Alia

@rochellaine Sounds very intriguing… Spies. 😀

@seekjustice The spy museum had lots of really cool spy gadgets that felt like they were right out of James Bond. 😀  There was a glove pistol, and umbrella gun, a bugged shoe (radio in the heel) and stuff like that.  Also a lot of stories of spies.  There was one guy who created a whole fake spy network, fooling the enemy into thinking it was re…[Read more]

I’ll probably be on til 10 something EST

@jenwriter17 Okay. 🙂
@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia @dekreel @valtmy I’m writing now.
Also last Wednesday was my first Kapeeferversary. *throws feathers* I’ve been on here a year. 😀

@catwing I can’t come on right now, but I was planning on doing your poll thing soon. 🙂

@seekjustice @jenwriter17 @alia @valtmy @rochellaine I am writing my book!
Also I have a poll thingie on my blog if any of you guys wanta do you can. 🙂
Post link to find the poll. So you can see the blog and then play with the questions.

@valtmy

I’ll hunt down some books on that then, and set to work reading them while my beta readers finish off the document and I’ve already started doing some serious worldbuilding. I see that as my main things to tackle in the next draft 😀 Thanks for all your input!

@valtmy

I realise that 🙂 though things like the “Premier’s Bill” which Lang gets assassinated over, were things that really happened in Australia during the Depression (though no one was assassinated, as far as I know).

I definitely think that in order to do better worldbuilding for this story, I need to do some amount of study on economics and…[Read more]

@valtmy

The only thing I would say in rebuttal to what you’ve said in your comments though, is that I had quite heavily based the world on the world of the Great Depression. That’s part of the reason there’s such a divide between the rich and the poor and also in the technology. In the Great Depression, the people were living in a world that was…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Bye!

@seekjustice @valtmy

Sorry but I will have to leave now. Bye!

@jenwriter17 The hardest thing about this one is trying to bring it all together into something that effectively caps off the last two books.

@valtmy Most of it makes sense and a lot of it was said by another beta reader last week. Most of the main critiques have to do with my worldbuilding especially, which I know is pretty subpar.

@valtmy Yup! *bows*

@seekjustice That’s good; one of the things I struggle with most is creating an interesting plot that actually makes sense.

@jenwriter17

Its coming along slowly, but at least I have something that resembles a plot now.

@seekjustice Hello to you as well. 😉 How the third infinity book coming?

@jenwriter17 @valtmy

I’m still here, reading over Valtmy’s comments 🙂

@valtmy I’m on! Hi 😀

@seekjustice @valtmy @dekreel Who’s still on? I think I’ll be on reading Seekjustice’s book a while, but I may have to leave any minute. How is everyone?

@dekreel @seekjustice @valtmy I finished the post for tonight! So I’m going to bed now.