large sign on his way to school. But now, that had said Ball Pit. Surely they weren’t the same thing. How was one supposed to dance in a ball room?

Wildly. He could do that.

“Tonight. Oi, that is agreeable.”

Although he’s have to find this Room of Balls too. The misty whisp tightened…[Read more]

@loopylin

That sounds like an insane amount of fun. XD

My experience is just jumping around the house to Celtic music with my siblings.

@whalekeeper

Aww, thank you! *He turns bright blue and bows*

The water Sprites dance is like what you’d get if you mixed ballet and Irish folk/cog dancing, with the added effects of water swirls following their every command. They move the water, and the water moves them.

By the way, Syph has no problem dancing with girls. He just is trying to understand how it would work if you weren’t in competition.