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January 19, 2024 at 10:00 am #173623
You missed so much….XD
Hottoline had a moment….
HUGO KISSED OTTOLINE’S HAIR!!! AHHHHDo you remember that scene lol
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333January 19, 2024 at 10:02 am #173624Lol. I have read all of that part.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksJanuary 19, 2024 at 10:05 am #173625When she posted that RP I freaked out….lol
Oh my gosh and Lane was hilarious!!
AND THE WAY HUGO COMFORTED OTTOLINE AND OTTO COMFORTED HUGO….even though my RP’s were soooo cliche but STILL!!!
I just realized how much Ottoline has changed as a charrie….she used to be so….idk.. hard and cold on the outside because she’s hurting on the inside…but now she’s really sweet even though she’s been through so much. I wrote her scene in my book the other day and almost cried…IT’S SO SAD!
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333January 19, 2024 at 2:07 pm #173645Do you remember that scene lol
Of course! That was all so cute XD
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January 19, 2024 at 2:40 pm #173661@jonas All I have to say to this is……
*cue awkward music, specifically this track here*
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 19, 2024 at 7:12 pm #173718Yeah, I’m really new to the RP, so it makes little difference to me whether we replace or restart it. But I’m willing to provide RP and content ideas if needed!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 19, 2024 at 10:02 pm #173746@everyone
So it sounds like there’s a general consensus that restarting/replacing the RP is the best option.
So, brainstorming phase. What did you like about this RP? What did you dislike? What made the RP go smoothly and what made it drag? What worked? What didn’t?
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📚 Appreciator of BooksJanuary 19, 2024 at 10:54 pm #173748NOOOOO i want to keep this RP but change it to the party….*cries*
I mean….it’s mostly sentimental for me I guess…I made a lot of memories on here and learned a lot about my charries XD but it’s up to you guys….lol
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333January 20, 2024 at 4:34 am #173755I found the party kinda boring…but then again, we’ve been having so much action that it’s just…ruined that quality of interaction between our characters.
@jonas @all-concerned-with-thisI vote we combine the two elements, like combining Mithaln and Mithscar (I am well versed in Realn/Fettian similies XD I’m sorry, I have no better way to explain this), it must be done right or it will not combine, but separate into two different veins of silver, or possibly spontaneously combust. But if we can get the right formula, I think, like Mithscaln is stronger, self-healable, and harder to destroy, so will our rp become better founded, elements in which we can always rp, and harder to kill.
Also, I’m gonna remove Nora from this rp, she’s not growing at all.
I’m changen’ Nahim to be slighter younger. He’s now gonna be 21, the Nanian war recently over, Canin imprisoned, Vorgan dead, his friends still in the Space Skwads, resigned from Lord Nahor’s service (A lord cannot serve a lord), Laxor holds too many memories still, not engaged to Nora yet. Just a Nanian War veteran, recently named lord, robotic right armed young man trying to figure out his life. He’s gonna be a little more broken, meaning he will bury himself in a certain objective and stay there until he gets his goal, or (less likely but healthier for him) is pulled out of it.
He waited six years to just find out who the Wenbor of Laxan was, and about the same to kill Vorgan. Those goals consumed him.
Okay, enough on that…I haven’t slept for about 21 hours, so if I make no sense, let me know.
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January 20, 2024 at 7:28 am #173757What exactly do you mean? If you’re saying you want to go back to how it was at the beginning, I’m sure we could do that as well, although not everyone would necessarily want to participate in both. We’re going to create a new thread once we decide what we’re going to do, so you could use this one for what you originally were doing if you want. I’m sure @acancello and @trailblazer would do it with you at least. I likely would do it.
That may be a weird analogy, but I think you’re right. I don’t dislike either the action or interaction scenes, but some of them just didn’t work, usually the action scenes. I think for one thing that we shouldn’t just decide to have action happen. We should mostly let it come about naturally. This last scene for example, didn’t work at all, likely because we just suddenly decided to throw the villains at them. The fire scene on the other hand worked really well in my opinion, because adding the villains just escalated what was already happening. The palace was on fire, Nahim had gotten knocked out, etc.
I’m not sure how exactly we would fix this problem, but it’s good to be aware of it.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksJanuary 20, 2024 at 10:31 am #173768January 20, 2024 at 2:18 pm #173816@jonas @rae yeah if we switched over and kept the RP as a party and made a new adventure RP, I’d go over and join the other one, I don’t think Snake would care for a party lol
I should draw that though, it’d be so funny
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 21, 2024 at 9:53 am #173907@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @rae @keilah-h @princesachronicle22
Sorry I’ve been MIA this week! I’m back now!
And yes, I think something needs to change. As sad as I am to see it happen, I think it’s for the best. I think the best option for me would be to stick around with whoever reverts back to the party as it was in the first place. I’ve enjoyed the action scenes, but Kari doesn’t quite fit well with the fighting scenes. Since I don’t typically write that type of story either, I don’t have any other characters who would be a better fit. Also, I’m going to be leaving in six months for a discipleship training school with YWAM, so I’d have to drop out of the RP at that point anyway (if anything is still going by then).
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January 23, 2024 at 2:59 pm #174100@y’all
I’ll probably be willing to rejoin if y’all change it something like it was during the “party,” just cuz the action part was moving too fast for me to keep up, lol. I might throw in the original charries I had in here, but I may choose someone different.
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January 23, 2024 at 3:02 pm #174101It could just be something where our characters were all invited to a cabin to relax or have a vacation alone, but find out that all these other people got the same invitation.
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