AveryTheExplodey

@rae @jonas

I’ve never written something that makes me cry…But then again I don’t usually cry reading anything.

Well…hehe….I once wrote a dumb story (last spring) about these kids. One of the older brothers got pushed off a water tower (it’s dumb okay???) and I wrote the siblings grieving over him….I actually started tearing up and almos…[Read more]

@vinagirl

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

That’s the link to my book 🙂

@jonas

I know it’s baking soda…I don’t live under a rock, contrary to what everyone in my school thinks haha! It just reminds me of it…

But soft drinks sounds….weirder.

@vinagirl

YOU HOARD CHICKENS TOOOOO?!?? We have like 80 chickens 🤣 how many do you have? I am very curious now.

I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I h…[Read more]

@esther-c

wonder if Lukas was coming to the dance or not, but he shrugged it off. He’d ask him later.

lol! I can’t wait for that awkward RP…lol

hey…what if Lukas and Liv were partners? Fynn would never stop laughing….lol

Livia

“How do you dance, anyway?” she asked, laughing a little at her own ignorance. “I don’t know a thing about it. A…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge

Thanks guys!!

will miss the only character who’s more insane than me 😢😞

lol!!!

@jonas

*gasp*

I don’t know whether to be insulted, or….too late, I’m insulted 😂😂😂

(soda just sounds like a white powder you’d put in a cake, not something you should drink…lol)

@rae

I LOVE how you described Wyoh….lolol!

@vinagirl

It is (in my humble opinion) pop.

YESSS. ThAnK yOu!!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

SEE? I’m not the only one!!!

@vinagirl

Hey there! I’m Sara, sometimes called Savannah by my readers (my pen name is Savannah Grace). I’ve never published a book before but I’m trying to get there!

I’m a freshman in high school and attend a public school (WHY am I the only one on KP that doesn’t homeschool??). I used to homeschool, but then transferred because God said that…[Read more]

I’m sorry guys, but I’m going to have to leave this RP. It’s just kind of a lot to keep up with and I’m already in several other RP’s. This has been really fun and I’ll really miss RP’ing Fracture…*cries* XD I just really need to focus on my WIP.

Thanks for understanding!

@vinagirl

Totally fine!

Cool! What’s the significance about it being two stones? Are they both needed? Can they be fused into a mineral or alloy to keep it to one object?

@vinagirl

Hello! It’s nice to meet you! That’s so cool! The Septrum is a cool name!

Thanks!

it’s awesome that you love math! (Wish I could say the same thing lol 😅)

It’s not everyone’s thing, that’s totally fine, lol!

I depends on what book I’m working on for the soft and hard thing. Some I like to be very flexible with and some have to have so…

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@lydibug

Sorry, I’m going to have to not join after all. I need to focus more on my writing, and I’m already in quite a few RP’s. Though this is a really cool idea!!

@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Sorry guys, but I’m going to have to leave this RP to focus more on my writing. Just thought I’d let you know!

@vinagirl

Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and my current project is a universe I’m working on with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (hard meaning concrete rules for the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay, so this is sort of like a spiritual battle? Sef can defeat the Pythonos because she is willing to stand up to their lies. Lilitu is a Payne too, though, right? The reason Sef is the only one who can defeat them is because she has believed their lies and he hasn’t?

Essentially, yes, and…no. It’s hard to explain the thoughts i…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s a second book I don’t think it’s a big problem.

I agree, the ending is abrupt, but I’m not sure how to make it any less so. It just kinda m…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.

Yeah, essentially. Though N’nesha specifically hasn’t even seen that horizon, it’s probably been described to her before.

There’s a planet in Star Wars calle…

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@keilah-h

I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)

More or less. It’s not really an asteroid, but it is a field of planetoids. I’ve talked about Omialia many times before, but it’s essentially a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22

N’nesha

Uvah had Bucky sit, working on his wound. I paced back and forth.

Neshe: We need to get out of here.

Nele: Where even is “here”?

I decided to explore the room, feeling around the walls. Wood touched my fingers, and specks of light shown through the cracks. A window.

Neshe: This could be a good…[Read more]