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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@beth-torres @rae @trailblazer @esther-c
Ottoline
Marcurious scoffed. “What are last names? And why would you have to earn them? That’s stupid.”
“Marcurious!” Ottoline smacked his arm, giving him a warning glare.
“What?” Marcurious shrugged.
Before Marcurious could say anything stupider, a girl appeared
“Hello. I’m Alinetta Catherine Alimi…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@everyone
I’ll just pretend Sef showed up in Liv and Callie’s dorm (if that’s okay with everyone?).
I won’t make her show up now, maybe later?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Liv
“Of course,” she smiled. “Who else is in our room? I haven’t met many people…” she gasped as a plan took shape in her mind. “WE COULD PLAY TRUTH OR DARE!”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, so the Black Swan basically tries to rescue Sophie, and they’re the ones who created her. They are the ones leaving notes in her locker and notes in her room, etc etc.
The Neverseen are the people who kidnapped and tortured her and Dex. We still don’t really know why or what they’re trying to accomplish even in book 6…so I…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Huh. Yeah, KP can be weird sometimes 🤷♀️
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Mine were like that for a whole three months, but started working again all of a sudden.
@lightoverdarkness
Oh cool…I can kinda see it, but yeah I think yours is more detailed. Honestly I love your writing style better than Rick’s.
Aw 🤣
And hold up, Marcel is a demigod? I must hear more 🤩
He’s basically the secondary form…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@evelyn-collins me too. That would make her about six inches shorter than him.
Apparently I got my math wrong, too, and he’s 193 centimeters, not 183….lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@evelyn-collins I’d love to see it once you’re done.
How tall is she compared to him? (My Clone Wars guidebook says he’s 183 centimeters, or six feet four inches.)
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
We’ll pack em in like sardines XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m just going to RP Chase coming with my boys, but if anyone else wanted to be on the bus, that’s chill.
@rae @esther-c @godlyfantasy12
Calvin
The ride on the bus was nice and quiet. Chase sat slumped over between the two Baztian boys, still mostly unconscious.
Mars summoned a cloud puff and held it under Chase’s head like a pillow, even tho…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@evelyn-collins nice!!! Great job drawing.
Also, I love how she has a toothpick in her mouth, just like her dad.
You should draw them together next.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum Roleplays 2 years, 8 months ago
Snake
“I’m going to that castle. I’m going to see if I can find an answer as to why I’m here.” Carrie told him.
Snake nodded, looking over at the castle. “Good idea. Surely there are some inhabitants, and judging from the size of that castle, they’re humans like you.”
He lifted his wings and shot into the air, following as she wa…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I might use it as my reference image for if I ever draw her
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@evelyn-collins ah ok, makes sense! The first one sounds like the one I’d go with.
oh and the Bing AI came up with this when I asked it do draw a character matching Leo’s description. This drawing has tattoos on both arms, not just the left one, and looks kinda more like something out of a early 2000s, somewhat cringey Disney Channel rom-com than…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@evelyn-collins ha, we’re actually pretty close together then.
oh and question… I was reading your fanfic and came across this line:
“If she doesn’t have the force, how did you find her?” he [Rylan] asked.
“She is a special case,” Varian said distantly. “But I suppose that was plain to see.”
What did he mean by that, and how did he find her ex…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin ugh that happens…..
wings of fire book 13 blahhhh(Seriously though, the rest of series was good, and thought there was a bit of that stuff in the previous books so I really shoulda seen it coming, it was mostly in the form of jokes so I didn’t take it seriously)
So when I recommend the series, because it’s still…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 Inappropriate stuff?
Nothing I’ve seen that’s really bad. Worldbuilding wise, some things they say can get weird if you look too close at it……For example someone mentions “star and planetary alignments” in one sentence, but tbh that’s been so overused in so many fantasy stories, I shrugged it off, not really…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @rae She’s so pretty!! @trailblazer
Amir
Amir let out a nervous chuckle, his voice somehow cracking in the process. He cleared his throat and tried to stop tapping his finger against his leg. “Um, that’s j-just what w-we, uh, do.”
Marcurious still didn’t look convinced.
“Our, our names have meaning,” Amir explained, hi…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@evelyn-collins cool! I can’t wait to see what you come up with….
also I’m from Florida, but I can’t tell u specifically where lol
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Esther replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay…you’re talking about the Black Swan right? Or the Neverseen (have you met them yet?)
Umm… I think I’m talking about the Black Swan. XD
Spoilers: Black Swan=good guys, Neverseen=bad guys.
Ok… I think that makes a little more sense now.
Yeah, the love triangle….oh my gosh…the guy who was literally drooling over her made me c…
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