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July 17, 2024 at 1:35 pm #183039
also your signature, ha!!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
July 17, 2024 at 1:35 pm #183040Oh. Don’t forget Hanna and Neveah and Nico and Indie and Azazel.
Their hearts. Shattered.
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333July 17, 2024 at 1:36 pm #183041I’m not going to break Cass.
Aw man. But he’s my favorite!
Ok fine.
And Eloy
Ooo, this is looking a bit better.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
July 17, 2024 at 1:36 pm #183042You’re enjoying this way too much.
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
July 17, 2024 at 1:36 pm #183043Can you even read the whole thing? It’s going off my screen…
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
July 17, 2024 at 1:36 pm #183044He won’t be your favorite when you meet Marcurious….and Marucurious is BEYOND broken
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333July 17, 2024 at 1:38 pm #183045@highscribeofaetherium I can, I’m on a computer right now.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
July 17, 2024 at 1:40 pm #183046You guys are legit going to hate me XD XD
(And Cass)BUT! at least I’m not like Ellette who’s like ” IT NEEDS TO BE BRUTAL! BREAK HIMMMM!”
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333July 17, 2024 at 1:46 pm #183047You? Most definitely. Cass?
Impossible.
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
July 17, 2024 at 1:46 pm #183048Hahahahahahaha
Ummmmmm
you’ll see
you’ll hate him trust me
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333July 17, 2024 at 1:58 pm #183050July 17, 2024 at 2:04 pm #183053Hmm, I have chosen Cassian and my loyalties are VERY hard to brake. (German blood.lol) However, this does sound interesting.
Marcurious, nice name. Broken character? He had better be strong though. Not soppy and whiny and sad for himself. No milksops for me.
Do bad things to him. Please! Thank you.
BUT! at least I’m not like Ellette who’s like ” IT NEEDS TO BE BRUTAL! BREAK HIMMMM!”
OK, explanation! I LOVE it when bad things happen to the character, because when the rubber meets the road and the mettle meets the fire, you see what the true character is like and that is when they have the chance to become strong and Victorious even in death, (though the power of Christ) or brake into fragments and succumb to the dark. It’s the ones who stay strong that I love!- This reply was modified 4 months, 1 week ago by Ellette Giselle.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
July 17, 2024 at 2:09 pm #183057Haha! I tricked it. for now. It’s still mad at me though. Somehow I need to figure out what is going on and how to fix it.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
July 17, 2024 at 8:03 pm #183073I’VE BEEN STALKING THIS TOPIC. WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING??? I’M SCARED.
The squirrels are collecting more nuts than usual this winter. I've already lost 3 relatives.
July 17, 2024 at 11:31 pm #183076Okay okay okay first of all…
I’m having a @theducktator moment of correcting people’s grammar so don’t take this personally XD XD
But it’s spelled “break” not “brake”. “Brake” is like brakes on a car, “break” is when something actually breaks.
I like it when boys cry in books
that’s just my thing XD XD
Well in that case you’re gonna hate what I do to Cass because let’s just say he won’t be staying strong. Not in the least.
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
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