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December 5, 2023 at 10:32 am #168388
Yes, I agree.
True, but we’re not talking normal fantasy, since normal fantasy can portray Black magic as good. We are talking godly fantasy. In godly fantasy, we must make the distinction from Darkness and Light, Hope and Despair, Love, and Hate. God, and the world.
Yeah, that’s where rule 2 comes in.
I believe you think I am attacking you, and your sister. I believe you think I think you are using Black magic in your writing the wrong way. No. I’m saying step careful. And then I proceed to get in a debate on why you should step careful, or more carefully.
Alright then. I’ll admit I was feeling a bit attacked, but that’s my problem. Thanks for your concern. I agree that we should be careful, but I have thought carefully about this before.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 5, 2023 at 10:40 am #168391I’ll admit I was feeling a bit attacked, but that’s my problem.
It’s not. Believe me, I have a way of sounding more like I’m trying to attack someone more than warn them. it happens in real life with even my best friends, too.
"You need French Toast."
December 5, 2023 at 10:46 am #168392Well, it’s alright. 🙂
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 5, 2023 at 12:27 pm #168397December 5, 2023 at 12:34 pm #168399I just realized I vanished without a word 😅 sorry, I didn’t mean to disappear. I was struggling translating my thoughts into words, and I guess I just never replied. Sorry about that.
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
December 5, 2023 at 1:21 pm #168403Anyway, you could have Zahlin come. Idk what the nature of his sword is, but if it’s anything like Conviction and Bloodsong, it would be able to block Vethe’s. Otherwise, I can send Ellis or Kate.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 5, 2023 at 4:23 pm #168436@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
Well, I’m here now, but it looks like the excitement died down lol.
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December 5, 2023 at 6:42 pm #168449Apparently Nahim just died, since no one came to stop Vethe. XD
"You need French Toast."
December 5, 2023 at 6:43 pm #168450December 5, 2023 at 8:03 pm #168461Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Enter: Nico (full name Nivlaco)
He’s one of the few good giants. Most are evil (think “fee fie foe fum”), but not Nico. He’s traveling buddies with The Cat, the closest thing you can get to a best friend to The Cat. He’s about 9 feet tall, with a disproportionately muscular and large upper body. He carries a huge tower shield which is big enough for him to stand behind and be hidden completely. He also carries an iron broadsword as big as a full-grown man. He also has a long straight beard that mingles with his long straight hair.
Nico
The wicked-looking sword wielder crouched behind the rock, waiting for her unsuspecting prey.
But she failed to realize that the hunter had become the hunted.
Nico brought the pommel of his enormous broadsword down with tremendous force. To Nico, it felt like a light tapping. The clang of leather-covered bronze connecting with flesh and bone rang out like a church’s bell. The female villain crumpled.
Nico deftly caught her as she fell, checking for injuries or consciousness. Finding neither, he laid her down, and picked up her strange blade between his thumb and forefinger. He inspected it as one inspects some interesting flower one finds in the meadow. It glowed and flickered dimly.
The rescued boy looked on in stark amazement. The giant noticed him, and after a moment’s consideration, presented the sword, hilt-first, to him.
“Sixth sense malfunction,” he stated simply, as if that was all the explanation that was needed.
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An illustration:
I know I butchered the girl’s picture, I just don’t know what she looks like and this is how I imagined her. It also took me like 10 minutes so not a high-effort drawing. (for some reason, the more time I put into a drawing, the worse it becomes 🫲🫤🫱
December 5, 2023 at 8:09 pm #168462The only thing I know about Vethe’s appearance is that she has white hair.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 5, 2023 at 8:16 pm #168463Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Rats.
December 5, 2023 at 8:20 pm #168466Nahim
Nahim took the hilt. “I beg to ask, sir, what is your name and what is that you said?”
"You need French Toast."
December 5, 2023 at 8:22 pm #168467Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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@rae gtg finish later sry
December 6, 2023 at 6:24 pm #168607Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Nico
The huge man shrugged. “Sixth sense malfunction. She never saw it coming.
“Name’s Nivlaco, Champion of the King’s Army. My allies call me Nico. My enemies…” he looked at the crumpled girl, “never call me anything.” Nico sheathed his sword. “And now, since I am no longer hidden, I should reveal myself to the others.”
Nico stepped out from behind the rock into the circle of firelight. He sat down silently, putting his shield across his knees.
The Cat walked haughtily over, climbed onto the shield, and was lifted onto Nico’s shoulder by his hand. She sat, surveying the rest of the lesser intelligences.
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RAE, I think you were the one who had the “critter” that was going to attack my other characters. Or was that @highscribeofaetherium ? @savannah_grace2009 ? I’m not sure. Whoever it is, you can start the RP from the animal’s perspective 🙂🤜🤛🙂
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