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October 24, 2023 at 12:45 pm #160083October 24, 2023 at 1:12 pm #160085
It’s fine! Do expect some cockyness from kaine though 😝
It might be a bit till I can get back to yall, looks like I have some catching up to do here… and on schoolwork ;(
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
October 24, 2023 at 1:34 pm #160089This may seem random, but I’ve been trying to figure out if Ellis wearing a cape… is he? If so, is he wearing it currently?
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
October 24, 2023 at 1:35 pm #160090October 24, 2023 at 1:38 pm #160091October 24, 2023 at 1:47 pm #160094Yes, he is, but it detaches easily, because otherwise it would often be a hinderance. Once they actually start the quest, he’ll probably take it off or keep it wrapped around part of him or something.
@grcr also added Flaz. He arrived in the house right before the queen came, so I don’t know if you saw that.🏰 Fantasy Writer
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Lane
“Three answers are all I have for you, Young Master. One, you have the strength to fight, unlike my people. Two, there are ones among you who can train you, and weapons, I could fashion any piece out of nature. Three, fear and willingness drives the mind to think and the body to act. When you face the dragons, you will know what to do.”
You want to go home, right? He inhaled as he thought. Don’t worry, Lane. You’ll live through this… I’m sure…. Lane glanced around at the others. Flaz looked grave for the first time since he and Lane met. His bubbly round face was as pale as the moonlight, and he appeared to be in deep thought.
“Dragons…” Flaz said, very quietly. Lane shivered as he began thinking about dragons. I wonder how big they are… These dragons… I’ve never seen a beast larger than myself… oh, besides those Rozatian creatures… but they aren’t scary and are not against certain humans… He looked up as a man entered the area.
“Save it, your majesty,” said the man, “I’ve already heard it.”
Heard it already? We’ve been followed? Someone has been eavesdropping? Oh dear… Lane felt an uneasiness set on him. Please don’t let this be a trap…
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Flaz
When you face the dragons. Dragons. Dragons. Dragons. Dragons. Flaz repeated the word in his head, attempting to make himself believe that he would face them in reality. The queen’s voice played over and over in his mind. When you face the dragons…. When you face the dragons….
Flaz looked up. Kazimir hasn’t trained us against any kind of beast yet… I don’t even have my armor on ye—would it even work out here? Ehh… Probably not... He rubbed his cold hands together and then shoved them in his hoodie pocket.
A man entered the area, but Flaz did not hear what he had said. He continued thinking. I wonder if Kaz would’ve taught us how to fight crazy beasts anyway… I’m sure Rashina would probably be down to learn that kind of stuff… and maybe Blair too when I think about it. It seems that—Oooo! A cape!! How fun!!! I wonder what it’s made of… Flaz’s face brightened. He reached out to touch the cape, but quickly retracted his hand. Better not…
Flazzy watched another person entered the area a little bit later. He squeaked. He’s tall… and what a long sword… Say… what’s the moody face for? Flaz laughed to himself.
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Note: Kazimir Ransley is Flaz’s warrior-team’s trainer.
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
October 24, 2023 at 2:18 pm #160097Oh dear, Zahlin had better never find out that Flaz was laughing at him 😂
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
October 24, 2023 at 2:19 pm #160098October 24, 2023 at 2:20 pm #160099I’m gonna make Ellis react to Zahlin real quick.
Ellis
Ellis eyed the newcomer warily. He didn’t seem any more happy about this situation than Ellis was, but could he be trusted?
Ellis didn’t trust any of these people much, but none of them were going home if they didn’t sort this out, so their interests were aligned that far. But this guy wasn’t part of the original group. What were his motives?
Ellis would have to investigate later. For now he turned his attention back to the queen.
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btw, we still need to figure out what there quest will be. Anyone have any ideas?
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 24, 2023 at 2:21 pm #160100October 24, 2023 at 2:23 pm #160101Oh, I had no idea Flaz had any sort of combat training. Does Lane? These are things Ellis will be investigating, so I need to take note.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 24, 2023 at 2:26 pm #160102Nope. No ideas.
One thing I was thinking is that maybe they need to retrieve something. This world seems very nature based, so maybe the dragons stole something that supplies the “life force” of the land and our characters need to steal it back?
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