Allison

@whalekeeper lol thanks

@rae aww your Toothless profile pic is so cute!

@freedomwriter76

😭😭😭

@esther-c

I like it!! Can’t wait to read more!!

I really like this, lol:

“Nine dreks! Ev, you didn’t have to I—”

“Ah, ah, ah! I already did. Eat it and be grateful.” He flashed her a smile.

I also like Amidala.

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Ok, from here is my own opinion… you obviously don’t have to listen to me. 😊

The only thing that I thought I might menti…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thanks girl : ) You too! <3

@whalekeeper

Yeah, I think most people on here wonder that at some point. And I’m beginning to dread the same thoughts in my school circle, you know? The worst thing would be if you were the only person who cared in the first place.

Hmm… yeah. It’s super weird, you never know who will stick around. I was o…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Nope, Lilitu’s not in here.

@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009

Ariac

Ariac levelled his sword threateningly at the stranger.

“I’m going to make this very simple for you,” he said. “You will promise not to hurt any of us here. …Or I can kill you right now.”

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Ariac is bluffing of course, since he can’t deliberately kill.

@freedomwriter76 @jonas @rae

Sef

She closed her eyes, tremors shaking her small form.

She took a step back.

And another.

And then her back hit the wall.

She was trapped.

@esther-c

I love them! They’re so sweet! <3

@esther-c

I’ve never really heard of the MBTI stuff before KP and haven’t looked much into it…but it sounds cool!

Liv

She looked at Lukas. He was so caring…so-

She felt the tears coming again.

“What’s wrong?” he asked, looking into her eyes.

“I-I-” she tried to keep her voice from breaking. “I made so many friends here…and then I’ll…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!! Me too 😊😁

@savannah_grace2009

🤣 I love that!!!

Lukas is so loyal though. I just did the Myers-Brigg test on him and he’s an ISFJ-T. (I don’t know if you’re into MBTI types or not XD I just discovered them last year and they have been super helpful)

Lukas

He laughed, a laugh full of mirth. “True, but I… I think he’ll understand. He has Callie after all.…[Read more]

@esther-c

OH MY GOSH I LITERALLY SCREAMED AND HOPPED AROUND MY ROOM AND MY SIBLINGS WERE SO CONFUSED lol

Livia

“I-I’d like that,” she smiled at him, and then sighed, burying her face in her hands. “Fynn is never going to let us live this one down…”

@esther-c

I love him so much!!!

@hybridlore

Thanks!!

@esther-c

Love it! No big critiques. Can’t wait to read more!!

Alrighty!! The promised first two chapters! Any feedback is welcome 🙂

Chapter 1
“Wait a coup?”

“Shh, keep your voice down.”

“Hold on, start over.” Everton Barlowe stared down his older brother.

Asher sighed. “Did you not listen the first time?”

“I was stuck on the word ‘coup.’”

Another sigh. “Okay.” Asher tossed dark strands of hair off hi…[Read more]

Sorry if it’s a bit blurry

@savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-lol

Made another moodboard for Lukas just cuz… 😁

Oh and yes, Amir was.