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lol, it’s cool!
awesome, i’ll get cracking! 😉
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000i’m back already, lol
1)Â are lytt, jenis, and jistis part of the keepers?
2)Â where did Ricco escape from?
3)Â who is the POV(s) of the story? (it might help me with the blurb setup)
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000Haha, no problem!
1)Â are lytt, jenis, and jistis part of the keepers?
Whoops, I forgot to answer that one, huh? Simply put, yes.
2)Â where did Ricco escape from?
His manor in Lehen, a town in the southern plains of the center kingdom in the Regions of Mankind. Did that make any sense? XD
3)Â who is the POV(s) of the story? (it might help me with the blurb setup)
*facepalm* Yeah, I guess that’s probably helpful. It’s Jenis and my main main character, Rebere.
"Courage is found in unlikely places." -Gildor Inglorion
Alrighty, here it is. don’t hesitate to change stuff… after all, it is yours 😉
‘There was no warning. No Lytt swooping out of the sky raising an alarm, no Valent thundering into the clearing, no Jenis whooping with his brother. There was just the silence and then the storm.’
Darkness descends on the Regions of Mankind. Lord Delernious, servant of the all-powerful Malvat, is on the loose, terrorizing the people of [insert world name]. To the Keepers of the Nine——power-bearers charged with freeing the world from the clutches of Malvat——Delernious seems to be a ghost; but the victims of his ravaging drive the Keepers to pursue him or pay the price of cowardice.
Tension not only infects the Regions, but it also begins to seep into the Keepers; Lytt is being hunted by a friend-turned-traitor. Brothers Jenis and Jistis encounter their sister, who is scarred by years of desertion, begging for them to abandon their mission and reunite their family.
However, Jenis’s decision between loyalty to his sister and duty to his country is determined for him when his sister, Miara, mysteriously disappears.
With the fate of [insert world name] at stake, as well as the threat of Malvat’s tyrannical power hanging over his head, Jenis must find his sister——and keep his friends from falling apart on the inside——all before it’s too late…Soon, there is only one rule: tread carefully or face the consequences.
Hope you like it!!
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000No problem! Awesome quote, and I LOVE the collage (yup, seriously just looked up that word to make sure I wasn’t spelling ‘college’ by accident 😂)! If I may ask, is each one of those hand pictures indicating a power one of or multiple of your characters have? Either way, they’re super cool. 🙂
(I know you weren’t talking to me, but just wanted to say…) Wow, Ella, that was a really good blurb! 😀
*gaaaaaasp* HOW DID YOU DO THAT?!?! O_O IÂ love it, thx so much for spending your time on it! Excellent work!
If I may ask, is each one of those hand pictures indicating a power one of or multiple of your characters have?
Of course you may ask. 😛 And yes, basically. The lightning one was actually supposed to have something to do with wind, but I forgot about that when I made the collage, haha. I have nine main characters, and the three powers of Fire, Water, and Ice are split between them. I struggled a lot with getting all the loops and circles just right. XD
"Courage is found in unlikely places." -Gildor Inglorion
Well, I’m sure it’s awesome! 😉
Hi! I have a fantasy WIP and I wanted some feedback on some of it if that’s okay…
Warning: I’m like how Gandalf described hobbits discussing family trees, when it comes to my world; “They can sit upon the edge of ruin and discuss family connections to the ninth degree…” something like that XD
What kind of Wip stuff can I post on this? blurbs? plots?
Sorry I’m new, just wanna be sure I am doing stuff right. 😀
I'm 'a homeschooler' because cookie-making writing artistic animal-whisperer isn't a job title
@elfwing Anything you want! Here’s to discussing whatever aspect of your WIP you want to discuss.
Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
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