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July 17, 2024 at 1:35 pm #183039
also your signature, ha!!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 17, 2024 at 1:35 pm #183040Oh. Don’t forget Hanna and Neveah and Nico and Indie and Azazel.
Their hearts. Shattered.
This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.
July 17, 2024 at 1:36 pm #183041I’m not going to break Cass.
Aw man. But he’s my favorite!
Ok fine.
And Eloy
Ooo, this is looking a bit better.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
July 17, 2024 at 1:36 pm #183042You’re enjoying this way too much.
If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.
#wewantourhatback
July 17, 2024 at 1:36 pm #183043Can you even read the whole thing? It’s going off my screen…
If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.
#wewantourhatback
July 17, 2024 at 1:36 pm #183044He won’t be your favorite when you meet Marcurious….and Marucurious is BEYOND broken
This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.
July 17, 2024 at 1:38 pm #183045@highscribeofaetherium I can, I’m on a computer right now.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 17, 2024 at 1:40 pm #183046You guys are legit going to hate me XD XD
(And Cass)BUT! at least I’m not like Ellette who’s like ” IT NEEDS TO BE BRUTAL! BREAK HIMMMM!”
This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.
July 17, 2024 at 1:46 pm #183047You? Most definitely. Cass?
Impossible.
If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.
#wewantourhatback
July 17, 2024 at 1:46 pm #183048Hahahahahahaha
Ummmmmm
you’ll see
you’ll hate him trust me
This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.
July 17, 2024 at 1:58 pm #183050We shall see.
If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.
#wewantourhatback
July 17, 2024 at 2:04 pm #183053Hmm, I have chosen Cassian and my loyalties are VERY hard to brake. (German blood.lol) However, this does sound interesting.
Marcurious, nice name. Broken character? He had better be strong though. Not soppy and whiny and sad for himself. No milksops for me.
Do bad things to him. Please! Thank you.
BUT! at least I’m not like Ellette who’s like ” IT NEEDS TO BE BRUTAL! BREAK HIMMMM!”
OK, explanation! I LOVE it when bad things happen to the character, because when the rubber meets the road and the mettle meets the fire, you see what the true character is like and that is when they have the chance to become strong and Victorious even in death, (though the power of Christ) or brake into fragments and succumb to the dark. It’s the ones who stay strong that I love!-
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Ellette Giselle.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
July 17, 2024 at 2:09 pm #183057Haha! I tricked it. for now. It’s still mad at me though. Somehow I need to figure out what is going on and how to fix it.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
July 17, 2024 at 8:03 pm #183073I’VE BEEN STALKING THIS TOPIC. WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING??? I’M SCARED.
I shall be a vestibule of unhampered sanity.
July 17, 2024 at 11:31 pm #183076Okay okay okay first of all…
I’m having a @theducktator moment of correcting people’s grammar so don’t take this personally XD XD
But it’s spelled “break” not “brake”. “Brake” is like brakes on a car, “break” is when something actually breaks.
I like it when boys cry in books
that’s just my thing XD XD
Well in that case you’re gonna hate what I do to Cass because let’s just say he won’t be staying strong. Not in the least.
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