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@awsumfaith Aww, thanks! ❤️❤️❤️ He’s actually one of my fav side characters…XD
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Lol 😂 I always end up loving my side characters more than the MCs 😂
"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"Ok so here are a few of my narrators from the first book in The Kharvian Anthology (it doesn’t have a title yet but is set in the fictional country of Karpenta and is set before the Great War begins (this happens at the end of it)) I didn’t make boards (@freedomwriter76 I love your character boards) but I did grab a random quote that I did not make for each of my charries.
Thadra Korin, is the Karpentan manager of trade and import. She is around 50 and somewhat smaller in stature. She comes from a semi well established family and also married into one of the most powerful families in Karpenta. Her husband, Timurlyn, is the brother of Karpentas current Director (the title of their lead executive). Thadra is a follower of Syzhism. She is kind and cares for others but she is willfully ignorant to the transgressions committed by other members of the upper Ramis class. She ends up working with Veircin in an attempt to stop the increase in smuggling and illegal weapons trafficking in Karpenta.
Random outside quote: You may choose to look the other way but you can never say again that you did not know. – William Wilberforce
Veircin Ravil, is a RIA (the secret police of Karpenta) agent who is ostracised for his theories of a growing conspiracy. Veircin is younger and also kind of tall. He has black hair. Veircin obsessively follows his interpretation of the Ramis legal code and the Syzhist Zhera (basically the bible). A lot of people think he is kind of crazy and discredit him but he is actually really intelligent and good at his job. Veircin is also proficient in pink (time manipulating) aether. He ends up being assigned to help the trade manager Thadra Korin with tracking down and stopping the illegal smuggling activities. Yet their investigation soon exposes deeper threats than just some arms dealers.
Random outside quote: I am the law and the law is not mocked! – Javert
Fera Ferin, is a popular and super intelligent student at the University of Karlon (the most prestigious Karpentan University). She was a poor orphaned Feyin (Feyins are a minority group within Karpenta) who climbed out of poverty and made it to Karlon on a full scholarship because she is super intelligent. She is also a popular jerk who leads a group of mean girls and is one of the most prestigious students at the school. Her cruelty and carefully curated image are actually a front. Fera hates the Karpentans because of long pasting animosity between the Feyins and Karpantans that is a resultant of the Karpantans subjugation and take over of Fey (which happened over a hundred years ago) and the continued oppression and prejudice against them. Fera is a member of a Feyin nationalist group which is seeking to free Fey from Karpentan control and establish a new Feyin state. Yet her time in Karlon has challenged these beliefs forcing her to question how much she is willing to betray.
Random outside quote: Doing the right thing is not the problem. Knowing what the right thing is, that’s the challenge. – Lyndon B. Johnson
Through darkness,
light shines brightest@freedomwriter76
Also @freedomwriter76 Hans is really cool. I love his backstory.
Through darkness,
light shines brightestLiren is quite interesting. The Wraith are also intriguing.
Through darkness,
light shines brightest@awsumfaith, I love Ridge and Anika!! 😍 They’re my favorites of your charries! They sound so cute together!!
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @thearcaneaxiom @otherworldlyhistorian @whalekeeper @loopylin
Like always, y’all’s charries are ✨amazing✨!! 😉 😄
Imma post my charries soon!! (Soon, as in later this evening or tomorrow. 🙃)
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
Yes! They’re slowly becoming my favorite characters, I’m becoming obsessed 😂😂😂
I love Fera’s name!
"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"Thanks! I really like your also!
"Would you kindly...?"
I really like your character Naolin!! I love the ocean and a sea fairy sounds amazing!
He must increase, but I must decrease.
@freedomwriter76
Thanks! 🥰
Ooh, your charries sound so interesting! 😲 I already loved N’Nesha and Liren tho…so…y’know…XD But the other two sound really cool too!!! 😁
I feel so bad for Liren…😭 I hope he has at least a semi-happy ending…❤️
Thanks to you too! I’ve seen a few of your characters already as well, but not all of them, your villain really seems interesting, will he ever get a redemption, or is his story to end in tragedy?
As always, your world building is amazing, especially with Tailen and the fourth dimension. I also really like N’nesha. A race of people who are naturally born with a dual personality is a really interesting concept.
