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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Heya, anyone around? I’m working on my novel before breakfast.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@epicaddie2 Yep, I think I figured it out now! Thanks muchly. 🙂
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Ingrid started the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
Okay, guys. I got brave and decided to share the prologue from the first draft of my fantasy novel, Substitute. Since it’s obviously the opening of the book, I want to know if you guys would keep reading. And please add grammar mistakes/rewording edits. I love your advice!!! 🙂
Here goes noth…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
No worries! That’s fine 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Sorry, I got frustrated and had to leave for a bit for a lunch/snack sort of thing. I know you’ve gone to bed, but okay…what did you want to say?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Hey! I’m writing. *Glowers at Justice* Come on, boy, just do what I tell you to!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
Don’t you hate when you can’t sing all the guys songs? I’m not a soprano, I’m quite low, but I still can’t sing the guy’s songs deep enough and it drives me crazy 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, you had recommended Sight and Sound, but I’d forgotten about it! I’d remembered it the other day, but couldn’t remember the name, so I was going to ask you! I just looked at their Jonah trailer and it does look really cool!
And on pop music, some people don’t feel that all of it is bad and I have Christian friends who still…[Read more]
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Jessi Rae replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine yeah, my dad is tired of me changing the scenes. Me too. XP bye!
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Catwing posted an update 8 years, 5 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong @jess-penrose @daughteroftheking
I’ve been thinking about changing the VR scene in the first two chapters. Perhaps to just a ‘playdate’ with them sword fighting (because I want to have sword knowledge before they go on their quest), obstacle course, or something like that.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira oooohh…
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Slowly… Trying to show more. But I may end up changing this scene.
@ariel-ashira Welcome! -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine @epicaddie2 @aislinn-mollisong @ingridrd @alia
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jess-penrose No, you haven’t told me about passive voice yet. 🙂
@seekjustice That’s good to know I’m not alone. 😀
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Catwing replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.
@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.
@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Comics in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@christi-Eaton There’s a manga series, Manga Classics that adapts classics into graphic novels. I’ve only read the Jungle Book and Les Miserables adaptions. They were pretty good.
Some of Ted Dekker’s books have been adapted into graphic novels.
There’s also comic collections like, Calvin and Hobbes, Peanuts, etc.
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Catwing replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Glad you like your final! 🙂
Now I just have to finish everyone else.
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Jessi Rae replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Oh, good. *sighs in relief* The Wiser isn’t dead. Thank you, @catwing! Or should I thank Kay? Or even the Wiser himself, for simply acting?
Anyway, this was great! As usual. 🙂
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I think that would be good. As long as it is clear what is going on, and maybe provides some insight into the characters personalities during the scenes, which would make it doubly useful.