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December 17, 2023 at 4:09 pm #170053
I know it probably has to happen….but it’s going to like destroy poor Hugo…
It will destroy him, and it will also alter his personality in many ways 😭
(I mean at least Vikii can comfort him…still it’s sad though)
Exactly! I feel like having Vikii will make the future story better, (My brother is trying to convince me to write a sequel…)
"Would you kindly...?"
December 17, 2023 at 6:18 pm #170186@calyhuge hehe several thousand pounds of freezing scale and muscle coming through!
seriously though I added him because I thought we’d be fighting mostly dragons, where he’d be equally matched. But since the human enemies appeared, he’s become among the more powerful characters in the rp…..
sorry for basically relegating him to a Larry Stu (looked it up and that’s apparently the male equivalent to a Mary Sue—the term for an overpowered female). He’s not really like that among his own kind.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 17, 2023 at 6:24 pm #170187I don’t have time for an RP until Wednesday or Thursday though.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 17, 2023 at 6:33 pm #170188@keilah-h
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 17, 2023 at 6:47 pm #170190Exactly! I feel like having Vikii will make the future story better, (My brother is trying to convince me to write a sequel…)
Yeah, because then she can comfort him, and he can realize how much she does care about him while she realizes how she cares for him as well.
And yes, you totally should write a sequel!!
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333December 17, 2023 at 7:08 pm #170191@jonas I won’t be able to RP for a few days, but what if the forest dragon shows up?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 17, 2023 at 7:13 pm #170192We won’t get there.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 17, 2023 at 9:12 pm #170195Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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The General
before they left
The General stared at Zash. “Kill people is exactly what I want you to do. You kill the prince first because we cannot let him escape. Then you may kill whoever you wish.”
“That’s logic,” put in John.
“You see,” continued The General, “if you are as powerful as you say you are, it will be easy to quickly dispatch the prince, who I understand is a weakling among his kind, and then move on to whoever you wish to kill. After the prince is dead, you can kill anyone not with us.” He stopped and floated closer. “Do you not understand? I am giving you more freedom than I have ever given an ally. In addition, if you do what I say, I will give-” The General paused for a moment, thinking. He put one white claw-like finger to where his chin should have been. “-I will give – let’s see – a sphinx’s tooth. With that in your mouth, you can understand all languages as if they were your own. Yes, I will give that upon our inevitable success.”
December 17, 2023 at 9:26 pm #170197Zash
“The prince is a weakling, so we pick off the ones who can protect him first!” said Zash. “As for your offer, I couldn’t care less. I. Am. Not. Yours. To. Command! I will do as I wish.”
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 17, 2023 at 9:38 pm #170198Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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The General
The General turned from Zash, drawing John closer. “What say you to this?”
John looked back at Zash. “I say we count our losses and kill the prince ourself, defend the others, and let him struggle. If he calls for help, we help, but if not…” John shrugged.
The General grumbled to himself, then said, “I like that plan. That will be our plan B. But first, I will try one last time…” He turned back to Zash. “After much consideration, we have decided that you are too weak to attempt on the life of the prince. You are forbidden from touching him, for your own safety. Kill the others, but by no means touch the prince. You are not powerful enough. We have spoken. Is this not what you want?”
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Who is the soldier you RPed? is that a new guy? because he can be
December 17, 2023 at 9:44 pm #170200Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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*correction: when John said “defend the others” it should have said “defend our other allies”. He wants everyone good to die like everyone else
December 17, 2023 at 9:46 pm #170202December 17, 2023 at 9:47 pm #170203He doesn’t understand fully what “born under the light f the Stones” means, but he has potential…
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)December 17, 2023 at 9:47 pm #170204He doesn’t understand fully what “born under the light f the Stones” means, but he has potential…
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)December 17, 2023 at 9:48 pm #170205Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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@rae evidently not
but isn’t his race weaker than humans?
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