Also, poor Liren. 😢
Thanks! Yeah, poor Liren *evil laugh for being the cause of all his pain
Dante is so cute by the way! I haven’t had a chance to learn much about him until now.
You’re characters with all the dimensions and stuff are very intriguing! I really like them
Thanks! Your characters are really cool too! It’s awesome how you base them off of real people you know and love!
Liren is quite interesting. The Wraith are also intriguing.
Thanks! Yeah, Liren is my favorite character right now. I like how you added the quotes for your characters. They all seem really interesting, and it sounds like you have a lot of interesting dynamics for them as characters.
Like always, y’all’s charries are ✨amazing✨!! 😉 😄
Thanks! As are all the ones I’ve seen from you so far!
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
Yes! They’re slowly becoming my favorite characters, I’m becoming obsessed 😂😂😂
Lol. I think every author becomes obsessed with their charries at some point or another. 😂😂
@awsumfaith @freedomwriter76 @otherworldlyhistorian @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @acancello @whalekeeper @thearcaneaxiomSo… I know most of y’all know a lot about ma charries already, but I’m gonna talk about them anyway. 😁 ☺️
These are the two MCs in Ember of Hope, book one in The Endoxos Trilogy.
First off, we have Amidala Nadir. She’s a considerate and kind 16 year-old girl. While she’s content inside the Orb (see explanation of the Orb at the bottom of the post), she tends to worry often. Yes, she trusts in her Savior, but sometimes it’s so hard to trust Him when they live in a world like they do.
Her MBTI personality is ISFJ-T. She’s typically quiet around those she doesn’t know and is a natural introvert. She’s normally extroverted, though, when she’s with those she knows and is comfortable around. Ami can put on a calm exterior, but on the inside, she’s often worried in stressful situations. Her best friend Everton tends to help her relax and loosen up a bit in stressful situations. (She actually really likes him though she’ll never admit it. ☺️)
She often puts others ahead of herself and looks for the good in all people. She’s very observant and notices small things about people. She loves to be outside, enjoying God’s creation. Her favorite hobby is art, whether that be drawing, sketching, painting, or crafting something with her hands.
Her biggest struggles are trying to be the perfect Christian and worrying instead of trusting God.
Next, we have Everton Barlowe, a fiery 17 year-old and Ami’s best friend since forever. He’s not afraid to stand up for what’s right, and sometimes that gets him into trouble. He’s impulsive and often doesn’t think through things. Despite making impulsive decisions often, he tries his best to protect those he loves. He doesn’t leave room for failure, even though he makes mistakes often. He can also be cocky and occasionally a flirt. (Especially with Ami, whom he likes as more than a friend. 🤭)
His MBTI personality is ESTP-T. He’s always ready to try something new and loves a good adventure, which is what he gets when he agrees to join Ami’s family on their journey. For as long as he can remember, he’s longed to escape the Orb and have freedom. But not only does he want freedom from the Orb, he wants freedom from his father.
His father demands only perfection from his sons. Ev tries so hard to measure up, but can never seem to reach his father’s standards. This results in him thinking he is a failure, despite the self-confidence he displays.
His biggest struggles are thinking he is a failure and looking for freedom in all the wrong places.
So yep, those are my MCs! (I could go on forever talking about them! XD) I could also delve into their families if you’d like… 😏 (I will warn you, Ami has five other family members and Ev has four other family members. 😅)
Explanation for the Orb: The Orb was put in place by a man named Bayron Len twenty years before the story takes place. It is a technological wonder, and no scientists except the ones who built it know how it works. (Some even think that maybe Len used more than man-made technology…) It slowly closed in on the nation of Aletheia, trapping them. It is easily escaped and it smoothly passes over all buildings. Len’s guards keep the people from escaping. While Len wants to keep the peace inside the Orb and not let anyone get hurt, his guards aren’t as merciful to those who try to escape.
(Oh, and here are Ami’s and Ev’s moodboards!!)
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
If you can’t tell, Ev might be my favorite… 😜
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
Thanks! As are all the ones I’ve seen from you so far!
Yw!! 😄
Aw, thanks so much!! 😊
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
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