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March 28, 2023 at 9:19 pm #138750
Ah, brain malfunction, I know this all too well
"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"March 28, 2023 at 9:22 pm #138751March 28, 2023 at 9:23 pm #138752ErRoR eRRor ErrOr
“Everything is a mountain”
March 28, 2023 at 9:23 pm #138753Ahh, yes. That’s the most annoying
"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"March 28, 2023 at 11:39 pm #138758Karci sounds very intriguing! It sounds like your really digging into the deeper political dynamics going on.
Random outside quote: There is a road to freedom. Its milestones are Obedience, Endeavor, Honesty, Order, Cleanliness, Sobriety, Truthfulness, Sacrifice, and love of the Fatherland. -Adolf Hitler
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I can agree that I feel like it is sometimes best not to redeem characters. I will say that I do think Hans will be a very good villain (and I feel he will probably have a good arc).
Yep!
@freedomwriter76
Yep…sadly, but it is true, and that’s how Hans is. I guess he’s also gotten to a point where he doesn’t think he needs a savior, and he certainly doesn’t want one. He actually decides to take himself out rather than be captured by American forces…that’s how his arc ends 😬😢
That’s so sad:( Yeah, I’ve met many people in my life that feel that way about their Savior. It really hurts to see your spiritual brothers and sisters go astray, but that’s what this life is for, separating the wheat from the tares😔
That’s a great analogy, actually 😲😉🥰
Thanks😅
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He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
March 29, 2023 at 3:17 pm #138787Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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That’s so sad:( Yeah, I’ve met many people in my life that feel that way about their Savior. It really hurts to see your spiritual brothers and sisters go astray, but that’s what this life is for, separating the wheat from the tares😔
I know…😢 Yes, and even though it hurts, it sadly has to happen, though I wish everyone would choose to be redeemed. 🙁
Thanks😅
Yw!!! 🥰
March 29, 2023 at 3:22 pm #138790@freedomwriter76
I love Ami and Ev!!! ❤️❤️❤️ (okay…okay…especially Ev 😂)
Thx!!
lol. Of course! 😉 😆(I do too. 🤭)
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
March 29, 2023 at 3:22 pm #138791Thanks!! 😊 They definitely are!
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
March 29, 2023 at 3:31 pm #138792Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@EVERYONE
I wanna talk about more charries XD
OOH, I don’t get to talk about this MC (from another WIP, mind you) much!!! 😁😁😁
Abelard Elias Schneider
23 years old, with bright blonde slightly curly hair, bright blue eyes, and a pale complexion, Abelard is the spitting image of the “Aryan” ideal look. He’s a fighter, protective, stubborn, courageous, has quite high energy levels, and can be quite the flirt at times.
He grew up in Germany with a small, close-knit family. Both of his parents are Christians who have always tried to steer their 2 kids in the right direction.
Abelard has a twin sister, Aadelheide, and the two of them were inseparable in their childhood and teen years.
Sadly, their father died when the two of them were only 14 years old. But thankfully, that’s when Abelard’s new friend, Leon Wagner, stepped into their lives, becoming almost like the brother Abelard never had, and Leon quickly fell in love with Aadelheide.
Raised by his single mother from then on, life was hard for Abelard’s family. And shortly before war arrived in 1939, when Abelard was 17 going on 18, he decided Germany wasn’t the place for him and was set on leaving. The argument he had with his mother, twin sister, and brother-in-law was fairly ugly, and he regrets the harsh words he said every day of his life.
After he left Germany, he moved to England, and now, he fights as a fighter pilot for the RAF (Royal Air Force). But even so, most English aren’t willing to accept this German into their community, especially the other fighter pilots and plane crews.
At least Abelard has his new best friend Neesh, a Jewish 18-year-old lad from the English countryside that was sent to England by his Jewish-German parents in 1939 right before Germany’s invasion of Poland.
On one night, he and Neesh are sent on a secret mission to drop Neesh into enemy territory to work as a spy, but their plane is hit and they are forced to crash in Nazi-Occupied France.
In Germany, Abelard is labeled as a traitor, and in England, he’s seen as the Nazi enemy.
Will he ever be accepted anywhere?
His arc mainly has to do with him finding out his identity, realizing that who he is, what he’s worth, is not defined by others, but rather by Christ, and only in Christ can he find his true identity.
Here’s his aesthetic/moodboard❤️:
March 29, 2023 at 3:33 pm #138794Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@esther-c Yw!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Ev is just too lovable!🥰XD
March 29, 2023 at 3:46 pm #138800Oooh, Karci sounds so interesting!! 😀
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
March 29, 2023 at 3:49 pm #138802@freedomwriter76
AHH, why have I not heard about Abelard until now?! He is so cool!!! I love him!!! 😆
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
March 29, 2023 at 3:51 pm #138804Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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AHH, why have I not heard about Abelard until now?!
idk…I guess I forget about him at times…XD😅 His book is on backburner, I guess that’s why, lol! 😂
He is so cool!!! I love him!!! 😆
Aww, thanks!!! ❤️❤️❤️ Aww, I’m glad!!! 🥰😁
March 29, 2023 at 3:54 pm #138807@freedomwriter76
idk…I guess I forget about him at times…XD😅 His book is on backburner, I guess that’s why, lol! 😂
Lol, no biggie. 😁 I get that. 😉
Aww, thanks!!! ❤️❤️❤️ Aww, I’m glad!!! 🥰😁
Yw! 😀
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
March 29, 2023 at 3:57 pm #138808Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@esther-c I have so many to keep track of…XD 😁😅🥰
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