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@janellebelovedpig

I’m a senior, so I’m right on the line right now. I agree with what @kyronthearcanin said. What brings you joy? How can you use that gift He’s given you to serve Him? Personally, I’m a pure math nerd, which makes things difficult, because I’m basically boycotting applying my knowledge to reality in any way like physics or…[Read more]

Hi @janellebelovedpig !

Nice to meet you, and welcome to Kingdom pen! I love your name and your declaration of faith that goes with it! I can definitely relate to both of those pigs!

I’m TheArcaneAxiom, I like to create sci fi/fantasy worlds and stories. I love math, and searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring those concepts…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

That sounds like a really fun story! So dragons born without either of these conditions are just without magic, what’s the social dynamic between magical and non magical dragons?

@kyronthearcanin

At least for now yes. Much of it is a mystery to even Liren, because Kirrtes doesn’t really speak to him. It only gives vague emotional impressions, but strict commands. Why does Kirrtes do this, why is it so evil, no one knows…

@mineralizedwritings

I love the poster! I like the expressions you gave them. I feel like it adds to the ‘Nothing important here’ vibe that the title Afterthoughts encapsulates, even though it’s obvious that something important is here.

@kyronthearcanin

All these characters are so good! Oh man, these are kind of characters that if they ever actually died, I would be super, really, really sad lol. I am curious to how Liren and Kirrtes met. (Hmmm. But only he knows. So would you know? Oh wait, you meant in the book…)

Thanks! Means I’m doing something right if they’re pulling h…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! Yeah, I’m kinda all over the place honestly when it comes to worldbuilding. I either just worldbuild on and on, but I need to just sit down and write sometimes.

@kyronthearcanin

I’ll mention four of my favorite characters so far.

Tailen

Though I’ve been talking about Omialia this whole time, Tailen is actually from the peak end of the first era (appears more sci fi), which was a lot more earthlike, as it was an actually solid, spherical ‘planet’. We first meet him when he is pulled into 4 dimensional…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

There was a war, in which the Lupinari and the Serpenree nearly wiped each other out. It was before Dragor became king of the Serpenree, so he himself never actually agreed to it, and probably never would have. The council, anticipating that someday another ruler would try to take over, made the four-planet rule.

So the council…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, sweet, so in that case I’ll get into mostly Omialian cultures (Omialia is the 3rd of 7 eras of my world) because it’s the most developed, then I’ll get into some of my favorite characters separately.

Before we get into what the cultures are like, we must get into what Omialia actually is. Imagen a space of closely clustered…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Alright, so for the legal system, there is what they call the Orythian Council (Orythia is most likely going to be their solar system). It is made up of two representatives from each kingdom on every planet. They usually decide the laws, though they have to be approved by at least four planets to go through. I can try to answer…

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@kyronthearcanin

Also, wish me luck! I’ll be gone from one to three playing music for the school I used to go to. 🙂

Good Luck!

@thearcaneaxiom

Ok, so on my WIP. It always feels kinda hard for me to know where to start, because it is a multiverse. So what would you like to hear about? Some lore, languages, cultures, races, the seven eras of my world, stories, characters the math, ect?

Hi @light-warrior-pen !

Nice to meet you! I’m theArcaneAxiom. I love math, and searching for divine fundamental truth. I like to explore these concepts in creating sci fi/fantasy stories and worlds.

Questions:

Do you enjoy worldbuilding? If so, hard or soft? (Hard meaning concrete rules to follow, and soft meaning more open possibility.)

What…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

There is a group that decides what is and isn’t legal. I’ll get back to you later, because I have some schoolwork to get done lol. I agree that it is very optimistic, and I’m probably going to work on a better system, too.

Sounds good! Good luck on your school work!

@kyronthearcanin

For your first point, that makes a lot of sense, and I’ll look into it.

Sounds good!

Second, yes, there are earth-like creatures in my world, but I think I’m going to add twists to some of them (not quite sure what that means yet lol). Rina, though she can’t remember the name, used to live in a town called Winterknoll, on her h…

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@kyronthearcanin

Ok, so a few things.

It felt a little hand holdy at moments, like the beginning for example: “What if you didn’t know the answer to that secret, the one that was supposed to be yours? It made the situation incredibly difficult.” What is the point of mentioning that this made the situation incredibly difficult? You make a good e…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, that all makes sense, thanks for explaining!

@kyronthearcanin

Interesting. Your characters are fun, and I like the plot you got going. How does Rina discover her power? Does she maybe heal a solider, or herself? Would you like any critiques?

@kyronthearcanin

Also, what’s with the ranks? How does that work? I feel all shady as the Bumbling Henchman lol

It’s based off of the number of posts you’ve made total. I don’t know the different milestone numbers though XD