Allison

@freed_and_redeemed

Yes, that’s so true. I go through phases of writing improvement, and this roleplay helped so much it’s crazy. I can say the same for many projects, but this one is so consistent and easy to return to. I love it because I and my sister traditionally read updates before bed. Thx for creating it ;]

@calyhuge

Hugo

The dorm door burst open as a boy barreled in. Behind him, girl bearing a shield surveyed the area.

Hugo quickly shoved the puppy into his sock drawer. He stood up and gave a sheepish grin. “Good, uh… afternoon! It’s getting late already, isn’t it?”

“This is Seb’s room, correct?” the girl asked.

“He’s not here.”

She jerked…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ah makes sense!

@ellette-giselle

Hunter

“So, the winged kids are nice… except then some of them are really mean. That totally isn’t confusing. Not only do you tell me I need to keep an eye out for winged students, but I have to be able to tell them apart?” Rory asked. “This place is certainly out of my league. So, who are these fellas with the artist brother…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings yeah that’s just cause of my weird cartoon-realistic combo artstyle haha, but thanks!

you and @grcr have a very similar style! I can see why you’d pick that one.

@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @grcr

Thank you guys! It was a lot of fun getting to see all the submissions! 🥰

Don’t worry about it @rae !

Ok! Here’s my comments on each one. I’ll post my drawing below.

Linus-smallprint

You got his facial features pretty well, and I really like how the hat has a bit of droop to it lol. It looks…[Read more]

@theshadow so….we have traded places…..

now you’re telling me to read your story that you’re afraid is a dumpster fire! (Don’t worry, I think yours is great.)

I would go with what @linus-smallprint says about the new paragraphs whenever a character is talking. Look at my fanfic–the google doc separates the paragraphs out a lot, so I’ll…[Read more]

@theducktator

Crosshair

“Well, maybe we could find a way out while we go on a quest. Like, a secret passage full of deadly traps under a moat! I doubt you could get out even if you tried. It’s a well known fact that you can’t escape a fantasy world until the world is saved, and your arc is complete. We’re only at the inciting incident. Unless…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle amazing!

@ellette-giselle I’m still reading!

@freed_and_redeemed I like how you took the basic idea of the What If episode and made it your own thing!

@theshadow lol yep

oh and thanks. Which loaf scene exactly? Cause there are a couple haha. What point are you at?

I tried to make it as entertaining as I could. Some of it’s derived from official media the developers of the actual game have put out over the years. The plot of the latter two-thirds or so are from a comic series they made (I don’t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle haha I think my dad showed me the dog one a while back. poor doggy lol

and ha, that’s a perfect shot of the horse leaping.

@ellette-giselle whoaaa that’s so cool! You recreated a movie poster, I presume??

I’ve tried, but it never looks right.

@freed_and_redeemed

GIRL YOU HAVE A QUOTE FROM MY BOOK AS YOUR SIGNATURE!?😭😭 i’m speechless😭😭😭😭

💛😜🤪

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @anyone-else

Ok! So I have this new-ish WIP idea, but I’m not happy with the plot. The main characters are Audrey and Miles. (Miles is her dad). Basically, Miles had to give up his daughter when she was little for some reason that had to do with his job. Maybe to keep her safe or something? He’s kind of a mix of Eth…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @theducktator

Thanks ladies! Sorry for disappearing on you. I thought I’d have time over the weekend, but it escaped from me and then we had to leave for a worship conference.

BUT, I’m back! I’ll try to explain the plot and the questions I have sometime this afternoon. (:

Dunno who to tag…..

@freed_and_redeemed

I finished reading Freedom’s Fire a little while ago!!!