@acancello
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Esther replied to the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@acancello @smiley Oh and you guys did too, right?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @savannah_gracew2009 @trailblazer @beth-torres @acancello @calyhuge
I’m bored. What can we throw at our characters? A pack of wolves? Hungry Trolls? Ghosts? (I have no idea what creatures live in Lillen.)
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Kylie replied to the topic Well…hello again ;))) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@acancello Oooh! Cold! I love the cold! But that is cold for CA.
@rae I do! I play mandolin, piano, guitar, flute, drums, and uke! Do you play any??
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Kylie replied to the topic Well…hello again ;))) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@rae I’m not a huge fan of horses lol. So, that should never happen to me, however, my mom worked at a stable when I was younger and one of those horses bit me…it hurt! Lol.
@euodia-vision Hey! I’m doing alright, I can walk now and run and jump, my leg still hurts occasionally. But otherwise, I’m good! How’re you?
@acancello To be honest, I’m…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Hugo smiled, he liked to hear her laugh, he would do anything to hear it again.
THAT IS SO SWEET I LOVE IT!
Ottoline
“Elkie?” she burst out laughing. “Why?”
“It’s simple,” he shrugged. “Easy to remember.”
“Elkie,” she repeated. “Very creative, Hugo.”
“I can be creative if I want to be!” he protested.
“Give me one example,” she challenged.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Lol!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Microsoft Word or Google Docs?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@everyone
So, I just realized yesterday that I think I’m using something different… Microsoft Word Online? Is that what everyone else has? I think it’s free.
Gotcha! Yeah, I’ve seen your doc on that website before. It seems to work pretty well, I just think I would prefer seeing my page count in a document for a first…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
He pushed aside all her ideas and concentrated, “How about something like… I dunno… Elkie?”
I don’t know why that made me laugh, but I started cracking up and had to explain to my brothers what was so funny.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@acancello Goodnight!!
Ottoline
“I’m thinking Ever,” Ottoline patted her Elk’s neck. “You should name yours Aero.”
“Aero?” Hugo laughed. “That’s…just not for him.”
“Do you have any better ideas?” Ottoline challenged.
“No,” Hugo stammered, and then added quickly, “But give me a few minutes, and I’ll have one.”
“Sure,” Ottoline said sarcastically.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Aww that was so sweet!
Ottoline
“What are you going to name yours?” she asked Hugo, burying her small hands in her elk’s rose fur.
“I don’t know, probably Hugo Junior.”
“That is so boring,” she laughed. “And what if its a girl?”
“Then Ottoline Junior, obviously!”
“Why not something like…Willow? Or Ivy? Or Nimrod?” she smiled.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@acancello We should transition to riding the elk, as much as I want to keep doing our Hottoline scenes…
Ottoline
She approached the large elk, with a sense of awe. This animal was huge…it could trample her in a moment…but it didn’t. It just stood there, eyeing her curiously. She reached out to touch it’s soft muzzle, and it’s warm breath…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Thank you! That’s something that sounds neat to try. I’ll work on it!
It does help…thanks girl! <3
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Putting last names together! XD, my big brother did that when he found out who my crush was!
This scene is sooooooooo sweet!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Aww it’s so sweet! I LOVE IT!
And the “Ottoline Walton” line was SOOO something Marcurious would say…you nailed it!
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hybridlore started the topic Microsoft Word or Google Docs?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Hey everyone! Just curious–which do you prefer for your writing, and why? (And if use use another program, what is it?)
I used to use Google Docs, but when I started writing again I switched to Word. I don’t like how laggy Docs gets, but Word disappoints me sometimes. Mainly because I’ll leave comments and they disappear, and it only saves your…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
So I struggle a LOT with doubting myself when I write. Especially with fear. I know that even the best authors get rejected, sometimes hundreds of times, but that doesn’t make me feel better. I don’t want to go through getting rejected, I don’t want to have to face all the hard spots. People will tell me that my writing is beautiful, but it’s har…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I know. I was only mostly joking.
I think @acancello needs to make Hugo talk to Ottoline, and @rae might need to do a transition scene? Idk.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I will!!! I love them so much <3
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Cloaked Mystery posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @rae @acancello @keilah-h @beth-torres @calyhuge @trailblazer @esther-c (I think that’s all of our Character Party crew.)
