AveryTheExplodey

@thearcaneaxiom

Right, she represents Eve, but is she literally Eve? Is Earth here the same Earth we know, and therefore the story of Adam and Eve is really just a translation of Rishona’s story?

Well I think that Rishona is literally Eve in my story, and Earth is the same earth we know but I think what I was going for is that there’s no Adam a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, Rishona does represent Eve in the prologue.

Right, she represents Eve, but is she literally Eve? Is Earth here the same Earth we know, and therefore the story of Adam and Eve is really just a translation of Rishona’s story?

And I do agree that I use flowery language excessively. I love your ideas, because you have helped…

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@thearcaneaxiom

“What is magick?” She tested out the foreign world, mulling it over in her mind.

“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. Rishona bristled at his mocking tone. Her stomach clenched, and she ground her teeth as her jaw hardened defiantly. What was this emotion, she wondered. She had never felt this way before. N…

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@whalekeeper

Great topic as always! I agree with Trailblazer’s comment, because when it comes to sci-fi/fantasy, really anything goes, you can have one God, or you could have many, or you could have none. So when it comes to that sort of thing, the question should be less of whether or not you have “God” in your world, and more of what is…[Read more]

@smiley

Interesting. So for the question of whether or not you want Christianity in it, all I can honestly say is that’s entirely up to you. If this were me, I would put in all sorts of Christian themes, and perhaps even correlations to the atonement, but I wouldn’t get into it deliberately. It simply depends on what you want as a writer, and who…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes, Rishona does represent Eve in the prologue.  And I do agree that I use flowery language excessively. I love your ideas, because you have helped me realize things about myself I never have before!

And about the paragraph you wrote….

“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. The dismissive comment trigge…

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@savannah_grace2009

No worries about the quotes, it’s legible!

Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam and Eve, they’re just two different worlds. I’m not sure if that answe…

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@thearcaneaxiom : I’m sorry I made that look so confusing!

thanks @jonas for helping me!

@jonas sorry got your tag wrong

how did i forget that??? sorry i’m tired

IT WORKED!!!

@cloakedmystery

really???? i’m gonna try it…

‘The process I described would also give you green lines.’

i hope it works lol

*me casually making a fool out of myself on KP but oh well its ok 😂*

@jonas

I should have done that but I saw other KP users quoting people with “green lines”,  I know I sound like a little kid, haha but idk how else to explain it! So I clicked ‘quote’ and you can see what happened 🤦‍♀️

@thearcaneaxiom

um apparently i did something wrong, hope this still makes sense? sorry, this was my first time quoting someone…

@thearcaneaxiom

okay i’m gonna attempt to quote, something I’ve never done before so bear with me if this doesn’t make sense at all:

Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I have just read the prologue, and yes, it is very much just the events of the fall, but still intriguing. I’m curious, since this is referred to as Earth and Andromeda, are these not just allegorically, but literally the events of Adam and Eve, just called by different names, then upon being written, oral tradition shifted it…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22

I decided I needed to stop procrastinating and continue before I getting prodded again, sorry it’s a little short😅

N’nesha

“…Let me handle this.” I heard Bucky say. I lay, stunned…

Neshe: What… happened…?

Nele: What’s he doing…?

I sat up, still a bit dazed. Bucky stood in the middle of the hall,…[Read more]

@crocheter12 I love this idea! I would totally read this!

@trailblazer

Exactly! My siblings are 7 (my little brother, Ethan) and 11 (my little sister, Hallie). Hallie does my chicken chores in the morning cuz I’m at school hehe

@trailblazer @thearcaneaxiom @acancello

if you’re interested, here’s some of my writing if you wanted to give me feedback 🙂 if you don’t want to that’s okay, its just I’m trying to get beta readers to critique what I have so far before I move on to any other chapters.

@trailblazer

It’s hard for me because my little siblings are still homeschooled and they don’t understand what I go through, and so when I get home they expect me to play with them and hang out and stuff like that. but when I get home, I mentally cannot handle people anymore and what I really need is to sit in my room and write and listen to…[Read more]