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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Tag – @anna-brie
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Ok, so I wrote for half an hour to make up for it. I’m writing a poem for the comp and got 124 words written. I’m pretty please with that as poetry is not my “thing.” It does get easier the more I do it though.
And I’m sorry again. 🙁 I’ll try to do better tomorrow. Do you want to write 12-1? *I will remember* Let’s just blame @daeus. He’s…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
I’m so sorry @anna-brie. I forgot!!!! 😮 *cries really hard.* I got occupied with my sister’s school work and did a few jobs for mum and then realized that I’d missed. So very sorry. 🙁 *wails miserably*
I can write later if you want to write with me. *falls to the ground in desolation* **How could I forget?!?!?!?!** -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@anna-brie What about 4:15-4:45? If not 4:30 will be ok, but I might stop a bit before 5. Depends when we’re having tea.
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic I'm So Mad At Dickens!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Wow, I would not have expected that topic title from you. I was looking at it on the homepage wondering who it was while it loaded. My guess was Tessa or maaybeee Kate. Then it popped up and I went “Wow. What happened?”
Definite cautionary writing tale, though. Character arcs can’t be sudden, no matter which way they’re going. You’ll lose your readers.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@anna-brie Just letting you know that I won’t be able to write this afternoon as I’m out till 4pm. If you want to write after that, let me know. 🙂
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Thanks so much guys! 😀 I’m glad you liked it and I’ll make any changes that need to be made. 🙂
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@spradlin Awesome! 😀
I’m… not quite sure on the copyright thing. It was free clipart off google. -
Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@hope Huh. Mom watched the preview and seemed kind of annoyed by the enhanced romantic element. Maybe I’ll give it a try. 😛
Gathering Blue… was pretty good. It’s a different world. But the ending sort of derails a bit. It’s building up the mystery on one topic and then sort of plot-twists on another topic and doesn’t quite resolve.
Messenger I…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
344 Haha I beat!!!! 😛 *eats cookies* See what you’ve started me doing @daeus. I can’t stop eating cookies. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Wait up! *puff puff* I’m here. Ready. Set. *realizes you’ve already gone.* Goes.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Oooooh *excited whisper* cookie cookie cookie… I love da cookie…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
What they said @writefury. 🙂
And I love this— it’s a classic example of everything I cannot do. It’s simple but powerful, cute but touching, and above all lean and to the point. Excellent work!
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BlueJay started the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 10 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know if there are any of stop motions out there who are writers too, but even if you’re not, you’ll probably still enjoy this movie. This is one that I made last year for a competition. It is based on the series of books “The Kingdom Series” by Chuck Black. I hope you enjoy it. 😀
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jnaGaEBI9K0
Feel free to…[Read more]
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BlueJay started the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 10 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know if there are any of stop motions out there who are writers too, but even if you’re not, you’ll probably still enjoy this movie. This is one that I made last year for a competition. It is based and the series of books The Kingdom Series by Chuck Black. I hope you enjoy it. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@anna-brie Ok. I’ll be busy till 10 too. 😀 And I’ll be writing at 10:30 with @daeus if you want to join us for the half hour. (And we can make it an hour if you want to continue) 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
O wow! @writefury That is really good. I really do like it. I’m not very good at poetry, but I would fix or change anything. *Other people might think differently. 😛 *
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Rosey Mucklestone started the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Just me writing a poem.
A poem that… surprisingly fits my avatar. 😛
Anyway. Thoughts appreciated!New little sailboat
Painted and clean
With sails so white
And wood deck a sheen
It sits by the dock
Prepared to explore
Waves lap and call
For departure from shore
Brave little sailboat
Sets out at last
Taming the waves
Putting…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago
I’ll join you @writefury and @hannah-olsen I read way too fast. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago
I’ll join you @writefury and @hannah-olsen I read why to fast. 🙂
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