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October 24, 2023 at 7:12 pm #160226
Oh that’s true! I was speed-reading to catch up on all the posts lol. Just pretend Lane said “the other guy” instead of Ellis.
"Real love is for your good, not for your comfort." -Justin Whitmel Earley
October 24, 2023 at 7:13 pm #160227October 24, 2023 at 7:16 pm #160228Ellis
Ottoline didn’t seem keen on talking and that was fine with him. He’d used up his talking trying to convince her to come back.
She has some serious issues, said Conviction in Ellis’s head.
”You think?” whispered Ellis.
Ottoline glanced at him quizzically. He pointed silently at the sword.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 24, 2023 at 7:17 pm #160229Got to go now
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 24, 2023 at 7:20 pm #160230Okay, see you around!
She has some serious issues, said Conviction in Ellis’s head.
”You think?” whispered Ellis.
Ottoline glanced at him quizzically. He pointed silently at the sword.
I literally started laughing XD
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 24, 2023 at 8:19 pm #160238@anyone
Btw, I think @savannah_grace2009 and I are done with this plot line, so someone can write Ellis and Ottoline coming back whenever.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 24, 2023 at 8:21 pm #160239October 24, 2023 at 8:34 pm #160241Maybe @rae should do it? The queen is sort of her character, and I have no idea how the queen should react to Ottoline—she seemed pretty mad when Ottoline shot at her.
This might be a good opportunity to transition to the dinner.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 24, 2023 at 8:39 pm #160242makes sense to me.
I’m so bored…waiting for the junior high basketball game to get over so volleyball practice can start!!! It was supposed to be done at 6:30…but it’s 6:40 rn and it’s not even halfway over!!! So right now I’m awkwardly sitting on the stairs of my school on my laptop waiting.
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 24, 2023 at 8:42 pm #160243That sounds like torture 😬
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 24, 2023 at 8:44 pm #160244October 24, 2023 at 8:46 pm #160245that’s an UNDERSTATEMENT, lol
In my opinion, basketball is kind of dumb (if you happen to love basketball, please don’t burn me at the stake), and now I’m not sure if practice will still end at 7:30 like we planned since the games are so late. And I live in the country so it takes a while to get to the school, and idk what to tell my dad.
So yeah.
You homeschoolers are lucky you don’t have to deal with this.
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 24, 2023 at 8:48 pm #160246@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @rae @highscribeofaetherium @mineralizedwritings
Kari
“I’m coming, too,” Amir added.
“Me, too,” Hugo put in.
“Okay, well, let’s go.” Kari started off in the direction Ottoline had gone, with Amir, Hedieh, and Hugo following her. “I hope they didn’t get far.”
The four fell into silence as they tramped through the brush, on the alert for any sign of Ottoline and the strange warrior guy.
“There!” Hugo rushed forward, and Kari saw Ottoline with the strange guy. Still in her ball gown, Kari picked up her skirts and hustled after Hugo. I wonder if my clothes are still in the basement of the house. There’s no way I’m fighting dragons in this thing.
“Ottoline, are you o-” Hugo’s question stopped short when his foot hit a rock and he pitched forward, landing on the ground right at Ottoline’s feet.
In spite of the tear stains on her face, the corner of Ottoline’s mouth twitched. “Perhaps the better question is, are you okay, Hugo?”
Hugo picked himself up and dusted off his suit, the tips of his ears red as he attempted to regain his dignity. “All that’s hurt is my ego.”
Kari caught up, with Amir and Hedieh right behind her. She cleared her throat, looking at the guy standing at a safe distance from Ottoline.
“I think introductions are needed. I’m Kari, from Earth. Who are you, and where do you come from?”
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October 24, 2023 at 8:48 pm #160247I don’t care about any sport, so I’m not offended lol.
You could right their return and then just leave the queen’s reaction for Rae if you are too bored.
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