@acancello
Active 1 year, 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
eeeee yay!! 😃 I’m pretty much open to all feedback… yeah.
(I actually thought the dad was gonna die in this chapter from scene 1…. so I’m relieved that he made it. XD)
LOL
It’s like a family I know, expect they have 15 kids and it’s all “J” names.
😅 I guess great minds think alike lolol
Yeah, it’s not vital. It probably wo…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
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-GRCR- started the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Hello hello hello.
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I’m rewriting TPE (I’ve renamed it to A Fire Within btw, so I’ll probably call it AFW instead) for the billionth time and I’m pretty happy with it so far, so I’m going to start sharing it again. Andddd… yeah. Tagging everyone I can think of atm, but feel free to ignore. I don’t want to bother anyone. 😅😅
I figured something like that lol
Lucille
“Huh. Okay.” She threw the hatchet again and succeeded. “Why don’t you tell your – uh – friends what you’re really doing?”
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy pulled the hatchet out of the tree. Her cheeks glowed red from the effort and her arms felt good from the exercise. She cradled the head in one hand and the handle in the other, striding back to Gabriel.
She didn’t smile very much, not doing so on the best of days, but gave him all of her eyes’ attention. “Is Isabella your sweetheart?”
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
“Bet they wanted you because you’d win.”
She stepped forward, gray eyes focused sharply on the tree, and the hatchet sunk into the bark.
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-GRCR- posted an update 4 months, 2 weeks ago
eenhheeheeheheheeehee… 😈
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
It soon became obvious that Lucy had less trouble using her own strength than quelling it. Every time she threw the hatchet, she overshot and sent it zinging back over the stoned ground.
But aiming seemed like a more important thing to get right, and after a couple tries, she remembered to pause and focus on the tree. She hit the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Throwing axes is pretty fun, I’ve done it a couple times
Lucille
The hatchet was smooth and solid in Lucy’s hand, curved to fit her grip. She tested its weight before nodding to Gabriel and pulling her arm back.
With surprising force, she whipped it at the tree. With a metallic clang, the hatchet ricocheted off the stone wall behind. The…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Marcel
Marcel narrowly dodged. A boy, the wind-controller from the previous period, had already taken to the air. It made sense to place the flying students in opposition to each other. “Celarent! You don’t want me to follow you up there, do you?”
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whaley replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
My brother: *Listening to a song with the lyrics ‘I just can’t run away’* “Actually you can, girl. I’d run away if I were you.”
Me: “No you couldn’t.”
Brother: “Why not?”
Me: *Looks pointedly at his disabled legs* 😁
Brother: *Bursts into laughter*
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From the outside looking in, it is strange to be someone who only watches disabled sports…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Five months later I have to say, that’s a great quote
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy handed him the hatchet. She also rolled up her sleeves so they wouldn’t get in the way. “Are we gonna chop wood?”
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Aww man
But guys tbh we should be proud of how well we handle ourselves, there’s no moderators and we have no issues except for the website 😂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
YESSS!!!!! This is PERFECT right down to thanksgiving in the hospital hehehehe I am actually so happy you wrote that!
When I saw it in my email, I literally screamed and my dad was like “are you okay?” it was really funny, he was very concerned 😂😂
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
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Esther replied to the topic WARS in the forum Plotting 4 months, 2 weeks ago
So the idea you got is already pretty good! But if you need more inspo…
The War of 1812 was interesting, because the United States had just won her independence from Great Britain roughly 30 years ago, and then there they are fighting again. But France/Napoleon Bonaparte also played a role in this by pitting the two against e…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lol! Easton… no… don’t promise all that! 😢 You don’t know what’s going to happen!
Willow and Ruby are so cute. 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 (it’s the scene!!) @hybridlore @ummm, anyone, because I can’t remember who all read Worth All the World XD
Working on the third draft of WAtW currently, and I’m adding in a couple of scenes, including this one, inspired by Sara! 😁
It’s unedited and I’m still not sure where it’s going to fit exactly, so it might feel clunky…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
My family doesn’t even celebrate Christmas until Christmas Eve.
Is there a reason why you do that?
I’m just curious because I’m going through an advent devotional right now, and the author introduced me to some of the feasts and celebrations leading up to Christmas (like St. Nicholas and St. Lucia), even though my denomination doesn…[Read more]
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