I’m considering undertaking an illustration (or individual illustrations) of all our characters. Could everyone supply me with as much information as possible about their cha…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
This is all I’ve written in the next chapter:
The next morning, Lilitu walked out of his room, wearing actual clothes this time.
He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw Sef sleeping on the couch. Then all the memories from last night came rushing back. Why was she here? What had happened? Where were his parents?
Sef’s green hair f…
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Ottoline has blonde hair that can appear pink depending on the lighting, and light pink eyes. She has a dark red beanie, and various scars on her arms. Umm she wears neutral colors I guess, like tans, greens, etc. (she’s my pfp, but you probably already knew that XD)
Okay. What types of clothing does she wear?
I really don’t know XD I guess I need to do some more worldbuilding! I see her as wearing a tan tee-shirt and some kind of leggings, but idk. Sorry! You can just draw her like that for now, I guess?
Okay.
No, he does not.
How big is his sword? And what does it look like?
Let’s see…
(Hope that works)
Its proportions are similar to that. It’s about 4’… 4”? Maybe? Long.
I’ll get some more detailed descriptions later.
Nahim has the red eyes ofc. Then pitch black hair contrasted to pale skin. His jawline and chin are kinda square. As far as clothes, in normal clothing probably grey or black Realn-style shirts with stiff collars. Pants are durable and easy to move in. Will sketch.
As far as armor goes, I’ll try to send some pics your way Tues Or Wed. Can’t…[Read more]
Alright, great!
I think you said Nora’s armor is blue, red, and white. What color is Nahim’s?
Nahim’s is a grey/black with carton like lightning bolts of bright yellow centers and almost orange outlines.
When I get the chance, the watercolor shows you that stuff.
He also has many armor markings…I tried to explain them, and I accidentally deleted it so, I’ll sketch them. I would wait a little to draw him, he’s kinda complicated.
I got a notification, so I saw it. Am I right in thinking that his weapons are on the right side and the pad where he gives commands to his armor is on the left?
Oh, and what shape are the crystal swords? Are they shaped like a normal blade, or is the blade more jagged and rock-like in shape?
Shaped normally. His is the style that can both slice and puncture.
As far as sides go, Nahim is skilled with a sword with both his left and his right, though prefers his right. Yes, he would hang it usually on the right but sometimes it is on the left. His holster is on the right, and set to be out of the way.
As far as commands go… He usually…[Read more]
Yeah, I get it.
Kari is 5’4″, slender, and fair-skinned. Her blond hair reaches just past her shoulders, and her eyes are a deep blue. She has delicate facial features (slim nose, thinner lips). She often wears jeans (at least during the colder months), with a plain shirt in either forest green, or lavender, or gray. Usually she’ll have a cardigan over that, too.…[Read more]
Carrie is thin and pale with lots of freckles on her face. She has very dark brown short, curly hair and dark brown eyes.
She wears dark colors. I’ll sketch a picture of her outfit tomorrow.
Snake’s name is tiny bit misleading lol. He has normal human body proportions I think. His tail is a bit longer than his legs, and his wings are one and a half times his armspan (but I’m assuming you’d draw them folded, unless he’s flying.)
For a reference picture…I could post one on the chat, because I wouldn’t trust what the internet has done…[Read more]
He also has prominent spikes on his neck and back. I’ll post some pictures of him and other Icewraiths soon.
So he’s basically a human, but more than twice as large, and with wings, a tail, and claws?
Yep, and talons for feet.
Oh, and his wings and tail are a pale teal color. His wings have a few dark green, tiger-like stripes close to where they connect to the body. His tail also has a few of those markings toward the end, and there are six small spikes on the tip–three on each side.
Here’s Hugo’s description..
Hugo is 5 ft 7in tall. Dark brown basically black shaggy hair (The length Grcr did is good) His dark brown eyes are kind of teasing and his face is usually pretty smug.
He can either be wearing a beanie or a backwards baseball cap, whatever’s easier. For shoes, he’s wearing black and white checkered Vans
His outfit…[Read more]
Ok let’s see, um…
So Amir has short, messy, brown hair; hazel (mostly green) eyes; a half-smile/crooked smile; tea colored skin; and soft facial features. I’ll post a pic of his clothing with a few extra details in just a minute. He stands about 5’ 6’’. I think that’s it. Let me know if that’s enough information. (: