Allison

@ellette-giselle

Just popping in because I’m bored, lol!

I kinda agree with Whaley. The story just doesn’t seem like it’s going towards a specific goal…like the events seem a bit random and idk how to describe it but it’s like your story’s missing something but it frustrates me because I don’t know what exactly I’m missing, just that something…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’ve already written the whole book.

Oh cool, this is a plenty-of-work-already-done thing.

why do you ask?

I was asking because I’m not sure what direction the story is taking. What should the reader hope to happen next? Both in Aaron’s arc and in the outward plot? – A sense of where this all leads. Because the orphanage plot w…[Read more]

@otherworldlyhistorian whoa, weird….cool concept though!

@ellette-giselle FIFTH draft? Wow!!

@ellette-giselle

Are you using a normal arc structure/your own structure based off what you know about arcs? Or just thinking through the arc as you write?

@linus-smallprint haha yeah Microsoft’s day calendar thingy can be useful sometimes….

and ha I didn’t even notice that with Alan and Oliver in the beginning.

@otherworldlyhistorian I have absolutely NO idea what you’re talking about but it seems like you enjoyed it! And the character arcs sound cool.

@ellette-giselle

Have you outlined LTBL?

also I added some today. Including one of the most hilarious scenes from the video I pulled the bread tumor plot from (IDK how familiar you are with the official animations)

@Esther-c

Ooo…. They sound cool! 😃😄

@keilah-h

😊 Thanks. Yeah, they definitely need some development. I can’t wait to see how all three of them react in a situation like this and with each other.

@esther-c don’t, they’re cool.

the whole point of this is to develop the characters by having them interact with each other.

@keilah-h

Awesome!

I kinda feel bad for dumping three new characters on y’all. 🤭

@esther-c cool!!

I think I’m just gonna keep Crosshair here, same as @freed_and_redeemed‘s doing with Riker and Leon.

Just gonna share the link to my brain dump so y’all can see their face claims:

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGK2MbtfP0/KPlD9Kd9oXRqccbAcP3vCw/edit?utm_content=DAGK2MbtfP0&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

@theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @grcr @theducktator

M’kay! I’ve decided on another character duo! (Actually three characters, but I’m only gonna write from the POV of two of them) I need practice writing these guys since I don’t normally do first person, but their novel is going to be completely in first!

So! Without further ado….…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle haha yeah

@ellette-giselle wow that’s… still terrible

Kinda interesting though how all of these unrelated cultures (Latin, German, Chinese, etc) all equated “left” with “wrong” separately, unless it came about once those cultures all had contact.

Don’t worry, I didn’t think you believed that nonsense lol