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October 24, 2023 at 9:58 pm #160299
Hold on guys, the Queen shall return once I finish reading three pages!
"You need French Toast."
October 24, 2023 at 10:24 pm #160302THE QUEEN
That was it. The warrior who had first run now had then come back now was angry at her. She rose, in all of her glory, light green illuminated her frame. Anger rose in her face. She stretched forth her hand towards the defiant fool (sorry, I’m in character) to do to him who knows?
But a smile suddenly crossed her lips, not a devious one, but one of a hostess.
“The young master is right. But tell me, Young impulsive one with anger against one whom is trying to save her dying land, what if you were me? Do you not see? I have not called you to be cruel, but to save the land of Lillen.” She bowed to the warrior, bowed so low she kissed a petal of the lily carpet. “By the lily’s grace, as soon as you have completed the task to your best ability, you will be home at the time and place you left. By the lily!” She plucked up the flower she had kissed and sent it upon a little breeze to the clutch of rebels. One of the girls caught it.
“We are done here, I wish not to lengthen your time of imprisonment to such boring things as talk, follow, and you shall eat.” With this, she motioned to her little bird and went to the far end of the great hall, where she passed through a door and down a long hallway fashioned in a way to ever remind you of nature. She halted at the end of the hallway at two large doors and they flung open revealing a banquet hall.
"You need French Toast."
October 24, 2023 at 10:39 pm #160303Now just so you don’t get the wrong idea of my favorite charrie, here’s a piece of him before they go to the hallway and banquet hall…
NAHIM
No one could see the expression Nahim wore under his helmet, and he was thankful for that. It was a face of sympathy, of anger, of mistrust, and of memories rolled into one. He understood her, she was trying to save her home. Nahim would have to the lengths of murdering Canin Grostoff before he turned traitor if it meant his home wouldn’t be rubble, and his family dead. She was doing the same, going to lengths to see her home and country, her friends and family live.
Where was the king? Was he a victim of these dragons?
Was that smoke he saw curling into the pink sky over a ways? What thing dear to her had now been destroyed?
But he was angry, and it took self-control not to finger his sword. He didn’t trust these people, how could he work with them?
He closed his eyes and flung his head back as far as it would go with his neckband. Falling into memories of long ago, he didn’t care about the arrow or the running of another warrior in the group. Oh! he thought he had gotten over that ache in his heart, but there it was again. He still hated life without his family.
- This reply was modified 1 year ago by RAE. Reason: Typo, again
"You need French Toast."
October 24, 2023 at 10:46 pm #160305October 24, 2023 at 10:49 pm #160306oh sorry…it didn’t finish loading before it posted, so I couldn’t see the two new pages XD
Lukas&Livia
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Sef&Chase
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 24, 2023 at 10:49 pm #160307I did have something more devious planned but that got…
"You need French Toast."
October 24, 2023 at 10:54 pm #160308I did have something more devious planned but that got…
Lolol I’m sure Ottoline would have loved to see Ellis get punished…she’s a little mad at him right now (but that’s not necessarily his fault)
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 24, 2023 at 10:59 pm #160309@everyone
I’ll try to give Lane or Flazzy’s RP/POV tomorrow.
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
October 24, 2023 at 11:00 pm #160310I’m looking forward to it! I love Flaz <3
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 24, 2023 at 11:09 pm #160312I think getting almost killed by dragons is punishment enough, when time comes. And if he doesn’t face the dragons, he never goes home.
Despite what everyone here may think, the Queen has all of our characters under her little finger. If they kill her, they don’t go home, if they don’t help they don’t go home. If they cooperate, they go home.
By the way @everyone, realize the Queen cannot save her home alone, and that she’s hurting emotionally right now.
Oh no! Have I just gotten attached to her! She better not visit my dreams!
"You need French Toast."
October 24, 2023 at 11:15 pm #160313Yeah, I was just (mostly) joking XD
Poor
Queenie(I did not just call her that)! It’s too bad that most of our charries can’t really fight dragons that well…so she might be a little disappointed.Btw, I love how you are explaining the Queen’s emotional situation on behalf of her. You’re such a good author/friend to the Queen, haha! I tend to throw my charries under the bus, lol.
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 24, 2023 at 11:26 pm #160314You’re such a good author/friend to the Queen, haha! I tend to throw my charries under the bus, lol.
Let it not be forgotten what I did to my FAVORITE charrie, I destroyed his home, killed his family, almost killed him, almost killed his best friend, killed someone he knew, and made him think that a close family-friend was dead! (All in one book!) Let it not be said I’m a kind author (look what I did to the Alpha Grathmere thing! For years father and son were worst enemies!)
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"You need French Toast."
October 25, 2023 at 12:56 am #160319I’ll be able to rp tommorow afternoon! I’m making a comic instead because I was in a drawing mood XD
I had to go back so many pages to find Flaz’s description lol, this rp is moving so fast
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
October 25, 2023 at 7:45 am #160325Lolol I’m sure Ottoline would have loved to see Ellis get punished…she’s a little mad at him right now (but that’s not necessarily his fault)
Lol, Ottoline was close to being punished too. Ellis just got a bit outspoken there.
@mineralizedwritings @highscribeofaetherium @raeEllis
Ellis followed the group into the hall. He hadn’t missed the queen looking like she was going to smite him or something.
”First she pulls us out of our own worlds,” he muttered under his breath, “then she tells us we have to fight in a war and tries to punish us if we disobey.”
If any of them were going to get out of this alive, they would need to work together. He had to hope some of them would be more helpful than Ottoline.
He brushed between Ottoline and the guy who had scoffed about dragons (he thought his name might be Kaine), and whispered, “Keep your weapons on you, and stay alert.” He moved on without a backward glance to make sure they’d heard him and followed the guy wearing armor. He sat down next to him and extended a hand. “I’m Ellis. You?”
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 25, 2023 at 7:51 am #160326Despite what everyone here may think, the Queen has all of our characters under her little finger. If they kill her, they don’t go home, if they don’t help they don’t go home. If they cooperate, they go home.
That’s what Ellus hates. He’s being a bit reckless because there’s one area where they do have the power: if she kills them, they can’t help her. Ellis figures that the fact that she brought them here means that she needs them (although she could probably pull in some more people, but who’s to say they’d be any more cooperative.) The funny thing is that Ellis would be one of the most willing to help if she wasn’t trying to force them to help lol! His sense of honor wouldn’t really let him leave behind people who need help, but when those people try to force him to help, he gets pretty angry!
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