AveryTheExplodey

@freedomwriter76 @acancello @highscribeofaetherium

this is my favorite moodboard I’ve ever done. I’m new to this, but I love this one! She’s one of my MC’s.

@trailblazer

Yeah, for sure! If you want to develop characters more, character questionaires have really helped me. Here’s one I found and have used: https://www.novel-software.com/character-questionnaire/

I love everyone’s personality and how the older brothers want to protect their little sisters. It’s so sweet!

@freedomwriter76

thanks for the tips!

@mineralizedwritings

Awww I’m sorry! I hope things get better!

@light-warrior-pen

thank you! I love Sef and Lilitu, they are SO CUTE <3

@trailblazer

I hate misunderstandings with teachers! That’s the worst! I feel so bad for Albert 🙁 and I’m so happy they protected Libbie and Etta!

@acancello

Thanks!

@trailblazer

Okay, that’s probably better anyway haha! But the suspense is killing me! I love good romance, so right now for some reason I really want Libbie and Albert to become a “thing”. lol.

@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralized writings (I think that’s everybody? Sorry if I missed anyone!) Okay I’m bored and I’m procrastinating getting ready for school (where I live it’s 6:30 am rn), so I’m just gonna roleplay. (sorry, @esther-c ,haha) Also, when you RP you can either do it in third person like I’m doing or in…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

OH MY GOSH CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!! I am so happy for you! You’ll have to tell me the name when you actually print it so I can read it, haha!

One of my goals is to publish my first book before I turn 16/before I graduate. (I’m really young for my grade, so I’ll be 16 my senior year and then in september I’ll turn 17 then graduate…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Also, I have to know…is Libbie ever going to fall for Albert? It’s okay if you can’t say because of spoilers but I just wanted to know, haha.

@trailblazer

Got it! I’d just never heard it before, but it makes sense.

@jonas

Hmmm, that’s hard, because you can tell it’s a bit derivative from a lot of preexisting ideas. To change that would be to radically change the system as a whole, which is fine, just annoying, but often necessary.

One issue I immediately have is with the name and the first element. If it is called “essence burning” does that not show an…[Read more]

@sarafini

One thing I noticed was that it was really hard to tell that it was a dream. If you weren’t looking close enough, you would have missed it. So since it’s a dream, you might want to make it more obvious. But I liked your story! It was good!

@thearcaneaxiom

I like your idea of that the magic words are evil because of the purpose given by the Pythonos. So I might use that? I’m still not sure, haha!

Names of people:

Ottoline, Marcurious, Sparrow, Rishona, Berko, Sef, Lilitu, Azazel, Indie, Jordan (I need a new name for him, an evil one, so if you could help that would be great!),…[Read more]

@trailblazer

“I’ll just be thankful when I can sleep in a bed again and have a roof over my head,” Etta whispered back. I mentally chided myself for longing for something so vain when even the most

practical needs still weren’t met. Etta had a wisdom I lacked. What did it matter if we were a little dirty and dusty? No one else in our party m…

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@esther-c

I’m so excited, lol!

@grcr

Who wants to start? I’ve never done this before, so anyone more experienced want to start?