Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too)

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    Anonymous
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      @euodia-vision 🤣🤣🤣

      #145227
      whaley
      @whalekeeper
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        @euodia-vision

        So many issues.

        “Everything is a mountain”

        #145252
        Anonymous
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          I wanna talk about another baby!!!!! 🥹😭

          who has quickly become a fav and now it’s getting hard for me to do what i have to do in the book he’s in, hehhhhhhh

          My 26-year-old, sweet, brotherly, broken boi, who’s made a lot of mistakes but is trying to make up for them, and is eventually redeemed, saved by Christ, and is baptized.

          An officer in the German Luftwaffe, having come from a broken childhood background, Dietrich’s never had life easy, but he’s learned to stay positive, and to make the most of even bad situations. Where once he would have done anything to keep only himself protected, Dietrich slowly realizes that he’s better than that, and determines to give everything he has to do what’s right…no matter what it costs.

          He has an older brother, Adolphus, two younger half-sisters, Annalise and Steffi, and five stepbrothers, Leo, Joshua, Jakob, Reuben, and Wolfgang (THE BOIS!!!) and a mother, Frida (Evil lady 😡) and a stepfather, Felix (don’t care too much for him either, but he may be redeemed 🥰)

          SNIPPETS

          Dietrich pulled something out from behind his back and held it out to Frau Adelmann. “I got some medicine for Wolfgang.”

          Jakob’s fists instantly unclenched.

          Medicine…medicine for…Wolfgang…?

          Frau Adelmann’s eyes brightened with tears, and she wrapped her arms around Dietrich, hugging him tight. “Oh, Dietrich, you have no idea how much this means…thank you so very much!”

          “You’re welcome.” Dietrich replied softly, hugging her before letting her go.

          Frau Adelmann wiped away tears and smiled up at Dietrich. “You should probably get going now. If your stepfather or mother finds out you were here when you shouldn’t be…” She trailed off, leaving the rest of the words unspoken…but everyone in the room understood where she was going.

          Dietrich nodded, putting his hat back on. “I’ll be going now…I just thought Wolfgang would want and need some medicine.”

          He began walking away.

          Dietrich had bought Wolfgang medicine…? Why?

          “Dietrich, wait.”

          Dietrich turned around, just at the corner, to face Jakob. “…Yes?”

          “…Thank you…”

          Dietrich smiled. “What else are brothers for?”

          (he’s so sweeeeeet!!!! 🥹🥰)

          Ella’s giggle pulled Leo out of the memory.

          He turned to face his daughter, music from the father-daughter dance keeping a gentle symphony in his ears.

          Wolfgang or Reuben were probably playing with her, he guessed.

          But no.

          It was Dietrich, making animals, somehow, out of the paper decorations Frau Adelmann had made for the wedding.

          Ella clapped and giggled again. “Do a puppy! Please!”

          Dietrich smiled. “Sure thing.” His gaze rose though, and his green eyes met Leo’s dark brown. He froze.

          Leo shook his head, leaning back against the wall. “It’s fine. You’re keeping her occupied. She likes it.”

          Slowly, Dietrich nodded. “Alright, Ella, I’ll make a puppy, but first, why don’t you show me what you can do?”

          “I can’t make anything…I’m bad.” Ella mumbled, whined, even.

          “Oh, come on. You’ve never tried. It’s easy when you learn. Practice makes better, doesn’t it, Leo?”

          Leo smiled faintly. Nodded. “It does.”

          #145254
          Light
          @lightoverdarkness6
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            @freedomwriter76

            DIETRICH 🥹🥹😭😭😭😭😭😭

            Ugh I love him so muchhhhh ❤❤❤❤

            #HugRikerSquad

            #145255
            Anonymous
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              @lightoverdarkness6 ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

              😭😭😭😭😭🥹🥹🥹🥹

              #145256
              Euodia
              @euodia-vision
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                @freedomwriter76

                AWWWW Dietrich!!! *gives him a hug* Love you boi

                I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

                #145258
                Anonymous
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                  @euodia-vision *joins you in giving him a hug* the poor broken boi!!! 😭🥹❤️🥰

                  #145268
                  Light
                  @lightoverdarkness6
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                    @starshiness

                    *Swoons* Wowwww 😍😍😍🤣🤣


                    @euodia-vision
                    @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper

                    I’ve definitely got the accursed writer’s ailment as well  XD

                    but most of my main MC’s are also guys…literally basically all of my MC’s are men 😂 but the guys always end up being my favs…*cough cough* Riker, Leo, Nathan, etc *cough cough* XD

                    and even the books/stories I read…the guys end up being my favs 😍🤣

                    😍😍😍🤣🤣

                    #HugRikerSquad

                    #145272
                    Anonymous
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                      @lightoverdarkness6 😂😂😂😂😂


                      @euodia-vision
                      @whalekeeper @starshiness

                      I meannnnnnn at least none of us are alone! XDXD And I mean, they’re just fictional, but it’s totally normal for us teen/young adult girls to start feeling attracted towards guys, soooo, i meannn, it’s not like we have serious problems, right??? 😂XD😅

                       

                      I mean, I can attest to having crushes in real life….XP

                      #145273
                      whaley
                      @whalekeeper
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                        @freedomwriter76

                        Lol well I haven’t had any crushes that I know of yet, and I’m far into high school. I looove guys, but just platonically, ya know?

                        “Everything is a mountain”

                        #145274
                        Anonymous
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                          @whalekeeper it’ll come eventually XD but yep, I get that! Nothing wrong with just having friendships with guys 😉

                          #145276
                          Euodia
                          @euodia-vision
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                            @freedomwriter76

                            This is true… 😆

                            I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

                            #145414
                            Esther
                            @esther-c
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                              @starshiness

                              I LOVE HIM!!! 😆😆

                              Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

                              #145415
                              Esther
                              @esther-c
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                                @freedomwriter76

                                I LOVE HIM TOO!!! 😁

                                Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

                                #145684
                                Anonymous
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                                  @esther-c Thx!!! I love Dietrich too *sniffs*

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