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    valtmy
    @valtmy
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      @rochellaine

      Oh right. I remember you giving me feedback about how it did not really feel like a parody.

      So my story is actually not really a parody but a political/historical romance with a comedic bent? I’m not very sure anymore. I’m fine if it does not end up really being a parody anyway. I simply started writing this story with the mind to bend certain cliches. 😛

      Yes more detailed comments on the doc would be really helpful. Thanks! 😀

      #75656
      Rochellaine
      @rochellaine
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        @seekjustice @jenwriter17 @valtmy @catwing Hey people!  The first section of Daughter of Judas is ready for comments!!  If anyone wants to read it, let me know and I’ll send you an invite to the document. 😀

        Warning: I do not write anywhere near as fast as SeekJustice or a lot of the people on here, so the progress is slow.  The part you’ll be reading will be only about ten pages long. 😉 (I was trying to get more done before putting it out, but I have a minor case of writer’s block right now, and thought getting some feedback might help. 😛 )

        "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

        #75657
        Jenna Terese
        @jenwriter17
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          @rochellaine Ooh, I’d love to read it! 😀


          @seekjustice
          @valtmy @catwing@dekreel @dragon-snapper @alia @ariel-ashira Anyone on? I’m working on a blog post.

          I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
          www.jennaterese.com

          #75659
          Rochellaine
          @rochellaine
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            @jenwriter17 I think I sent it to you.  Hope you get it all right. 😉

            I’m here, sort of.  I’ll be off and on for a bit.  How’s it going?

            "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

            #75660
            Jenna Terese
            @jenwriter17
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              @rochellaine Oh my I just kinda disappeared didn’t I? are you still here?

              I’m doing pretty well, kinda have a temporary cough because I had a horseback riding clinic today and the arena was SO DUSTY! But yeah, doing okay. 😉 And you?

              I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
              www.jennaterese.com

              #75661
              Jenna Terese
              @jenwriter17
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                @rochellaine I got the invite to your document, thank you! For some reason I can’t get to it on my laptop, and I can only read it on my tablet, which means I can’t comment on the doc. Once I figure out what’s going on with my laptop, I’ll see if I can put in my comments…or I could just tell you here what I think.

                I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                www.jennaterese.com

                #75662
                Rochellaine
                @rochellaine
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                  @jenwriter17 I’m still here, in and out. 😉

                  That’s strange.  Would you like me to try re-inviting you and see if that works?

                  I’d much rather have comments on the document so I don’t lose them in the mires of the forums, 😛 but if it ends up you can’t comment at all I’d love to hear your thoughts anyway, so in that case commenting here would be fine.

                  "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                  #75663
                  Jenna Terese
                  @jenwriter17
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                    signing off… (sorry i missed you @rochellaine 🙁 )

                    I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                    www.jennaterese.com

                    #75664
                    Rochellaine
                    @rochellaine
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                      @jenwriter17 Oh, too bad.  Bye!


                      @seekjustice
                      @valtmy @catwing @dekreel Is anyone else around?

                      "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                      #75665
                      Jenna Terese
                      @jenwriter17
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                        @rochelliane

                        Oh, hello there. 😉 I was just leaving cuz no one seemed to be around, but if you’re gonna be on I’ll stay. 🙂

                        I don’t think re-inviting will do anything; it’s a problem I have to fix on my end. Okay, I’ll do what I can to make the comments on the doc.

                        I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                        www.jennaterese.com

                        #75666
                        Rochellaine
                        @rochellaine
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                          @jenwriter17 I’m doing housework right now, and that’s why my replies are sometimes far between. 😉

                          Sorry to hear about the cough, but glad it’s only temporary. 😀

                          My poison ivy is not getting any better, and I still can barely use my left hand. 🙁 (especially bad since I’m left-handed. 😛 ) But I learned something cool because of it.  I took a typing test yesterday, and found out that I can type 27 words per minute with only one hand! 😀  That’s something I probably would never have thought of trying.

                          What are you working on?

                          "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                          #75667
                          Jenna Terese
                          @jenwriter17
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                            @rochellaine Oh I didn’t know you had poison ivy! that’s terrible; I had it once too, on my arms and my face. (having on your face is the. worst. thing.) Have you tried essential oils? my family uses that for most of our ailments.

                            I’m working on a blog post. 🙂 what are you working on? Oh, I forgot…housework. 😉

                            I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                            www.jennaterese.com

                            #75668
                            Jenna Terese
                            @jenwriter17
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                              @rochellaine Sorry, I have to leave now. 🙁

                              I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                              www.jennaterese.com

                              #75669
                              Rochellaine
                              @rochellaine
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                                @jenwriter17 I have a few remedies I am using.  Hopefully it’ll go away soon. 😉

                                Sorry you had to go, but I guess I wasn’t really here anyway. 😛  I’ll probably be on later tonight.

                                "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                                #75670
                                valtmy
                                @valtmy
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                                  @rochellaine

                                  You can send me an invite.

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