Allison

@ellette-giselle @koshka

Marcel

You heard ’em, up you get,” Marcel sighed. He hoisted Quincy onto a cloud, which he kept tethered to a cluster of trembling feathers on his wrist, only inches away. He gave the stranger a meaningful look. “Lead on.”

@loopylin

I kinda made the decision without telling you, Marcel wanted to see if they could get down themselves. I was waiting for you to realize. XD

I’m not sure how tall 225 is, but chances are, Marcel is smaller since he’s physically fifteen. 😁

@ellette-giselle

Marcel

Feathers prickled along the nape of Marcel’s neck – a gut instinct, alertness. He played it cool. After all, this might not be a real problem. “I’ll come too, I want to talk with Leo.”

@rae @theshadow

Barnes has some traits which make sense for a leader in this situation. But you are free to combat anything she does. 😅

Hugo

As his vision floated back, Hugo winced and shifted to his side, where he could look up at the people around him.

“…I am the oldest,” Barnes was saying. Although a couple of these people were taller than…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka

Marcel

Before Quincy could be led on any longer, Marcel stepped out from behind his locker door. He took the strangers by surprise.

“I must be the worst eavesdropper on the face of the planet,” he said casually, hanging his head and looking through his brows at the strangers. “But it sounds like Leo needs his brother…[Read more]

I’ve got a castle, a minecart track, and a bridge to the mainland.

Four maps show the whole thing.

A funny pool I found on a corner of the island that looks just like a cross.

Was it @calyhuge who suggested seed 2 for a Minecraft world?

I have some awesome pictures of it:

View from above my currently unfinished castle. I have a texture pack and a couple mods on so don’t mind the guys down there and the weirdly patterned wall.

kinda random but what did you think of my writing style and prose? Is it a little annoying that the character’s thoughts kinda bleed onto the page sometimes? Like this:

Sniper kept pacing. Despite his attempt to remain an emotionless interrogator, I could see the pain in his eyes. Part of me would’ve gone over to take his hand if I hadn’t been tie…

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I was re-reading it today, editing little bits–putting in better words for things and stuff, y’know, and every time I do that I’m always like “wow…I wrote this?”

As much as I make fun of it, I feel like this kinda goofy somewhat self-insert fan fiction for a video game I don’t even play has been one of my best works so far.

@theshadow oh thanks! Didn’t expect you to actually want to do it lol.

That’s perfectly fine if you’re too busy! Just tell me whenever you do have the time to write and I’ll get you that “inside information” lol

I’m assuming that means you’re pretty much finished with what I’ve got.

but yeah I was up at like 10 two nights ago drafting a scene that won’t even make it into my WIP and is just me experimenting with the characters’ personalities.

@ellette-giselle LOL that last one

the first one too, it’s like bruh, what are parents for if they aren’t gonna teach their kids? Are we mere animals that abandon their young to fend for themselves? Like a bearded dragon lizard that leaves her eggs alone and doesn’t even recognize her babies as fellow lizards?

Seriously. Even crocodiles care…[Read more]

@koshka @ellette-giselle

If they target Quincy, you can be sure Marcel will notice and protect the whole class. I think he’s still nearby. That is, if Leo needs help XD

@theshadow (you’re good!) @rae

Barnes

The two other parties continued theorizing. Barnes, meanwhile, flitted through her own thoughts in silence. When the last young man spoke, she spoke quickly after. “Fine. As long as we find a kitchen storeroom and secure firelit bedrooms along the way.”

A piece of her believed they were locked in. This…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed I don’t think I have a review on Amazon or anything yet. You could just use my KP reviews.

I’ll provide you a link to my first book so you can see my name and what my books are like if you wanna point out that I’m also an author:

Hopefully that works. You could say something like…[Read more]

@keilah-h cool! Did you have a review, or do you just want me to use some of what you said here on KP? And I’ll just use your first name if you want or I can add your full name and add what books you’ve published like I’m going to do for Ellette, up to you. Just let me know what your book(s) titles and your full name is if you wanted to do…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed that’s ok with me!