@acancello
Active 1 year, 12 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
Hmm I would find a reference for basic anatomy. You don’t have to have great anatomy to draw but I think it really helps. Even getting the legs the right length and the arms the right length can make a big difference.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@anyone-stalking-the-forums
LILITU!!! AHHHH
Sef was pulled from her sleep with a touch on her arm.
She flinched and pulled back, retreating deeper into the covers.
“Sef, it’s only me,” she heard Indie’s voice.
She dared to peek out from her cocoon.
Her pain had diminished immensely, though her knee still throbbed.
The thought that haunted…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, I’m more of a math person, but I have my fair share of science knowledge, though more in physics than chemistry. I do know a little bit about the different shell structures though, and how that leads to the different global behaviors of a substance. Never mind a good rant though.
I’m just thinking if there may be some way to think…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum Roleplays 2 years, 8 months ago
Btw, should we have them all arrive in different places? I kind of prefer that to having them arrive at the exact same place.
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Lukas
Lukas chuckled at Xandro’s goofing off. “Yeah, buddy. If you behave, I’ll pay for you. Maybe I’ll get you an ice cream or something.”
Xandro nodded.
“Wait, no, not an ice cream,” Lukas said, his eyes wide. He cast a worried side glance towards Liv, holding back a laugh. “Alright, how about we go to that diner down…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
So have you worked out the themes of each column? You just said there’s a theme of each column, but then talked about the theme of the rows.
I don’t have all the themes decided upon yet. There should be 10 eventually, and I probably have 6 or so right now.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum Roleplays 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, sure. I probably won’t be on again until later tonight, so just don’t get going too far without me. 😉
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
The issue I would say about using all 29 would be the same debate of how many digits there are in a number system. More digits means more compact information, but it also means more informational storage is needed (you need to remember it all).
29 different metals all with completely unique sets of powers, even if they are…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
This sounds pretty cool!
The issue I would say about using all 29 would be the same debate of how many digits there are in a number system. More digits means more compact information, but it also means more informational storage is needed (you need to remember it all).
29 different metals all with completely unique sets of powers, even…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
aww thanks!! 😊💛
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Ok! I’ll have to check it out.
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Esther replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Aww, Sef!!! 😭
Girllll, whyyy??
You wrote this so well though. And I love Lilitu. 😁 But I’ve probably told you that already. 😂
Oh my goodness, I love your signature. 🥰
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
They look really good! (I don’t think anything looks particularly wrong with Flaz)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
I decided to draw the five MCs in my novel. Here it is! 😊💛💛
(ignore how strange Flazzy’s face/posture turned out. I don’t know why I drew him on his bad side…)

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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Guys…sorry I know this is kind of a long segment…so just ignore this if you don’t have time!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
And then a bad guy POV….
SPOILER ALERT–Iver’s actually not real-real. He’s actually a Pythonos in disguise. Pythonos that use Dark Magick to take the form of other people are called Weavers. Anyways…
The Weaver awoke from his drunken state and beheld his disheveled apartment.
He closed his eyes and listened for the thrum of the girl’s h…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Okay…part TWO of the sad scene…
Lilitu walked briskly down the dimly lit streets, Sef’s emaciated form in his arms.
Though his foot pained him, he could barely feel it now.
His body thrummed with adrenaline.
She was so weightless….his stomach turned. He could feel every bon…
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