NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!!

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January 10, 2025 at 2:37 pm #194056
Sara
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@liberty @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD
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January 10, 2025 at 2:48 pm #194061
HighScribe
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@savannah_grace2009

Ok, sounds good!

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January 10, 2025 at 2:54 pm #194063
Esther
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@savannah_grace2009

It doesn’t have to be anything special, tbh. If you just said, “Hey can you get it fully read by the end of February” or something like that, then that would work great. Otherwise, I might just forget or keep putting it off. 😳😂

Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 10, 2025 at 2:55 pm #194064
Sara
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@esther-c

Okay, end of February it is!!!! XDXD

Lukas&Livia
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January 10, 2025 at 2:55 pm #194065
Esther
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@savannah_grace2009

Lol! Ok, awesome, I love it!! 😂

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January 10, 2025 at 2:57 pm #194066
Sara
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@esther-c

😂😂🤣

Lukas&Livia
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333
January 10, 2025 at 3:34 pm #194070
Keilah H.
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@savannah_grace2009 I’m liking it so far!!

I would say things are going a little fast, but that’s not you, it’s how fast I can read.

I love your character and place names, they’re really cool. And each new main character you introduce is really interesting!

I have a story idea which is kinda similar to yours in terms of genre and worldbuilding and now I’m kinda inspired to write it; would you read it if I did?

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 10, 2025 at 3:38 pm #194073
Keilah H.
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Sef and Lilitu’s frog wedding was so funny lol

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 10, 2025 at 3:39 pm #194074
Keilah H.
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I read all of what you had so far!

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 10, 2025 at 3:46 pm #194076
The Ducktator
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@savannah_grace2009

I’m interested! I probably won’t have time until after CWW though.

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January 10, 2025 at 4:25 pm #194085
Sara
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@keilah-h

Wow you do read fast!!!!!!!!!!

XDXD

What did you think???

@theducktator

Sounds good!

Lukas&Livia
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333
January 10, 2025 at 4:25 pm #194086
Sara
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@keilah-h

Yes I’d read it!!!!!!!

Lukas&Livia
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Sef&Chase
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333
January 10, 2025 at 4:48 pm #194092
Keilah H.
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@savannah_grace2009 All righty! I’ll have to write some part of it for you to read.

and yeah I read fast lol

I’ll have to critique it fully tomorrow cause I don’t have time to type out a whole thing but I will get you that feedback!

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 10, 2025 at 5:42 pm #194094
Sara
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@keilah-h

Okay!!!

Sounds good!!!!!!

Lukas&Livia
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January 10, 2025 at 6:41 pm #194096
Liberty
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@savannah_grace2009

Is there anything specific you want us looking for?

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