My WIP

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    Gwyndalf the Wise
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      @kyronthearcanin

      Sorry for the late response! I don’t have any critique for you today, but great job! =D

      "...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
      (Part of) Isaiah 45:19

      #138410
      Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
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        @gwyndalf-the-wise

        No problem! Thanks!

        Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

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        Keilah H.
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          @kyronthearcanin Cool!! Do you have pictures or something of what each planet looks like? Or a description? I’d love to see pictures of each sentient species, too, if you have them. (If you don’t that’s ok!)

          Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

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          Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
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            @keilah-h

            Unfortunately, the pictures won’t come through, but I’ll get you descriptions later!

            Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

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            Keilah H.
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              @kyronthearcanin That’s ok! It won’t let you do more than one picture in a post for some reason, so that might be why.

              Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

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              Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
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                @keilah-h

                Oh… That makes sense, then. 😅 I’ll try and see with Quelin… The picture is kind of faded, but it should be fine.

                Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

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                Keilah H.
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                  @kyronthearcanin Nice!!

                  Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                  #138502
                  Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
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                    @keilah-h

                    It worked! Ok, I’ll do the rest now. 🤣

                    Can’t remember for the life of me if I showed this one of Rina already, but I’ll show her anyway…

                    Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

                    #138503
                    Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
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                      @keilah-h

                      Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

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                      Keilah H.
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                        @kyronthearcanin Cool!! I really like your character designs.

                        Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

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                        Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
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                          @keilah-h

                          Thanks!

                          Anyway, those are the main races I’ve drawn. I have Falcor and Arcanin somewhere, but can’t find them… The Falcor are pretty much talking birds, and the Arcanin are just bears with stars on their foreheads. Here’s a quick drawing of the solar system, cause I can’t find the one I drew earlier. The picture is kind of bad, but okay. 🤣😅

                          Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

                          #138507
                          Keilah H.
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                            @kyronthearcanin Awesome!

                            Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

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                            Faith
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                              @kyronthearcanin

                              Just read all three chapters and saw all the drawings, and I love it all! I’m really looking forward to another chapter!

                              "does anyone have any good ideas?"
                              "Oh yeah, but none for this"

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                              Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)
                              @kyronthearcanin
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                                @awsumfaith

                                Aww, thanks! I’ll probably post another soon. 🙂

                                While most of my WIPs end up getting put to the side at least for a little while, this one can’t really do that, because I’m part of a writing group. Basically I have to get a chapter done at least every two weeks, and that’s pushing it. It helps cause they can catch things like small mistakes and even plotholes, because I am definitely a pantser lol. 🤣

                                Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.

                                #138872
                                Faith
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                                  @kyronthearcanin

                                  Lol, yeah I get it. 😂

                                  I’m the opposite, I’ve gotta work out every plot detail before I start writing. I’ve got pretty much nothing written for mine, and I’ve been working on it for a year 😬😅😂

                                  "does anyone have any good ideas?"
                                  "Oh yeah, but none for this"

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