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December 9, 2023 at 8:27 pm #168929
The chaos that would cause would be great!
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December 9, 2023 at 8:29 pm #168930…a little turquoise streak swept passed me, a dried and salted fish hanging half out of it’s mouth. After it ran a couple people, tripping over me as I watched the little dragon scurry around the campsite in circles a figure eights…
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December 9, 2023 at 8:29 pm #168931Thank you! I was thinking about that today. Just don’t ask they’d solve the issue cause…
….I don’t know….
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
December 9, 2023 at 8:30 pm #168932We better have charries who can swim… professionally… across an OCEAN.
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
December 9, 2023 at 8:31 pm #168933Or…would someone writhing in their sleep and yelling cause chaos?
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December 9, 2023 at 8:32 pm #168934December 9, 2023 at 8:34 pm #168937We better have charries who can swim… professionally… across an OCEAN.
Just a slight problem…no big deal…water’s not dangerous, right? I mean we drink it…they’ll be fine…XD
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December 9, 2023 at 8:36 pm #168938Or…would someone writhing in their sleep and yelling cause chaos?
Why I mention this is that when Nahim has a nightmare, it usually includes his worst enemies, and that’s how it usually ends.
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December 9, 2023 at 8:38 pm #168939I also have my character Silas (Carrie’s twin brother), in hiding. She’s probably going to attack him cause she’s currently super angry at him and think he’s an enemy. Idk what I’m gonna do about that yet. I could just take him out of the RP since he hasn’t done anything. Lol.
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
December 9, 2023 at 9:25 pm #168960Yeah! It’s no big deal.
Just water. It’s not like sharks exists or anything! So… Lol
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December 9, 2023 at 9:42 pm #168961Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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@jonas @beth-torres @rae @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer
KEEP THE IDEA I LOVE THIS RP ITS THE BEST THING I’VE EVER SEEN
There are water dragons, right? 👉wooden boat on the middle of the ocean… and then…
Ok it just makes me think of a Calvin and Hobbes: first there was nothing… and then there was CALVIN
First, there was a wooden ship on an ocean… and then… there was FIREFACE
Such a vivid image
Ok time to respond to everything
(I have a dragon system of my own if you REALLY want chaos (and more characters can fall from the sky)
((or Goblins invade))yeah probably not that (I said Colesco and Callipsa would come again, right? And Styx is still at large…))But jonas, I understand your concern. But a week of a dead RP does not make a dead RP. Once people stop checking it, then it’s dead. People were still checking the RP (commenting on how dead it was, ironically), and I was actually looking forward to responding to the stuff on here, just didn’t have a whole lot of time this week
and rae unless I am mistaken this is what is going on here:
Katonia
Brian stepped back. “I think, Rocky, you mean ‘critters’, not ‘critter’.” Six shapes stepped out from the shadows. Three four-legged ones and three two-legged ones.
“Look to yer elk, we can’t take ’em all!” Rocky warned.
I looked. Just in time to see the last one snap its rope in terror and take to flight. “Got any of those warm dogs to throw them?” I suggested.
The things, for I had no idea what they were, advanced, snarling.
Rocky pulled his guns. “On my word, run. I’ll hold ’em.”
Brian drew his sword. “No way, no how. We both stand here. Kate runs.”
Well, of course I wouldn’t stand for that. “I’ll stay, thank you very much. You can’t die on me that easy, sucker.”
Rocky puffed his moustache. “Very purty language, princess. Where was you raised, again?”
One of the creatures cocked its head in confusion.
“Ok, ok.” Brian crouched lower. “We all run. Ready?”
“Fine. On your word, lover-boy.”
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rae I’m not exactly sure what the things are. If you would please kindly clarify the situation, I think my train of thought was changed to the underground in London by mistake.
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Nivlaco
The giant’s eyes crinkled around the corners, and he smiled through his beard. “Name’s Nivlaco, but you can call me Nico. Don’t worry, I’m a friendly giant. One of the last ones, in fact. I hear there are dragons that need slaying, and magic stones that need getting. I think I can help.”
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to clarify, he’s about the height of the giants in the Bible (goliath). But in medieval literature, heights and sizes were never specified, just sort of implied. They also contradicted a lot. The concept of “don’t let the truth get in the way of a good story”.
December 9, 2023 at 10:24 pm #168964@jonas @rae @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge @beth-torres @anyone-I-missed
I’m a little late to the party, but there’s a few things I’d like to add.
First, and least important, my younger brother will eat butter by itself. He’ll literally collect those little butter packets and pop them in his mouth.
Anyway, now that I’ve made that clear lol, let’s move on to more serious matters… this RP. If this RP ends and a new one is started, I don’t think I will be participating in the new one, since Kari isn’t an extremely valuable asset to the team (aside from possibly being able to rescue drowning persons). However, if this one continues, I’m sticking around. And since it seems like that’s the conclusion we’ve arrived at, I’m going to suggest this: perhaps it would help if we brainstormed a little and came up with some more ideas of things that could happen, plot twists. We have a vague idea of the goal, to defeat the dragons, but I think coming up with some specific ideas based upon the different settings, might give some more motivation to spur this RP on.
Also, I almost forgot the elk existed!
K, I’m going to bed now.
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December 9, 2023 at 10:58 pm #168965I’m sooooooo sorry!
I was not clear, four-legged are the elk, two-legged are the people (I forgot about Kate, oops). The roar is the mormaka. Idk what thoughts were coursing through my brain, that rp does not even sound like me.
Sorry.
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December 10, 2023 at 7:53 am #168973I agree. I was thinking we should come up with some other obstacles for them, unrelated to their main goal.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 10, 2023 at 7:59 am #168976Exactly! I’m always great at coming up with an overarching plot, but when it comes down to smaller plot twists and conflicts along the way, that’s where I struggle, and often where my stories stall.
Which characters are left in the story at this point?
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