AveryTheExplodey

@acancello

I’ll check out your blog! I can’t breathe…lol! I’ve gone through almost 2 boxes of tissues in two days! Another thing that really sucks is that today is my birthday and I’m sick!!!! Yesterday I felt really sick and spent like eight hours straight on KP…😐

@whalekeeper

I’m here! 🙂 Sounds interesting!

@whalekeeper

I take inspiration from every book that I read! Right now, Christopher Paolini is really inspiring me as I read his book Eragon for the second time, because it is SO GOOD! His world building and descriptions are spot-on and it seems like Algaesia could be real! And he published it at age 15!!!! It inspires me that even teens can…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

thanks! the second part of fifth chapter is from Ottoline’s POV. It’s supposed to depict when the Pythonos took Ottoline (because Neveah and Ottoline are sisters and Ottoline was taken as a baby)

@whalekeeper

Well, I’m not totally sure why they hate the Paynes *yet* but I had an idea that the Paynes represent Isrealites/Jews, God’s chosen people. Also, people tend to judge others based on their looks, and since the Paynes often are deformed, they see them as ugly/inferior, etc.

Ooooh sounds interesting! If you ever post them on the forum…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

this is where you can see updates to my writing! Any critiques you have would be so helpful!

@jonas

Hi 🙂

though this is an allegory, I’m inventing stuff too. I’m using the Bible for “inspiration” and for some of the storyline, but I’m also implementing biblical truths as well. So yes, the part with Kratos is invented.

@whalekeepler

Whaley,

Paynes are half breeds between human and Andromedan. They are often deformed, and they are treated with prejudice by the other Andromedans, causing a lot of poverty because they are treated like dirt. It’s really sad 🙁

What stories do you write?

@whalekeeper

Hi!

I know my profile says “Savannah Grace” but that’s just my pen name 🙂 you can call me Sara

I have been working on a story I hope to get published in a few years. I have it posted on a forum on KP, do you want me to tag you?

I write fantasy/sci fi/allegory books. Here’s a little blurb:

Andromeda-a world who’s beauty is t…[Read more]

Hey guys It’s five in the morning where I live and I’m sick so I just woke up and can’t fall back asleep so I’m bored 🙁

Let me know if you want more chapters 🙂

Chapter 5: The UNIT

Triggers: Violence

Neveah awoke to the horrible sound of beeping monitors and unfamiliar voices.

Her eyes flashed open, but now she wished that she could erase what she had just seen from her memory.

She was in a bed, covered in white sheets. The place reeked of Pythonos. Worse, there was one hovering over her right now.…[Read more]

4th Chapter: Stolen

It all started with a scream.

No, it was more like a wail.

It was the anguished cry of a mother being torn from her child.

Sef was on her way to the slums, carrying water back from the well when the cry made her drop the buckets. The precious water sloshed all over the dry ground which absorbed it within seconds. Sef did…[Read more]

Third Chapter: A Hard Life 

Trigger warning: a slap, threats, etc.

“Git your grubby fingers off that bread!” Lilitu froze. He looked longingly at the loaf of bread which might as well have been a bar of gold, before turning to face the enraged Azer. He turned to face the man, leaning on his cane for support, subconsciously tucking his twist…[Read more]

Second Chapter:

Azuri screamed in agony as she pressed a hand against her round stomach.

“Nathan,” she rasped, reaching for her husband’s hand. “The baby!” Her face twisted in agony and she fell back against the pillows which were now damp with her sweat, exhausted.

Nathan squeezed Azuri’s sweaty hand, willing himself to stay calm. He tried no…[Read more]

@katthewriter

Oh my goodness I love your story! I have to find out what happens next! PLEASSSE post the next ones!!!!! You have to publish this!!!!!! It’s amazing!

I listen to christian music while I write.

My favorite song right now is Sweet Ever After by Ellie Holcomb! But I listen to basically every christian song you can name.