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December 3, 2023 at 11:29 am #167977
There are so many typos in that. Sorry.
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"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
December 3, 2023 at 11:31 am #167980I didnβt notice any!
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π Appreciator of BooksDecember 3, 2023 at 11:31 am #167981So what would happen after that? Would Snake just snap out of it, or pass out?
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π Appreciator of BooksDecember 3, 2023 at 12:51 pm #167996I also have another character I’ve wanted to add. I will have to RP him in a little bit, and if it doesn’t make sense with the story then we can take him out of it.
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
December 3, 2023 at 12:58 pm #167997That should be fine. Calyhuge just added one. We can pretend that they were already there before they left.
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π Appreciator of BooksDecember 3, 2023 at 3:16 pm #168018December 3, 2023 at 4:40 pm #168041@jonas yeah I think he’ll just be knocked out.
I’ll write an RP for him in a sec.
@acancello thanks!Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 3, 2023 at 5:18 pm #168060@savannah_grace2009 @calyhuge @beth-torres @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @highscribeofaetherium @jonas
Snake
What’s thisssss? Small furry thingy?
The thing had noticed someone. The fire-breathing cat?
We need to—-AAAAGHHSHHSSSHH!!! FLAMES!
After that, it really screamed.
Snake screamed too, clutching his hand to the side of his head as the thing’s mental cloudiness sliced through his mind.
Thoughts…..fading…..why….
He hit the floor and slipped into blackness.
*later* (preferably not too much later)
Snake’s eyes shot open. He sat up, raising his clawed hands in surrender as several of them pointed weapons at him. “It’s me, don’t worry.” he said. “Where’s the creature? Did someone kill it?”
“Well, I killed something.” came the voice of the girl with the cat (he doesn’t remember her name lol).
“Thanks.” Snake shook his head. Judging from the headache he had, that creature’s venom was still messing with his brain, but it could no longer control him. “I didn’t…kill anyone while that thing had me, right?”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 3, 2023 at 5:23 pm #168066Ellis
Ellis slammed his sword back into its sheath, glancing around. Ottoline was slumped limply on the ground. “You better hope not.” He glowered at Snake, still harboring some ill-feeling even though he knew it wasn’t the hybrid’s fault.
He turned and walked towards Ottoline to see if she was alive.
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π Appreciator of BooksDecember 3, 2023 at 5:40 pm #168072Here’s an RP for the character I wanted to add (he’s Carrie’s twin, she really doesn’t like him for certain reasons).
I’ll write his in third person.
SilasΒ
Carrie would be infuriated if he told her that he was there. Silas had been following the group of people since they’d left the castle, from a far distance, staying out of sight. He didn’t know where he was, or why he was there. The only thing he knew was he could ask Carrie, but that wouldn’t end well. He went to make amends with Carrie before they came into this land, but she’d attacked him before he could say a word, most likley she’d thought he had some backup and went straight to attack. How could he blame her?
He had a Letter Stone in his backpack, a shard that could send messages through a certain tap code. Carrie and him used to have ones that were connected. Did she still have it? It wouldn’t hurt to try, but once he’d sent the message out, he couldn’t reverse it. The stone would glow until Carrie was ready to see the code sent.Β He could say he was there but not give an exact location. He didn’t want Carrie to knock him out or break his nose again.
Silas took the stone out of his backpack, and slowly, hesitantly sent the code, I need to talk to you for just two seconds. I know where you are.Β
The words didn’t sound as nice as he’d intended, they sounded very suspicious. But it was already sent out.
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
December 3, 2023 at 5:44 pm #168075@jonas ha ha, now he’s gonna feel terrible
Snake
“You better hope not.” One of them slid his sword back into its sheath and went to check on someone who was lying on the floor.
Oh, no,Β Snake thought, walking over. “I caused this?” he asked. A few of them nodded.
He dug in the various pockets on his belts for something he was sure was in there.
There–the small, glittering armband he’d made for…..
Ugh, there was no point in thinking about that. She was a large amount of both space and time away.
This person needed it more than that dragon did.
He clipped it around the girl’s arm and tapped it twice. It shrunk from being dragon-sized to human-sized.
The others peered at it. “Remember, I have a form of magic too.” he said. “This little trinket should heal her wounds in a minute or two. It was the least I could do for her.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 3, 2023 at 5:45 pm #168076Since we haven’t seen him use his powers anywhere yet I felt like this was a good place for it, you can retcon it out if you want someone else to heal her or something. I just wanted something fairly quick so we can get back to our main quest.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
December 3, 2023 at 5:47 pm #168077No, that’s fine!
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π Appreciator of BooksDecember 3, 2023 at 6:13 pm #168083Nahim
Crisis after crisis, injury after injury. This was to much like all-out war than just a perilous quest. He looked into Ottoline’s face, he hated seeing others hurt.
He hated war.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully π)December 3, 2023 at 7:11 pm #168125I think Nahim still has his headache, right? He got a severe concussion, rested but is not resting, and never submitted himself to be healed. Yeah, he’s got a headache.
BTW, I purposefully created that plot tool with Fennin freaking out and thinking Lillen’s old enemies had entered Lillen. If the stakes don’t appear high enough, and we want more chaos, I shall use it if you want.
"You need French Toast."
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