Abigail.M.

*comes out of the shadows where I have lurked in recent days*

@rae

Intriguing story. It doesn’t sound like anything I’ve read before, although considering that most of my favorite authors are long dead that may not be worth mentioning.

At any rate, I do not believe I have properly met you either. I am Koshka, a writer of middle-grade animal…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Leon! My darling Leon! Noooooooo…

And Riker! That’s not true! Both of you need so much healing. And prayer. And just, ugh.

Seriously Leon, try coffee. It’s much better for you.

Love your idea!

@thearcaneaxiom

Sorry for suddenly going mia for a bit, one of my co-workers got sick so I had a few extra shifts this week and haven’t been able to get online until now!

Anyway, good to be back again, yet again!

It’s been going really well! I’ve been working, doing some writing (obviously,) and preparing for a two-year mission that will hop…

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Oh dear i just realized your story was contemporary lol!

Also, have you considered her as an antagonist type character?

@smiley

Hi!

Where you’re going with this is interesting, I like the idea of having the inciting incident being a bunch of siblings with different kinds of baggage coming together for a holiday at their parent’s house, and here’s some different ideas with where to take it:

• The parents have to share some kind of news before the dad’s 50th…

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This is really random, but if you want some good Star Wars fanfic, I recommend Pente Patrol and Elseworlds on Youtube, they’re audio so great for listening to while doing chores.

It’s another world that has interplanetary travel in it’s solar system, it’s not as widespread and casual as star- wars since large-scale items can’t be brought through unlike living organisms and what they have on them at the time.

Thank you for reading this! I hope you have a good day/night/wherever you are!

hand grabbing his chest as he goes unconscious

aaand that’s episode 1!

show that water in lungs

I might cut him opening his mouth and he just faints instead?

sees hand reaching toward him.

Jake opens his mouth to scream/gasp?

jake struggling even more.

Jake starts sinking, panic setting in with the red. he’s thrashing in the water

any tips for showing how he’s struggling to swim?