@aella
Active 8 years, 8 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The (Awesome) Summer Writing Club! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
What do you guys think about blogs? Do any of you have blogs?
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
Maybe the fact that their parents are missing has something to with their powers being looked down upon? Maybe the parents were once part of some government experiment to create enhanced peacekeepers that shut down due to complications. Maybe the effects of that experiment affected the kids … or maybe the kids were the experiment and none of…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Sure thing, @jess ! 🙂
I did alright … I discovered that most of my poem stinks and that editing is going to be harder than even I anticipated, but … that’s writing for ya. 😉
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Let’s go! Allons-y! 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
That worked out, actually, @jess . I had a few things to do myself. Are you ready to start now?
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Awesome, @jess ! You ready to start in 10 minutes, and write for about 30 minutes?
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Does anybody want to write in 15 minutes? (I have a few things to do first)
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
I’ll be sending them in once Mum has checked them so you’ll find out. Drummer Boy is one of them. @sarah-h
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Lessons from a recent revision. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
*shakes head* Promotion accepted, I guess.
The other day I posted a picture on twitter of my feet…I’d traced my veins I could see with a felted pen (I had a novella to rework and didn’t want to do it. It was only natural to turn my pen elsewhere) and got a reply ‘when you pick up a pen to write, but it’s all in vein’. I’m still not sure what I…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h I’m going to stop now. I wrote 447 words (I think.) 🙂 But I’ve run out of ideas. I was writing 100 words stories which were fun, though.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@spradlin‘s answer to everything, “Submit it” 🙂 *Grins*
I love writing poetry @overcomer, but I’m terrible at critiquing it. 🙁 Sorry. -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
I can got for an hour if you can. @sarah-h
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
I can got for an hour if you can?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h Please tell me that you are still writing????????? Cause I can write too!!!
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Snapper replied to the topic Howdy! in the forum Start HERE 10 years ago
*gasp* @hope YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! I’m not the only one! That is, the only one that writes from male POV…and I’m not the only one. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic To all and sundry in the forum Start HERE 10 years ago
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Howdy! in the forum Start HERE 10 years ago
Welcome, @luke-c! It’s the sad truth, @daeus is pretty much the only active writer on the male side here. Not sure how that happened… But as a female who tries to write from a male pov, it’s nice to be able to get input from other men and, anyway…here https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/men-verses-woman/ *thrusts link at you* Daeus has been a…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Lessons from a recent revision. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@Daeus I think the omniscient pov is one of the hardest to do. It can be done well but, like you said, it can be harder to create stronger characters. Another thing which can be hard and annoying if not done right in the omniscient view (I don’t know if your story does it or not; I just started…but some published books I’ve read do this) is the…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic To all and sundry in the forum Start HERE 10 years ago
A little late, but better late than never, so welcome, @Julia-r *Grins* *waves* cliches are fun…well, making fun of them is fun. I do that on my blog occasionally with the ‘real story’ of what villains or heroes really think. But it’s easier to make fun of them than to actually apply it in writing. 😉
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
Thanks for your advice and feedback, guys! I’ll look over my poem and tweak it and get back to you. 🙂
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