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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@folith-feolin as I don’t read grimdark but I do know it’s definitely not something I’d probably read really at all, KOTLC, definitely isn’t as intense probably as what ur used to.
which is great for me XD XD XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings yup! Her name is Hope! She’s been through a lot, just like Paxton, so he feels so attached to her.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Gonna wait to RP till @lightoverdarkness6 RPs for Matt and his sis.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@folith-feolin u might wanna read book7-9 now that they’re out 😉)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Luna
Tauren walked them over to the others, and as he did another boy walked out from them, eyes wary as he looked at them.
“Who are you?” He asked.
Luna felt Paxton bristle beside her. She held her smile, hoping the boy’s bit of hospitality would fade.
“U-Uh…Carter, this is Dolunay…”…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c you’re good!
Jocelyn
“We’re looking for our friends,” Lyn answered, allowing Nyx to adjust in her hold. “We all got separated a few moments ago.” She decided to leave out the strange explosion, considering they’d already been freaked out by Nyx’s speaking.
“Oh? What do they look like? Maybe we’ve seen them!” Amidala smiled, looki…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Paxton
A young man had bumped into them, making Paxton’s heart leapt into his chest. He shrunk behind Luna, still gripping her hand as the boy adjusted his glasses, apologizing.
Luna squeezed Paxton’s hand, smiling and accepting the boy’s apology.
““If you’re trying to get away from the dr…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Disclaimer: I’m definitely still a student of Russian anything, and names are one of those things that are described as ‘very difficult for RSL’. Please take whatever I say with a grain of salt.
What exactly do you mean by context? Female or male? Tense in a sentence?
Diminutive forms are like nicknames, only someone…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
So to answer ur first question, I don’t think it’s weird to lay the groundwork that early (if I’m interpreting ur questions right, your asking due to their ages, correct?)
I have two characters in my series, staring at the ages of 11 and 13 who later end up liking each other and in the very far future even get married, so no…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 does anyone wanna RP them running due to the dragon roar and bumping into pax and Luna?
(btw Pax probably won’t say anything cuz he’s suuuuper shy and scares easily sometimes)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 OKAY I LOVE MATTHEW SO MUCH UUGGHHH and him getting flustered with Carmen is SO CUTE!! Reminds me of my November 🥰🥰
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper I don’t really have any suggestions (naming characters is SO HARD oh my) but I just wanted to say that your character sounds so cool!! Phoenix powers sound so unique and generally just awesome. Also, props to you for revamping an old story!! *fistbump of solidarity as I recall the story that I started as a wee 13-year-old and has be…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Christmas Sci-fi short stories, feedback is necessary in the forum Genre-Writing 3 years, 9 months ago
@sarafini Oooh I like this!! Especially the last line—really gives you a nice glimpse of the stakes. Also that’s super nice of you to write a short story for your parents for Christmas!!
A couple questions (because I’m curious and decided I’m just going to go ahead and be nosy about your story :P)
1. Does Jessica have a mom in the picture…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@starofthenorth I blazed through the first 8 books in like a two-week span of time over a year ago, so pardon me if my memory is a little fuzzy 😛
I can definitely see why you would find the books too intense! I was rereading some of book eight yesterday actually, and was like… wow everything escalated very quickly. It’s definitely more in the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings okie dokie! Since I already RPed I’ll let someone else go ahead before I do another
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@idk XD @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 idk if y’all wanna run into Pax and Luna or not, it’s up to y’all XD but im gonna have them hear the dragon.
Luna
Paxton had thankfully calmed down, and now the two were quietly making their way down the seemingly endless corridors.
Luna smiled, looking at the stonework above her,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Nyx
“Adorable?!” Nyx huffed, his breath hitching as the bandages rubbed against his wounds. He winced.
He may have been hurt…but he still had his pride!
Amidala looked at him with wide eyes. “Did I…say something wrong?”
Lyn laughed.
The nerve…Nyx shot her a halfhearted glare.
“Ah…Nyx just…doesn’t care to be called adorable. <…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings considering I’m a snoopy snooperton and really wanna listen in on conversations too even tho I can’t no I wasn’t angry at him!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
@felicity ah yes back on topic XD
@whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @arien @koshka @starofthenorth @anyone-else-here XD
DOES ANYONE HAVE ANY QUESTIONS RELATED TO FICTIONAL ROMANCES?? XD
OR ANY FICTIONAL ROMANCE SUBPLOTS OR COUPLES YOU WOULD LIKE TO SHARE? Lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings AWW KEIRYN 😭 Ok honestly he’s my favorite character 😅
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