Allison

@rae wow…..

getting a little worked up there

However, I don’t blame you for not wanting to add him in if he’s that overpowered. My question is, how exactly do the characters in your story get close enough to beat him, if like you said there’s only one being (besides God) who can do it? Like I can see Alpha going there by himself to fight, but…[Read more]

oh, and thanks! I have a lot of really cool dragon ideas.

@evelyn-collins ah ok makes sense

so what canon events did happen? Like obviously Crosshair joined the Empire, the rest of the Batch are probably doing mercenary missions right now, etc….

So would you say this story happens in roughly season 1’s, 2’s, or 3’s place on the actual timeline? I’d go for 2 maybe if we absolutely had to quantify it,…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

And girl I’m so sorry 🥺 I know that must be so scary and overwhelming. I’m praying for you ❤ I wish I was better at saying encouraging things…but just know that you are loved and worthy of love no matter what. We love you, Min!! Don’t ever doubt that.

Thanks girl, you too. I love interacting with you here even if you’re…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ikr? He’s trying so hard to keep everything to himself. I mean he does go on long philosophical rants to his cat but that doesn’t really count lol

@loopylin

I’m so glad you want to read more! That makes me so happy thank! <3

@keilah-h

I’m so glad you like it thanks!

@trailblazer I don’t know much about this time period, but I really enjoyed it so far! It does draw you in.

I feel like it’s hard to have character development within one chapter, but I’d be interested to see where this goes! Please tag me if you post more ! 😉

@trailblazer

Hello! I’d love to give feedback! 🥰

1, does it draw you in and make you want to read more?

I drawn in by the character relationships! Knowing this is the first draft, I think it could be better if we jumped into the relationships before the historical events. I’ve read some classic his-fics (Johnny Tremain, five out of five stars),…[Read more]

@rae

I knew how Nar would be, though I also had never written her POV, but Jr is like…trying to describe the taste of mango without saying mango. Nearly impossible!

Relatable 😖 What helps me is to find some solid values and then play them out in an interesting way.

Not that I’ve written her much here, but Babs is a type 6 and wants security for h…[Read more]

@loopylin @rae

It’s official. Chase is a Disney princess.

YESSSS!

@rae

Yikes.

@rae

Okay, well to be fair, I have never seen Grathmere. Not in any RPs (for understandable reasons), nor anything from your WIP.

If he’s more powerful than the main villain of this RP, then we probably don’t want him in here 😅

@freed_and_redeemed

Ummm sorry I disappeared….

But I did see this post, just didn’t respond.

I have been praying for you and your Grandma and hope everything gets better <3

*hugs*

@esther-c

I am soooo sorry I just disappeared! I’ve been getting really busy…is there anything I need to be caught up on before I RP Liv again???

@loopylin

*tries to hide an undignified snort* hehehehehe

I’m still debating whether to add a villain and if so who to add… 🤔

@rae

Also, the “spies” don’t have to be good at spying. All they have to do is not let anyone find out that they’re evil.

@rae

Well, just because Grathmere would prefer to kill everyone doesn’t mean he would. For one thing, I doubt he could beat all of our characters, and for another, Koshtin (assuming he’s still in this RP) probably wouldn’t want that.

@keilah-h

Ah, that makes sense. I didn’t think about that.

I think his fragility will wax and wane XD Right now he’s strong.

@loopylin

I have no idea if any of my characters would like to write, but maybe they’ll chip in 😀