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@acancello @whalekeeper @awsumfaith ooh, epic charries, y’all!!! Love them!!! ❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰
@loopylin You already know I love yours XD❤️❤️❤️ But I shall say it again: I love your charries!!! 😍I love them! The Royal and their bodyguard as lovers is one of my favorite tropes 💕
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
@kyronthearcanin @freedomwriter76 Thanks!
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
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And now I wanna talk about more charries XD
I GUESS I should talk about my main Villain of my main WIP(s), huh? 😅😂
Welp…here we go!!! XD
Hans Theodore Baumann
56 years old, with gray hair that was once blonde, coal-colored eyes, and a pale complexion. At 56, Hans has lived a long, albeit bad, life.
The middle child of three boys, he knows what it’s like to be the middle brother and sometimes being overlooked. But his rambunctiousness in his childhood made up for that. Hah, his parents never forgot him, that was for certain.
He’s hard-working, calm (most of the time), unruffled for the most part, conniving, manipulative, cruel, sadistic, and quite the planner. He’s a German and a high-rank officer (like, a colonel, something along those lines) in the SS. He’s married to a German woman and has three sons, aged 26 years, 20 years, and 16 years.
He’s a man that is outright hostile towards Jews and long ago vowed to never, ever, believe in God ever again.
He grew up in an abusive home, with both his father and his stepmother being cruel. His mother died when his baby brother was little, and he has missed her almost his entire life. His abusive home and the disillusionment WWI gave him when he fought in it changed him into the man he is now.
He was once nicer…better…just…kinder.
But his parents, people who merely claimed to be so-called “Christians”, hurt him, and church people judged him. If they represent Jesus, why would Hans want anything to do with God at all?
His heart hardened…as he chose to let it harden that way.
And that is why he’s the man he is today.
Here’s his aesthetic/moodboard:
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Wow…that was a lot of things about Hans XD
@loopylin Yw!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️@freedomwriter76
Yay! Villains! XD
I like how realistic Hans’ motivation and backstory is. And his mood board looks really good too. 🙂
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
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@loopylin Quite XD
Thanks!!! His backstory has been a more recent thing thought up…and I still don’t like him, but it’s important to me to know where he came from and what happened that helped make him the man he is today 😉 Glad it’s realistic! Aww, thanks, they’re always so much fun to make! XD❤️🥰
Love everyone’s characters!
Thanks for the topic! Your characters sound really fun!
That fills in a few gaps for me, they’re really cool! Thanks for sharing!
Yeah! I’ve heard a lot about your incredible world, but non of your characters yet (other than some historical figures), I can’t wait to here about them!
Here’s a few from my wip:
Tailen
Tailen is from the peak end of the first era of my wip(appears more sci fi), an earthlike point in my worlds ‘geographic’ history, as it was an actually solid, spherical ‘planet’. We first meet him when he is pulled into 4 dimensional space by 4d creatures they simply call phantoms. For whatever reason, he is placed back into the 3d plane. However, he does not walk away unharmed. Before he was sent back, he was rotated by a 4 dimensional axis. What this would mean from a 3 dimensional perspective is he would basically become his mirror self (His heart would be on the other side and stuff). You may not think that this is too much of a problem, but it’s a big issue. There is this property in nature called homochirality. This means that things like sugars, proteins, dna, ect, all either have the same right handed chirality, or a left handed chirality. The helix of dna spins all the same direction in all of nature for intuition of what that means. This property of nature exists to maximize efficiency. Now if something were to enter our biosphere where any of these chirality’s are flipped, it would be biologically incompatible with everything else. Thus Tailen here, being suddenly biologically incompatible with everything else, will essentially starve. He can still drink water, but any food would do nothing for his body, and wouldn’t have much flavor. So at most, he essentially has a month to live. Does he accept it, or does he strive to find a way to cheat death…?
137-1618Z “Thing” (A better name will be given to her eventually, but for now, that’s all she is to Tailen)
137-1618z is a little robot that is paired up with Tailen when he is brought to the Wraith. The Wraith being a facility that specializes in studying everything about the 4th dimension, the phantoms, and their victims (spoiler alert, they aren’t the good guys). When the Wraith took Tailen, they gave him the quote “most compatible personality” companion in the form of a robot. 137-1618Z, or Thing he eventually starts calling her. She loves to talk and talk and talk about any random fact that may or may not be relevant, and is more than eager to answer any question Tailen asks. Tailen at this point is not fond of her, calling her, it, the robot, and now after asking him about it, he dubbed her Thing, to which she was overjoyed by the idea of having a name. To Tailen, though he doesn’t like her, she seems to be the only thing with any actual personality in the Wraith. Is she really a friendly robot, or is Tailen right to be unkind…?
