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October 25, 2023 at 8:31 pm #160510
Wait, why can’t Zahlin touch other swords?! I’m confused here
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 25, 2023 at 8:37 pm #160511Nice!
Btw, in case you didn’t notice, Ellis did speak to Kaine in passing. He told him and Ottoline to keep their weapons on them and stay alert. Not very important, but I thought it was worth mentioning.
Yeah, not much has happened in the dining hall. Ellis and Nahim had a chat, then followed Zahlin out of the room. I think GRCR wrote a short one with Flaz, but not much happened in it.
I don’t know why Zahlin can’t touch other swords, but I would assume it’s some sort of curse on him. @highscribe said that carrying any bladed weapon other than his own sword causes him severe pain and he is forced to drop it.
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π Appreciator of BooksOctober 25, 2023 at 8:39 pm #160512AAAAAHHHHHH!!!! That looks soo good! I love it!! ππππ
Flaz: *yawns* Did the sun just come up? In the west?
October 25, 2023 at 8:43 pm #160513Ellis
Ellis sighed. “I’ve already explained it once, and I’d rather not do it again for every single person I talk to,” he said, “We’ve got more important things going on than talking swords. Now, I want to knowΒ whyΒ you’re looking for the armory. As long as your intentions are innocent, we’ll leave you be.”
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π Appreciator of BooksOctober 25, 2023 at 8:44 pm #160514I missed that Ellis was in it the first time through. Um, maybe Ellis didn’t hear Kaine? Cause he’s already kind of past that part. I was thinking that Ellis might come talk to Kaine once he get’s back.
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π Appreciator of BooksOctober 25, 2023 at 8:52 pm #160515What if Ellis and Nahim traded swords for a little while? What would happen?
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 25, 2023 at 8:55 pm #160516Ellis and Nahim? Well, nothing particularly interesting. Conviction can’t grant any special powers to anyone but his owner (Ellis.) Are you asking theoretically, or do you want them to actually do that? I don’t know why they would, but maybe in an action scene later on we could contrive it to happen, lol!
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π Appreciator of BooksOctober 25, 2023 at 8:59 pm #160517@everyone
Thanks!!
Sure! Whatever works.
At the time I wrote it people had just entered the dining hall. I’m still slightly lost… but I’ll get caught up another day.
Are they already done with the banquet then?
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October 25, 2023 at 9:00 pm #160518No, they haven’t even got really started.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 25, 2023 at 9:04 pm #160519I don’t want Nahim to have any magical powers, but the idea came from if you met someone new with this cool futuristic weapon you know how to use, wouldn’t you want to hold it? I would if I knew how to use it or not! Plus, Nahim would be interested in Conviction.
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 25, 2023 at 9:09 pm #160520LOl ok there’s some kind of misunderstanding. Kaine is eating at the banquet when he talks to Ellis and Flaz, and it sounds like we haven’t reached that part yet. So yall can just wait till they are talking at the banquet to reply.
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October 25, 2023 at 9:13 pm #160521No, itβs just that Ellis and Nahim temporarily left. They sat down, but then saw Zahlin leaving and got suspicious. Okay, so maybe Kaine was sitting next to Ellis, but Ellis didnβt notice?
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π Appreciator of BooksOctober 25, 2023 at 9:17 pm #160522Okay, gotcha. It might be kind of awkward for them to just be like βhey wanna trade swords.β Ellis in particular tries to keep his sword nearby. It might be cool to do during an action scene like I said, or maybe they could try them out when theyβre training later?
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π Appreciator of BooksOctober 25, 2023 at 9:20 pm #160523Yeah! Maybe they go to kill a dragon later on, but Conviction can’t cut the scales so Nahim (pinned under a boulder, so he can’t do anything) throws his sword to Ellis, to see if that will work. Or would Conviction be able to cut through dragon scales?
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#AnduthForever (hopefully π)October 25, 2023 at 9:23 pm #160524Conviction can cut through scales when itβs powered up (I need a better term for that.) Iβm going to have Ellis be having trouble with that though, cause itβs kind of OP.
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