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December 4, 2023 at 5:37 pm #168281
Oh no, you breached the gravity question! None of our other Celestians have noticed the differences in gravity, and I don’t think their planets are all the same size…
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š Appreciator of BooksDecember 4, 2023 at 5:39 pm #168283December 4, 2023 at 5:58 pm #168286Vethe would notice it more, since sheās used to little or no gravity.
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
December 4, 2023 at 6:02 pm #168287I guess that works.
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š Appreciator of BooksDecember 4, 2023 at 6:15 pm #168295Wow. I really did forget about Marcurious. So I should probably RP him, huh? lol
MarcuriousĀ
Words couldn’t describe the relief he felt when Ottoline opened her eyes. He immediately took her in his arms. “Thank you,” he said to Snake. “You good, sis?” He asked and helped her to a sitting position.
“Yeah,” she said, looking at the armband, then at Snake. “How long do I have to keep this on for?”
Lukas&Livia
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Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333December 4, 2023 at 6:21 pm #168296Snake
āWell, after Snake knocked you off your elk, Carrie stabbed the creature controlling him, and then he gave you that magic armband thing. He could have mentioned having it soonerāitās kind of useful!ā explained the guy with the sword–Ellis, was it?
“I had forgotten it was there.” Snake admitted. “I made for someone…..let’s just say someone I’d rather not talk about.”
“How long do I have to keep this on for?” asked the girl who was formerly unconscious. Her brother stood next to her.
“Until you feel completely healed.” Snake explained. “It’s meant to be fast. I made it for healing battle injuries–trust me, my kind can inflict nasty wounds on each other.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 4, 2023 at 6:25 pm #168298Marcurious
“Trust me, my kind can inflict nasty wounds on each other.”
“I believe it,” he muttered under his breath. Ottoline raised an eyebrow, and flashed him a look that saidĀ shut up before you offend someone!Ā Marcurious shrugged.
Ottoline
“How do I know if I’m completely healed?” she asked. “I might feel fine, but I could be hurt still.”
Lukas&Livia
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Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333December 4, 2023 at 6:55 pm #168310Snake
“I can believe it,” the girl’s brother muttered. She glared at him before turning to Snake. “How do I know if I’m completely healed? I might feel fine but be hurt still.”
“I think I made it so that it’ll go back to its original size when you don’t need it.” he told her. “I think. Then you’ll know you can give it back to me.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 4, 2023 at 9:51 pm #168324Nahim
The green light from his sword reflected off a blade of metal swinging at him. He blocked it, though he could have just let it hit his breastplate.Ā Great, another duel. And without my helmet too.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully š)December 4, 2023 at 10:40 pm #168329XD thanks for tagging me, but I left the roleplay awhile ago lol, it’s too fast pace for me to keep up with
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 5, 2023 at 7:30 am #168335Iām having trouble writing an RP for Vethe, because Iām having a hard time figuring out how to not make her kill Nahim instantly. He doesnāt know that her sword can go through his and his armor, so sheād kill him in mere seconds, despite Nahim likely having more pure skill.
So anyways, I have no idea what to do š¤·āāļøAny noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
December 5, 2023 at 7:46 am #168337Explain Vethe’s sword again, please. I can’t keep up with your strange swords.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully š)December 5, 2023 at 7:49 am #168338Yeah, we have way to many swords XD
Vetheās sword can phase through different planes of reality, so she could shift it into the spiritual plane and let it pass through Nahimās sword and armor until it was right through his chest, and then shift it back to the physical plane and wallah! Nahim has a gaping hole in his chest!
I think I need to nerf this thing š
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
December 5, 2023 at 7:56 am #168339So the correct wording of above post would be she can goĀ aroundĀ his sword and armor. Your wording caused honestly, a little bit of hot-headed me to appear. Mainly cuz Mithaln can only be cleaved under the correct conditions. Otherwise, it’s next to impossible.
Also, this is just me, but I would step careful giving a protagonist that type of sword. I consider a sword going into the spiritual world as Black magic. As Vethe is evil, it’s okay, but IĀ personallyĀ wouldn’t give a supposed good person that.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully š)December 5, 2023 at 7:58 am #168341You could have Vethe just…knock him out again? Or Zahlin shows up to save Nahim.
"You need French Toast."
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