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October 26, 2023 at 6:16 pm #160651
Hey everyone! I’m still adding my guy, I’m trying to figure out how to introduce him right now. From what I thought, the queen’s area/palace is more of a garden not so much a castle or building I’m I correct?
"We don't play to win, we win by playing."
-Fellowship Bible Chapel
October 26, 2023 at 6:24 pm #160656October 26, 2023 at 6:25 pm #160657October 26, 2023 at 6:28 pm #160658Allright, here we go. 🙂
Leon ran through the trees that seemed to be creating hallways before him. He stopped thinking he had heard the sound of people talking. Where I’m I? Who’s there? Leon took deep breaths, trying to hide his fear of being in such a unfamiliar place. Suddenly anger and confusion filled his soul and he yelled in agony, “WHERE ON EARTH I’M I????”
Then he snickered to himself, “Maybe, I’m not on earth.”
"We don't play to win, we win by playing."
-Fellowship Bible Chapel
October 26, 2023 at 6:35 pm #160660oh…I didn’t mean to say “I’m I”, meant “am I”.
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"We don't play to win, we win by playing."
-Fellowship Bible Chapel
October 26, 2023 at 6:54 pm #160663THE QUEEN
The Queen did not follow her guests into the dining hall, but left her bird to watch over them. Instead she turned and lifted up her skirts after they all had gone in, and practically ran through the palace. She steadied her breathing in front on a beautiful door, before entering with her gliding grace. But she was different. She was no longer this person threatening that strangers would never go home unless they didn’t fight. She no longer had that solemn face. She looked pained, weak, worried.
Before her were four Lillenning servants, each one at the four corners on a large bed, overshadowed with flowering saplings. Upon this bed lay a Lillenning form, but with no peach eye shadow, no pink lips, no pink cheeks. Paler than death lay the sleeping form of Lillen’s king. His cheeks were drawn in, showing his cheek bones starkly. His eyes were sunken. He looked starved.
The Queen glided to his side, falling on her knees and reaching for his hand under the soft blue covers.
“Has he eaten anything yet?”
“No my lady, he has been as you see him since morn.” A young Lillenning girl from the corner answered with a choking voice. They all their king.
“Those cursed dragons will pay for this! The strangers from other worlds have almost all arrived. They will kill these reptiles of destruction! And your king will then live.”
“Mother, you should rest yourself. Surely you are tired.”
The Queen turned. Her only son stood in the doorway. He was different than any other Lillenning. Yes his face was white and his cheeks rosy, but his eyes were fiery orange, and his hair was long, curly and dark. He was not the thin weak things of his people, but with noticeable muscle. To Lillennings, he was considered a body builder, but to us, he would be considered semi muscular.
He wore a green type of uniform, with long sleeves and dark gloves with leather bracers. Trousers and knee-high lace-up boots.
“No, Fennin, I must appear to our guests again.”
“I can do that.”
“What if they try to kill you? One has already tried, and others threaten.”
A mysterious light appeared in Fennin’s eyes. “You know they can’t touch me. Go to sleep mother, I will meet the guests.” The weary Queen nodded. Fennin turned and was about to close the door behind him, when his mother spoke again,
“Promise me one thing.” He looked back at his mother. “You will not go after the dragons again.” The mysterious visible light in his eyes flickered again.
“You know I can’t promise that.” The door closed.
"You need French Toast."
October 26, 2023 at 7:01 pm #160664Oops. I meant “They loved their king.” And it won’t edit right now.
"You need French Toast."
October 26, 2023 at 7:22 pm #160665oooh!! I like it! You write nice descriptions. 🙂
"We don't play to win, we win by playing."
-Fellowship Bible Chapel
October 26, 2023 at 7:43 pm #160669Thanks.
@everyone
When should Fennin show up to instruct our charries?
"You need French Toast."
October 26, 2023 at 7:47 pm #160671October 26, 2023 at 7:51 pm #160672Yeah, I most likely will be on here for a little bit longer, but Fennin is the only one I have who can do anything, so I won’t be RPing.
"You need French Toast."
October 26, 2023 at 8:29 pm #160693Btw, did you see that Ellis was talking to Kaine?
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 26, 2023 at 8:30 pm #160694I’d say give the characters some more time. Only a few of us have done any RPing since they started the feast.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 26, 2023 at 8:32 pm #160696@everyone
Zahlin
After a few rounds through the maze of hallways, it became apparent there was no armory. Annoyed and frustrated all over again, Zahlin stalked back to the hall. He walked up to the first person he saw.
“Can you fight?” He demanded.
***You guys can decide who he’s talking to.
Man, Zahlin has just been being so rude! Sorry, guys 😂
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
October 26, 2023 at 8:37 pm #160697Lol! Let’s see, Ellis, Nahim, Ottoline, and Kaine are already in conversation. That leaves Hugo, Flaz, Lane, Amir, Hedeih, Kari, and Leon, although I don’t know if Leon has arrived in the main hall yet. But it would be pretty funny if it was Leon. Imagine walking into a room and immediately this super intimidating guy with a sword walks up to you and wants to know if you can fight, lol!
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