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@gracie-j Gracie!!! Your quotes are so lovely!! I want to like, embroider one on a wall hanging or something.
@joy-caroline Ahhh, I love those!!
@godlyfantasy12 Ooh I already love Cecily! I get such a clear picture with just that one quote.
@e-k-seaver Hah, I love that. XD
@writerlexi1216 Hehe, thanks! I could definitely see Caira saying that. 😀 Also, I’ll have you know that I laughed out loud at the Caira/Alana exchange (and also the Deek/Newton one). And I love Caira’s little speech about power–it’s quite beautiful.“Seven seconds till the end. Time enough for you. Perhaps. But what will you do with it?”
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Haha, thank you!! I love Caira and Alana because they’re total opposites, and yet they’re best friends. It’s fun to write their dialogue/interactions 🙂 And Deek and Newton are great, too <33333333
Thanks! I need to polish it a little more… but she has some powerful (and quite humorous) quotes 😀
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@writerlexi1216 Girl, those are (1) so profound and (2) HILARIOUS!!!! Fantastic job!!!
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@lewilliams Oh my gosh, thank you!! I’m so glad you like them!
@gracie-j
Lol, thanks, girl!! 🙂 Quotes are one of my favorite things to write!
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@writerlexi1216 Of course! I can tell! You’re so good with them!
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@writerlexi1216 You’re so welcome! Thank you! <3
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Wow, I could just see those sentences come to life:)@joy-caroline
Those are so beautiful! 😀
@godlyfantasy12
I love it! November’s POV is so much fun to read:)
@e-k-seaver
I love that paragraph, it was so funny:)
@lewilliams
I love those! Especially number three:) Two and four made me laugh XD
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Oh my word, I love those! Especially the one with Newton and Deek. It was so HILARIOUS XD I could literally see them saying that:)- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Thanks, Abigail!
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@abigail-m Thank you! 🙂
Haha, thank you!! That’s totally them XD
- This is such a great topic and I’m rather late in posting, but anyway, here are a few, more random pieces of dialogue/script scenes that I always was partial to or thought would be good for this topic:)“Why did she not leave me as I said too?” Filip said, his eyes were full of spite for himself, “why did she not just get to safety like I told her?” His fear had turned into worry and his worry had turned into anger.
Morio took a seat on a rock and sighed wearily, “because. That is not who Mejia is, Filip,” he said gravely, “you have to understand that if there was a fire, she would shield you from it. If there was harm in your path, she would get you away from it and if there was an avalanche…” he paused, “ she would shove you out of the way before thinking about herself. Mejia is a leader Filip, and you will never be able to change that about her.” - Mejia saw a flaw in the dome of wolves that was enclosed around them, they had forgotten-
But Filip broke into Mejia’s thoughts just then with the question, “do you have a plan?” Mejia gave him an annoyed look, “yes and you are in the middle of interrupting it, thank you for asking.” - “Birch Woods’ fate is still hanging,” Mejia could barely talk, “we must find out what is going on. The answer already has too high of a price.”
- Mejia dropped the letter in the snow and staring straight ahead, knew she had one choice and one choice only. She took a step away from everyone else and began walking into the woods, in the direction of her fortalice.
Filip picked up the letter and read it.
“Mejia, do not be stupid,” Filip said, running after her.
Mejia hardly even turned her head and said, “look, Filip, there is not much choice here. I have to,” Mejia glanced back at Lila and Anton, “but listen, I need you to do something for me in the meantime.” - Gliding through the rocks. They both sensed that this was going far too smoothly. When suddenly Mejia stood stone still, in a way that Filip now knew rather well and it made his blood run cold.
“They are here, aren’t they?” He asked. - “The coinage could have been that of a dragon’s hoard,” Anton suggested suddenly as if he had come up with a brilliant solution.
Everyone except Mejia, began to grin, thinking that Anton was jesting. But when they saw the dead-serious expression he bore across his face, they sobered.
“Anton, you can not be serious!” Filip said, thoroughly shocked.
“Oh, yes he is…” Mejia said, sighing.
What was the matter with Anton anyway? He always seemed so intelligent.
“All I am saying,” Anton said as if he were trying to be reasonable, “is that it is a POSSIBILITY. That is all.”
Everyone exchanged dubious glances, Mejia rubbed her forehead in exasperation. - “Sometimes, we all need to coddiwomple in order to not lose the adventure in us.”
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