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July 26, 2018 at 9:00 pm #75625
@seekjustice What are you doing?
IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
July 26, 2018 at 9:01 pm #75626Nothing really at the moment, 🙁
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
July 26, 2018 at 9:41 pm #75627@seekjustice Hey, I’m back! Are you still doing nothing? 😉
@catwing Is it because you are a cheshire catwing that you keep disappearing and appearing? 😛@valtny Are you still here?
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
July 26, 2018 at 9:47 pm #75628Yep. I’m attending a talk right now so I have some time between speakers. 😛
July 26, 2018 at 9:50 pm #75629@valtmy Ah, I messed up your tag and you still saw the post! 😀 Hello again. Working on anything in particular?
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
July 26, 2018 at 9:55 pm #75630@rochellaine I had to go help with goats and then came back. Then I had to wash dishes and now I’m back. I think right now its just life. But being cheshire is helpful for that. ;P
I’m also changing one of POVs to first person from third. Fun. 😛IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
July 26, 2018 at 9:59 pm #75631Not really. Can’t really work on anything now. Just here to alleviate some boredom. 😛
July 26, 2018 at 10:03 pm #75632@catwing Have you ever had goats before? Do your goats like to escape their pen?(Have you heard the saying, “if you can throw water through it, a goat can get through it?”)
I imagine it would be helpful. 😛
Ah, I see. I hope it goes smoothly.
@valtmy How long do you have? Do you want something to read to alleviate your boredom? (No promises, but I might have something. 😉 )"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
July 26, 2018 at 10:04 pm #75633Please do. This talk is scheduled until noon.
July 26, 2018 at 10:08 pm #75634@rochellaine This is the first time. 😀 Night number two. No attempted escapes. ;P (Only just now from you… They have and closed off barn thing, inside of a fenced off area, inside of an electric fence. And they wanted to sleep. 😉 )
Indeed. *grins*
So far so fun. XP
@valtmy Noon aka midnight. ;DIMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
July 26, 2018 at 10:08 pm #75635I’m actually reading a book on Lottie Moon at the moment, so I’m not doing nothing anymore!
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
July 26, 2018 at 10:22 pm #75636@valtmy Ok, I found something! 😀
It’s something I’ve been planning to polish up for a while, but keep putting aside.
So, several years ago I wrote a serial story for a “newspaper” my family did just among ourselves (we read the two pages or so every evening together) and I really like the ideas and everything, in fact, it kept my family laughing pretty well. However, since I was only “publishing” one or two paragraphs each day I kind of drew it out and…I don’t know, it doesn’t read quite well straight through. So anyway, you can read it and tear it apart as much as you like. It’s been so long sine I wrote it that I won’t mind if you criticize every other word. 😛
Anyway, here it is:
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
July 26, 2018 at 10:29 pm #75637@catwing Hope for the best. 😛 Our sheep never cared for the electric fence, but knocked it down quite often. Our pygmy goat babies lived inside a six foot tall chicken wire fence, but escaped probably twice a day. (so did the mamas.)
In other words, Good luck! 😉
@seekjustice Cool. Is it by YWAM?"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
July 26, 2018 at 10:37 pm #75638@rochellaine Chicken wire doesn’t sound like something that would keep them in. We’ll see if they ever do. 😉
@seekjustice @valtmy Good night! I got a small bit done, but it is done so that’s good.IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
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