80sTrish

@kyronthearcanin

While I am still getting the final touches figured out, it is a mainly verbal language. If you’re wondering which race, it’s the Felisaro (they’re probably the most innovative out of the five). The main idea was that they teach it to all the Felisaro they can at a young age, keeping it as secret as possible, and don’t use it unti…

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@kyronthearcanin

Secret as in, only that race is supposed to know about it, so they can speak in secret if they ever need to, but the secret is found out after a while.

Right, but is it an encrypted version of another language? Because if they’re speaking in private, then there’s no point in having it (unless you do have a reason) and if they…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I like it, it’s always fun writing from the perspective of a child! I’ve only read a little bit of your writing before, so I don’t have full context, but it’s good. I don’t think I really have any criticisms, but the pull back to reality felt kinda sudden to me, but just something like a single line in between the flashback and…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ooh that riddle made my head hurt lol.

XD

Also, I’m playing around with a secret language for one of my races.

Cool! I’d love to hear about it! Secret in what way?

I’ve gotta go for now (youth event)

Have fun!

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks about the art! Can’t say I’ve heard of StarFox, but it sounds like it would look like my drawing haha.

Your welcome! Yeah, it’s a really old videogame from Nintendo.

1. Worldbuilding is amazing! I have to cut back to avoid overwhelming people lol. Aspects? Describing how things look to my character, or how they seem. Kind…

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@kyronthearcanin

Hello Ava! I like Rina’s design! I’m SarahSmile, and I’m also a home-schooler new to highschool (I’m in 9th grade)!  I like historical fiction and mysteries, but my active WIP is sci-fi. I haven’t really done any fantasy. Some hopefully unasked questions:

1. What’s your favorite color?
2. What time of day do you do the most…

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@kyronthearcanin

Alright, sounds good! Is that to add friends or what? Sorry kinda new to this haha.

Oh just realized what the tag thing was haha.

XD XD

@kyronthearcanin

Here’s my proper response. Nice to meet you Ava! I’m TheArcaneAxiom. I’m a homeschooled writer about to leave highschool! XD I love math and fundamental divine truth, and discussing that through writing. I’m a sci-fi/fantasy writer as well, and I promise that you will see a lot more of that here! My current WIP is actually a…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Hi Ava! Imma tag a bunch of people first, then I’ll respond properly:

@gwyndalf-the-wise, @mineralizedwritings, @loopylin, @esther, @lightoverdarkness6, @godlyfantasy12, @whalekeeper, @acancello, @princesschronicle22, @freedomwriter76, @80strish, @otherworldlyhistorian, @others-I-likely-forgot

@esther-c

Like I often respond to questions like this, is that it depends on you and the kind of story you want to tell. I agree it’s false to objectify all boring parts of a book as unnecessary. A blatant example of this is informational writing, like biographies or textbooks, if you skip through the boring parts, you’ll likely be losing crucial…[Read more]

@katthewriter

I got it on my computer, and I’m seeing the same thing.

@esther-c

Cool! You can be vague if you want. I am curious, but for the sake spoilers, I can be patient. I’m really bad at that, when I’m asked about something about my worldbuilding, even though it would be a spoiler, I just kinda dump it all out. I need to work on being more vague.

@otherworldlyhistorian

Thanks for setting up the forum!

I’ve already talked a lot about the current nature of my universe on the spiritual side. So while I’ll continue working on that more and mention it here, I’ll likely post more about the different religions in my world that are in varying proximity to the truth.

@esther-c

I will sign the petition!

@esther-c

That’s a really great point. So, Ami does know what the sun looks like and what sunrays are. The Orb simulates the weather in a way where it looks pretty real, but it regularly flickers, or doesn’t adjust to the weather outside. For example, weather can penetrate the Orb (like, rain can go through it), but the technology of the Orb was…

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@mineralizedwritings

I like it. However I think the second two could be shortened somehow. At least the second could be turned into Afterthoughts of the Abandoned or something, unless the Left Behind is a particular reference to a group by that name. Either way, they’re good titles for the series!

@esther-c

I love it! I think the descriptions are good, but I do have a few questions. How well simulated is the Orb’s sunrise? Would it look cartoonishly fake? Like a yellow spot going up and down, or does the Orb make it look far more like the real thing, and they just knew it was fake? If it look looks like a giant bright yellow dot that goes…[Read more]

@mkfairygirl

So, the powers are hereditary. And because there is a lot of prejudice and hate between each country, families have stayed in the same country for generations. They don’t leave their country, and they don’t marry outside of it. Am I making any sense, lol?

Cool! Watch Avatar the Last Airbender, it is very akin to this, and it’s jus…[Read more]

@otherworldlyhistorian

I feel like I am more of a taking inspiration from history person because most of the things I do take end up being changed to fit the story and work differently from their real life versions. Usually I use the real history as a basis and then end up tweaking it a bunch. A good example is Laizha Brin. The original…

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@artsy-dragon

These look epic! Is this for anyone’s dragon art? Or do you want this reserved for your portfolio?