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September 24, 2023 at 8:01 pm #157112
I hate it when that happens!!!
Lukas&Livia
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Sef&Chase
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333September 24, 2023 at 8:01 pm #157113Oops I forgot to fix the italics. So if you see some random sentences that sound like thoughts straying from the other paragraphs, that’s what it is.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 24, 2023 at 9:35 pm #157121I don’t mind if Kari and Ottoline don’t get along at first! A little conflict is good for the story. Kari’s faith is a big part of her life so that sort of seeps out of her, but as a little background she’s had some stuff in her past, too. Not nearly as intense as Ottoline’s, but her father died in an accident when she was four and then less than a year later she witnessed her mother dying in childbirth, so she and her sister were put in foster care for a while and then finally adopted. So she has had a little trauma to deal with, plus the betrayal of her best friend about two years prior to her age now. I think it would work perfectly if Kari somehow opens up about her past and Ottoline sees she’s not really as sheltered as she thinks… Kari just allowed God to heal her heart and that’s what restored that innocence.
Also “Hottoline” made me crack up so much. Maybe I’m just tired but I found it really funny. On that note, I don’t think I have enough energy left to write anything else tonight, but I’ll be back on tomorrow.
"Real love is for your good, not for your comfort." -Justin Whitmel Earley
September 24, 2023 at 9:36 pm #157122Thank goodness you were able to re-post it!
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings (I guess I’ll tag you again lol)Alright! I am here!
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INTP.
September 24, 2023 at 10:09 pm #157126September 24, 2023 at 10:11 pm #157127That’s nice! I love Kari’s story, and I love how Kari might be able to prove Ottoline wrong. This whole thing is great (I know I’ve said that so many times, but I mean it more every single time)! And yes, Hottoline is great haha yeah, i get being super tired.
Yay!!! you’re back!!!
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333September 24, 2023 at 10:11 pm #157128September 24, 2023 at 10:16 pm #157129September 24, 2023 at 10:24 pm #157131Are people rping rn is that what’s happening? Anyways I’m online
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 24, 2023 at 10:28 pm #157132Yeah we are, but we were just talking about how we want some relationships to go, haha.
I’m sorry I just noticed that Lane introduced himself to Hugo. 🤦 Sorry i totally forgot that!
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333September 24, 2023 at 10:28 pm #157133September 24, 2023 at 10:30 pm #157134What time is it where you live? Where I live it’s 8:30
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333September 24, 2023 at 10:32 pm #157135September 24, 2023 at 10:33 pm #157136Gotcha. I have to get off at 9, so we basically both have a half hour 😂
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333September 24, 2023 at 10:34 pm #157137I think Lane and Kaine (lol the ryhme!) would get along well! He could answer Kaine’s question if you want. kaine will probably introduce himself if that happens
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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