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October 24, 2023 at 3:24 pm #160122
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Ottoline
I’m not going back.
Her heart fluttered as she beheld the majestic figure in the doorway. She was beautiful, but terrifying. Like Selena. Chills went up and down her spine. I’m not going back. It reminded her of too much…”Please, no!” she whimpered. Selena only laughed…pain….
She snatched up her bow and ducked behind a pillar, watching the scene unfold from the shadows.
As the Queen led everyone out the door, she watched them, incredulous. They were just going to let her take them? She had made that mistake before, and she wasn’t going to make it again.
Looking one last time at Hugo and Kari and everyone, she said a mental goodbye. They may trust the Queen, but she did not. She was not going to let her take her back to the UNIT. Easing open the nearest window, she kicked out the screen and jumped out.
As she hit the soft moss covered ground, she gasped in shock. The place was beautiful, but beauty disguised vile things not seen unless you were to look past appearances. She strung her bow, glancing warily at the Queen.
She had killed a deer several times, however killing a person was different. I’m not going back. Now a silent tear trickled down her cheek. She steeled her will and began creeping closer, hiding behind a large rock. She chose her best arrow, and sighted down the shaft. I’m not going back. I’m not letting her take all of us.
She waited until the Queen began to answer questions, until she was distracted. She silently rose up, pulled back, and let go.
The arrow screamed through the air towards the woman…it was on course to pierce her heart..
And then a blast of light disentigrated the arrow into pieces.
The queen slowly turned around. Her face reddened, and in a voice cold as stone she began to speak.
“Who dares to try and kill me?”
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 24, 2023 at 3:26 pm #160123That escalated quickly!
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 24, 2023 at 3:27 pm #160124October 24, 2023 at 3:27 pm #160126Sorry, that was really bad prose, lol
I wrote it really fast and sloppy XD
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 24, 2023 at 3:27 pm #160127October 24, 2023 at 3:28 pm #160128Wow. Bold, Ottoline.
Who’s next?
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
October 24, 2023 at 3:30 pm #160130Wow. Bold, Ottoline.
Lol. Thats what I was thinking.
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
October 24, 2023 at 3:41 pm #160134I’m okay with whatever y’all do. I haven’t been able to write a RP lately (obviously XD). I’ll try to write one soon… whenever soon may be. 😂 If you need Amir to make a choice at some point, he’ll just go along with anything until I’m able to write from his POV. (Same with Hedieh)
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
October 24, 2023 at 3:42 pm #160135October 24, 2023 at 3:50 pm #160138@everyone
So, you asked about the quest…I have already created the world, so this is only a suggestion, and not a fact…
They are told by the Queen to kill the dragons, but what is the motive of the dragons? Should they go and find that and then destroy it, therefore chasing the dragons away?
Have any of you watched the movie Reign of Fire? Well, in that the dragons are evil, yes and they destroy, yes (and they look cool) but we never get the answer of why they destroy Earth. The answer could be as simple as it is their nature (like it is for a wasp to sting) or something as complicated as… I don’t know.
Anyways, what I guess I’m trying to say is, so our characters don’t get killed, we have some clashes with the dragons, but overall they are just eventually driving them away by destroying the motive. Does that make any sense whatsoever?
What do you think?
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October 24, 2023 at 3:51 pm #160141That makes sense to me. Yeah, that would work.
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
October 24, 2023 at 4:01 pm #160142October 24, 2023 at 4:10 pm #160145@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
Lane
Lane jumped as an arrow flew towards the queen. He closed his eyes as a blast of light suddenly shattered the arrow and the broken bits fell.
“Goodie-goodness.” Flaz jumped onto the ground and flattened himself, “The dragons have arrows too?! I didn’t realize we were in such immediate danger!”
Lane lifted his head and looked around. Probably not dragons… and it couldn’t have been the new fellows, because they have swords… and it didn’t come from their directions. He looked at all of those sitting in the group, and then beyond them. He suddenly realized that Ottoline wasn’t in the group with them. Oh no.
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October 24, 2023 at 4:27 pm #160147“Goodie-goodness.” Flaz jumped onto the ground and flattened himself, “The dragons have arrows too?! I didn’t realize we were in such immediate danger!”
XD I love Flaz
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 24, 2023 at 4:29 pm #160148I have the best idea everrrr!! What if….Ottoline’s right and the dragons are sent by the Pythonos to recapture her????
I’m totally joking, guys, that’s like the
dumbest idea ever. Let’s NOT do that. Please. XDAnyone got any ideas?
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