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August 23, 2025 at 11:55 am #205329
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @libertyTWO CHAPTERS
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 23, 2025 at 12:37 pm #205331Oh boy…
Those were great. Didn’t really see anything that needed to be fixed. I like how we get to see both sides of it now.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
August 23, 2025 at 1:04 pm #205332Don’t worry, I didn’t think you were frustrated. But yeah, we can discuss it for fun if you want, even if just to help you figure out why you believe what you believe. Probably on a separate forum from here, though.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
August 23, 2025 at 2:01 pm #205333@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
Another chapter.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 23, 2025 at 2:14 pm #205334Ellette!! What are you going to do to them!? ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
August 23, 2025 at 2:19 pm #205335don’t look at me like that!
What makes you think i’m going to DO anything?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 23, 2025 at 2:20 pm #205336I’m scared for them…
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
August 23, 2025 at 3:22 pm #205337pfft! Why? They’re like my favorite characters in the book.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 23, 2025 at 3:22 pm #205338@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
4th chapter today.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 25, 2025 at 11:28 am #205349
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 25, 2025 at 11:29 am #205350ugh. Still doesn’t work.
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty1st chapter of today.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 25, 2025 at 12:53 pm #205352@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
another new chapter!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 25, 2025 at 1:50 pm #205353Aww. Those were good.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
August 25, 2025 at 2:03 pm #205354Thanks!
More in a minute….
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 25, 2025 at 2:26 pm #205355@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
a third new chapter!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
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