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    Keilah H.
    @keilah-h
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      @highscribeofaetherium lol

       

      also your signature, ha!!

      Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

      #183040
      Sara
      @savannah_grace2009
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        Oh. Don’t forget Hanna and Neveah and Nico and Indie and Azazel.

        Their hearts. Shattered.

        Lukas&Livia
        #Lalbert
        Sef&Chase
        #HOTTOLINE
        LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

        #183041
        Ellette Giselle
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          @savannah_grace2009

          I’m not going to break Cass.

          Aw man. But he’s my favorite!

          Ok fine.

          And Eloy

          Ooo, this is looking a bit better.

           

           

          Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

          #183042
          HighScribe
          @highscribeofaetherium
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            @savannah_grace2009

            You’re enjoying this way too much.

            Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.

            #183043
            HighScribe
            @highscribeofaetherium
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              @keilah-h

              Can you even read the whole thing? It’s going off my screen…

              Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.

              #183044
              Sara
              @savannah_grace2009
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                @ellette-giselle

                He won’t be your favorite when you meet Marcurious….and Marucurious is BEYOND broken

                Lukas&Livia
                #Lalbert
                Sef&Chase
                #HOTTOLINE
                LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                #183045
                Keilah H.
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                  @highscribeofaetherium I can, I’m on a computer right now.

                  Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                  #183046
                  Sara
                  @savannah_grace2009
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                    @highscribeofaetherium

                    You guys are legit going to hate me XD XD (And Cass)

                    BUT! at least I’m not like Ellette who’s like ” IT NEEDS TO BE BRUTAL!  BREAK HIMMMM!”

                    Lukas&Livia
                    #Lalbert
                    Sef&Chase
                    #HOTTOLINE
                    LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                    #183047
                    HighScribe
                    @highscribeofaetherium
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                      @savannah_grace2009

                      You? Most definitely. Cass?

                      Impossible.

                      Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.

                      #183048
                      Sara
                      @savannah_grace2009
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                        @highscribeofaetherium

                        Hahahahahahaha

                        Ummmmmm

                        you’ll see

                        you’ll hate him trust me

                        Lukas&Livia
                        #Lalbert
                        Sef&Chase
                        #HOTTOLINE
                        LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                        #183050
                        HighScribe
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                          @savannah_grace2009

                          We shall see.

                          Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.

                          #183053
                          Ellette Giselle
                          @ellette-giselle
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                            @savannah_grace2009

                            Hmm, I have chosen Cassian and my loyalties are VERY hard to brake. (German blood.lol) However, this does sound interesting.

                            Marcurious, nice name. Broken character? He had better be strong though. Not soppy and whiny and sad for himself. No milksops for me.

                             

                             

                            Do bad things to him. Please! Thank you.

                             

                             

                            BUT! at least I’m not like Ellette who’s like ” IT NEEDS TO BE BRUTAL! BREAK HIMMMM!”
                            OK, explanation! I LOVE it when bad things happen to the character, because when the rubber meets the road and the mettle meets the fire, you see what the true character is like and that is when they have the chance to become strong and Victorious even in death, (though the power of Christ) or brake into fragments and succumb to the dark. It’s the ones who stay strong that I love!

                            Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                            #183057
                            Ellette Giselle
                            @ellette-giselle
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                              @savannah_grace2009

                              Haha! I tricked it. for now. It’s still mad at me though. Somehow I need to figure out what is going on and how to fix it.

                              Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                              #183073
                              The Ducktator
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                                @savannah_grace2009

                                I’VE BEEN STALKING THIS TOPIC. WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING??? I’M SCARED.

                                The squirrels are collecting more nuts than usual this winter. I've already lost 3 relatives.

                                #183076
                                Sara
                                @savannah_grace2009
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                                  @ellette-giselle

                                  Okay okay okay first of all…

                                  I’m having a @theducktator moment of correcting people’s grammar so don’t take this personally XD XD

                                  But it’s spelled “break” not “brake”. “Brake” is like brakes on a car, “break” is when something actually breaks.

                                   

                                  I like it when boys cry in books

                                  that’s just my thing XD XD

                                   

                                  Well in that case you’re gonna hate what I do to Cass because let’s just say he won’t be staying strong. Not in the least.

                                  Lukas&Livia
                                  #Lalbert
                                  Sef&Chase
                                  #HOTTOLINE
                                  LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

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