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@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVE IT

@rae @koshka @smiley @esther-c @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-lol

Now I have the full Riker scene 🥰👀✨

anyone wanna read??? 👀👀

His arms ached beneath the weight of the hefty wooden box; his fingers strained to keep a steady grip on the material.

Riker lifted the container onto a sturdy metal shelf; he pushed the large box back,…

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@esther-c

Girl!! I love your writing so much!! And yoir characters are always amazing

And you are really good at convos between characters

Also…I’M NOT THE ONLY ONE WRITING IN MY HEAR AS I SLEEP!!!OR TRY TO SLEEP LOL

Like seriously I’ll writing the most amazing scene in my head and then wake up and cry because “why isn’t it in the…[Read more]

@esther-c

*GASP* you should have a bunch of drama with Tyler and Hallie….like Hallie could like Tyler (and that’s why when he passes away it affects her so much) and it could distract her from God too, because she’s trying to impress him!

Or she might not actually like him, but she tells herself she does because everyone else likes someone and…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

It good to be back again

And thanks!! Honestly though I took a marvel break a little while ago and since then it’s been harder to get back into my fanfictions cause while I still love Marvel none of my fanfics are really interesting Mr

I think I’m actually enjoying taking characters from the comics that we haven’t seen yet…[Read more]

ohhh haha after all this time I am still tagging you by your old tag…oops

@freed_and_redeemed

@freedomwriter76

Aww thanks!!!!! That means a lot <3

@whalekeeper

Are the rubber bands the things that connect to your top bracket and your bottom band? because that’s what I have (though i can take mine out for eating and stuff). They hurt so bad and I hate them!

Braces just suck :/

@keilah-h

I’ve been mostly good, thanks for asking

What about you?

Also aren’t we all lunatics about certain characters lol

@keilah-h ikr? About time😂

@esther-c

heh

heh

heh

 

y’all don’t wanna know what I have planned for Riker AND Leon

hehehe

😭

 

@koshka Indeed!

Yess, indeed, the poor man still needs a lot of help <3

Ty for reading and your kind thoughts!! 💖💖

 

@savannah_grace2009

ME TOOOOO 💖💖💖💖 *hugs Riker tight*

Awww, girl, I’m so glad you’re doing…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

🫣

I may have to get braces…that sounds horrible

 

Now I really don’t want them😂 but I also want straight teeth; such conflicting feelings.

I wanted Invisalign, but apparently my mouth isn’t big enough for all of my teeth to even fit in my head, so I’ll probably have to get braces and spacers 😅 I meannn, I had a dentist tell me…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Thanks!! The foreshadowing and pacing in this book is definitely stretching me and it’s been a learning curve, but I’m slowly figuring it out. (I think… XD)

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!!

Um… practice? I don’t know, but honestly it’s just practice. XD Now I will confess, I used to throw tons of action tags on dialogue an…[Read more]

@theducktator

I love your signature 🤣

@whalekeeper ooof.

I have braces, but they’re the clear plastic ones that come on and off. I think I made the right choice with that instead of the metal ones.

@theducktator @koshka @keilah-h

Brace adjustments XDXD They put in these rubber bands two days ago and now I can’t chew.

Okay, keep in mind most of these are optional! I’ll make sure to note which ones are grammatically necessary, and you can assume anything else is just to give the reader’s eye a rest where it is the most logical.

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CHAPTER 1-LAXAN INVASION

!0,015 GA. The city of Laxan on the planet Laxor…

Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava spewed from t…[Read more]

@rae

All your replies are noted ;P

I saw somewhere that you have trouble with paragraph breaks. I love sequencing sentences, especially dialogue sentences, so I’ll give you some suggestions here in just a sec.

@whalekeeper ugh eating anything with only your front teeth is a real pain.

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness Min they are SO adorable🥰🥰  I love your writing so much girl!!! <3

 

And I’m so sorry I haven’t been very active😭 I have started trying to write more frequently so I’ll hopefully be on more <33

Sorry, but I have to let out my feelings somewhere

You have never known true pain and dedication, unless you have been forced to eat bacon with your front teeth only.