Allison

Boom, finally caught up

@savannah_grace2009

I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:

“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”

Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”

Sef blinked hard.

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@ellette-giselle @grcr @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @rae @theducktator @loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @savannah_grace2009

Okay, sorry for taking so long to get back to this. I have a google form here to figure out how to best organize this. Please fill this out, even if you are just planning on giving feedback.           …[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…

The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD

@ellette-giselle

I would love to!

My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot

@savannah_grace2009

I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.

@ellette-giselle lol

I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.

What do your brothers love so much about it?

@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!

@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @rae @raxforge yeah! I’d love to join this.

all right, time to answer the questions:

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I think your protagonists were the best.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I do agree with Hybridlore that since Fox was the…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah it was pretty short hahaha

thank youuu

@savannah_grace2009

That was a short chapter, but pretty good!

@theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @grcr

I just released a new chapter…(chapter 35) and I’d just like some thoughts on it lol

so if you want to read it…

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

@ellette-giselle

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Probably either Leon or Julian. I’m going to say Leon for this book.

~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

Umm . . . For some reason I’m thinking of Fox, since he was the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

He ended up marrying the daughter of a farmer that he helped. Mercy grew up and married and had children, and so did most of the other children, though their fifth, Allan, died when he was fifteen.

🥺

Thank you!

Also, Linus had a point. We never found out who wrote that note (I know you just said it was an acolyte, but maybe…[Read more]