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December 10, 2023 at 11:15 pm #169102
Carrie is having a difficult time feeling bad for him.
Carrie
I couldn’t come up with any idea that sounded good except to go and help Silas myself. That wasn’t actually true – I didn’t want to do anything except go help Silas myself.
If I could get past Nahim I might have had the chance. For that, only one ideas came to my mind. I would let Fire Face free to roam until an event happened, then I could go get Silas while everyone was distracted.
I made the choice irrationally. I saw flames in the distance and realized it was almost time for me to go.
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
December 10, 2023 at 11:17 pm #169103December 10, 2023 at 11:20 pm #169105Let me think of something else… he’s starting way too many fires. How dare he.
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
December 10, 2023 at 11:29 pm #169108I mean, he only started one, and almost started a couple more, so we can have a small wild fire…we just can’t burn down the forest…
"You need French Toast."
December 10, 2023 at 11:36 pm #169110That’s understandable. I could just try to write that Carrie tries sneaks past him without any distraction. Idk how that would play out.
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
December 10, 2023 at 11:38 pm #169111I mean, Nahim is the only one pacing around the entire campsite rn, so as long as she doesn’t step on a stick or something, she could potentially slip through.
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"You need French Toast."
December 11, 2023 at 12:00 am #169115Okay.
Carrie
I quietly left the campfire deciding I couldn’t leave my brother there.
Just leave me alone… I thought it, but it was directed towards everyone at the campfire.
I found the spot where Silas was. He lay in the same place, I shook him a bit.
“Wake up.” I snapped quietly.
I shook him harder and he began to move a bit.
“Stop.” He murmured.
“Then get up.” I gently kicked him, he moved his hurt arm out of the way, I had completely forgotten that is was that arm.
Silas sat up and looked from his arm to me.
“Your animal is a psycho. And you’re a bit crazy yourself.”
“Hm.” I said as a reply. “Let’s just get back to the campsite.”
We walked to the campsite, Silas had the same reaction to Fire Face’s bite that I did, he kept telling me on the way there that he couldn’t move his arm and it was burning.
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
December 11, 2023 at 3:24 pm #169157@jonas yeahhhh I think staring over would kill it
oh, and it’s so funny how all the other charries have these weird fantasy names and then there’s just “Snake” and “Rocky” lol
@beth-torres Snake can swim….in freezing water, too….Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 11, 2023 at 4:35 pm #169166There’s a good number of characters that have normal names too: Hugo, Carrie, Kari, etc. Ellis is also a real name, though not common these days.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 11, 2023 at 4:54 pm #169168December 11, 2023 at 4:56 pm #169169What I’ve learned is that pretty much anything out can imagine is a name in some language 😅
Signature is limited to 100 characters? That seems awfully unjust. We refuse to be bound by these ru
December 11, 2023 at 4:56 pm #169170You, not out. Idk how I did that.
Signature is limited to 100 characters? That seems awfully unjust. We refuse to be bound by these ru
December 11, 2023 at 4:59 pm #169171From what I know of how Arabic languages sound, I would think it would be pronounced “Nah-heem” or something like that, rather than “Nay-him.”
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 11, 2023 at 5:03 pm #169174@jonas Fair point. Those are normal names, but they’re at least a little fantasy-sounding.
Snake’s Japanese name (since he came from a series of video games, and you know how the Japanese love video games), スネーク or “Sunēku” (google translated that lol) is kinda cool and fantasy-sounding, but since he appears basically Western and not Asian, I went with his American name when I inserted him into my stories.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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