N’nesha
N’nesha is a Shal’le from the third era, called Omialia, in my world. Here is a very small summery on the Shal’le: The Shal’le are a people with two lines of thought, where we only have one. This influences their language, culture, and everything else. Think like a whole race and culture of people with dual personality disorder and/or split-mind. While the culture is well developed, N’nesha isn’t really quite yet. That being said, at the point of her story, she has just found Rrachelek, a vital part of their identity and progress, where you master both sides of yourself. She aspires to learn many magical languages, and this is the point where she may be able to persue that. Her two sides, Neshe and Nele, like to play the roles of pessimist and optimist to oversimplify their dynamic. She mastered both sides, but which will ultimately be right about her future…?
Liren
Liren is a man who’s past is unknown to all but himself. Non even know his true name. He wields a sword, Kirrtes. The reality is that Kirrtes controls Liren completely. Kirrtes is the master here, and Liren can only watch. When Kirrtes pierces flesh of any kind, Liren suddenly is enveloped into that persons mind, feeling every pain and emotion, as they watch a monster look down at them with a blade imbedded in their chest. For this, Liren hates Kirrtes, but for the same reason, he hates himself even more. Will he ever be freed of this, if so, what would he do…?
He is perfect in Justice, yet He is perfect in Mercy, even when we fail Him. For this, He is good.
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@thearcaneaxiom Thanks! 🥰
Ooh, your charries sound so interesting! 😲 I already loved N’Nesha and Liren tho…so…y’know…XD But the other two sound really cool too!!! 😁
I feel so bad for Liren…😭 I hope he has at least a semi-happy ending…❤️
As always, your world building is amazing, especially with Tailen and the fourth dimension. I also really like N’nesha. A race of people who are naturally born with a dual personality is a really interesting concept.
Also, poor Liren. 😢“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
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Wow, your characters are making me very interested in the story!
You’re characters with all the dimensions and stuff are very intriguing! I really like them
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@awsumfaith Aww, thanks!!! ❤️❤️❤️ I’m glad you’re interested! Yours sounds really interesting too!!! 🙂
I have a whole lot more charries I could talk about…just ask everyone on KP…no one can keep track of all of my characters XD
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Thanks!
Lol 😂 well, personally I never get tired of hearing about characters and worlds
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@awsumfaith Yw!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Haha, same! XD I just don’t know if everyone will be fine with it…so I don’t go on writer rants unless I know the person loves my story/characters already XDXDXD
so…OOH, I’m gonna talk about a side character I don’t get to talk about enough. XD
Ezekiel Reiner Gessner
He’s my 30-year-old German Pastor, with light brown curly hair, a pale complexion, and bright blue eyes.
He’s hard-working, protective, devoted, faithful, courageous, and will do anything and everything he can to fight for what’s right. He’s a husband to a German woman and a father to three young kids, aged 6 years, 4 years, and 1 year.
He grew up in a pretty normal home, growing up as the middle child of three boys. Yeah, they got into trouble a lot. Their parents did their best to teach their sons about God, but their father, who fought in WWI, was pretty emotionally distant and always had a hard time showing his sons the love he wanted to show them.
But nonetheless, Ezekiel grew up and gained a strong faith in God.
Both his older brother and younger brother are both fighting for the Nazis. His older brother, Gerhard, is a high-rank officer in the Wehrmacht, fighting on the Western front, whereas his younger brother, Kurt, is a Lieutenant in the SS and works under Hans Baumann. But Ezekiel?
He stands in direct opposition to the Nazi Government.
They stand for things he cannot agree with. In fact, his church is mostly made up of Messianic Jews, many of whom are slowly disappearing, being sent to Ghettos and Camps.
The government has even tried to rewrite the Bible.
And with innocent people on the line, Ezekiel has to stand on his Biblical convictions, and thus stand against the Nazis.
He even leads the local Anti-Nazi resistance group, the “Violet Iris’.”
But standing up for the truth can come at a cost in Nazi Germany.
Here’s his aesthetic/moodboard:
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