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March 25, 2023 at 2:56 pm #138407
Sorry for the late response! I don’t have any critique for you today, but great job! =D
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19March 25, 2023 at 3:27 pm #138410March 25, 2023 at 8:22 pm #138458@kyronthearcanin Cool!! Do you have pictures or something of what each planet looks like? Or a description? I’d love to see pictures of each sentient species, too, if you have them. (If you don’t that’s ok!)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 25, 2023 at 8:56 pm #138468Unfortunately, the pictures won’t come through, but I’ll get you descriptions later!
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
March 26, 2023 at 2:14 pm #138498@kyronthearcanin That’s ok! It won’t let you do more than one picture in a post for some reason, so that might be why.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 26, 2023 at 2:17 pm #138499Oh… That makes sense, then. 😅 I’ll try and see with Quelin… The picture is kind of faded, but it should be fine.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
March 26, 2023 at 2:18 pm #138501@kyronthearcanin Nice!!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 26, 2023 at 2:18 pm #138502It worked! Ok, I’ll do the rest now. 🤣
Can’t remember for the life of me if I showed this one of Rina already, but I’ll show her anyway…
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
March 26, 2023 at 2:19 pm #138503Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
March 26, 2023 at 2:20 pm #138504@kyronthearcanin Cool!! I really like your character designs.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 26, 2023 at 2:22 pm #138505Thanks!
Anyway, those are the main races I’ve drawn. I have Falcor and Arcanin somewhere, but can’t find them… The Falcor are pretty much talking birds, and the Arcanin are just bears with stars on their foreheads. Here’s a quick drawing of the solar system, cause I can’t find the one I drew earlier. The picture is kind of bad, but okay. 🤣😅
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
March 26, 2023 at 2:23 pm #138507@kyronthearcanin Awesome!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
March 30, 2023 at 8:03 pm #138870Just read all three chapters and saw all the drawings, and I love it all! I’m really looking forward to another chapter!
"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"March 30, 2023 at 8:47 pm #138871Aww, thanks! I’ll probably post another soon. 🙂
While most of my WIPs end up getting put to the side at least for a little while, this one can’t really do that, because I’m part of a writing group. Basically I have to get a chapter done at least every two weeks, and that’s pushing it. It helps cause they can catch things like small mistakes and even plotholes, because I am definitely a pantser lol. 🤣
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
March 30, 2023 at 8:50 pm #138872Lol, yeah I get it. 😂
I’m the opposite, I’ve gotta work out every plot detail before I start writing. I’ve got pretty much nothing written for mine, and I’ve been working on it for a year 😬😅😂
"does anyone have any good ideas?"
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